2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写课件

读后续写一、评分原则（一）续写要求读后续写包括阅读和写作两个阶段。阅读部分提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150词左右）。（二）考查范围读后续写要求将所给短文发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文，语言运用要准确、丰富。做到行文流畅，可通过照应、替代、关联词、词汇复现等方法实现形式上的衔接和连贯，而隐形的意义上的连贯则通过对主题的把握来实现，围绕所给短文确定的主题展开续写，才能保证续写部分与所给短文意义上的连贯和完整。（三）评阅内容1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2.创造了丰富合理的内容，富于逻辑性，续写完整，表达流畅，与原文情境融合度高；3.词汇与语法的多样性，恰当的词汇和语法结构，逻辑性强，语法错误很少，完全不影响理解；4.自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间的衔接词，全文结构清晰，前后呼应全文连贯。（四）注意事项1.词数少于120的，酌情扣分；2.书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分；3.单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。给分范围和要求阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Thatnight,Iquarreledwithmymother,thenstormedoutofthehouse.Whileontheroad,IrememberedthatIdidnothaveanymoneyinmypocket,Ididnoteventakemycellphonewithmetomakeacallhome.Atthesametime,Iwentthroughanoodleshop,andIsuddenlyfeltveryhungry.Iwishedforabowlofnoodles,butIhadnomoney!Thesellersawmestandingbeforethecounterandasked,"Heylittlegirl,youwanttoeatabowl?”"But

…butIdonotcarrymoney…"Ishylyreplied."Okay,I'lltreatyou."thesellersaid,"comein,Iwillcookyouabowl.”Afewminuteslatertheownerbroughtmeasteamingbowlofnoodles.Aftereatingsomepieces,Icried."Whatisit?"Heasked."Nothing.Iamjusttouchedbyyourkindness!"IsaidasIwipedmytears."Evenastrangeronthestreetgivesmeabowlofnoodles,andmymother,afteraquarrel,chasedmeoutofthehouse.Sheiscruel!!"Thesellersighed,"Girl,whydidyouthinkso?Thinkagain.Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyoufeltthatway.Yourmotherhasbeentakingcareofyousinceyouwerelittle,whywereyounotgratefulandwhydidyouhurtyourmom?"Iwasreallysurprisedafterhearingthat.WhydidInotthinkofthat?

Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,andmymotherhasraisedmesinceIwaslittleandIhaveneverfeltso,notevenalittle.Paragraph1:Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind.

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WhenIwasill,shewasalwaystheonetakingcareofme.WhenIhadtroublewithmystudy,sheneverlostfaithinmeandencouragedmetokeepgoing.WhenIarrivedhomeduringtheweekend,shealwayspreparedmyfavoritefood.Allherkindnesscamebacktome.Ishouldbegratefulforallshehaddoneforme.IrealizedIshouldgobackhomeimmediatelyandsaysorrytomymother.Paragraph2:

Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.Shemusthavebeenlookingformeeverywhere.Iwasreadyforherangerandshouts.However,beforeIcouldapologize,mymothersawmeandgentlysaid,“Ohhoney,thankGodyou’reback！Comeinside.Youareprobablyveryhungry.Icookedyourfavoritenoodles,comeandeatwhiletheyarestillhot...”Nolongerabletocontrolmyself,Icriedinherarms.“I’msorry,mom.Pleaseforgiveme.”Iwhisperedtoherthroughtears,extremelyashamedofmyself.National

Fitness

As

a

saying

goes,

"Life

lies

in

movement.

"

So

national

fitness

has

far-reaching

significance.

Onlywhenwehave

a

strong

body

can

we

lead

a

healthy

life

and

serve

the

society.

It

pays

to

take

immediate

action.

First

of

all,

we

can

draw

up

a

plan

to

exercise

regularly.

Next,

we

can

begin

with

jogging

and

hiking,

which,

of

course,

benefit

our

health

a

lot.

Last

but

not

least,

get

more

involved

inphysical

activities

around

us.

Remember,

what

we

do

right

now

will

make

a

difference

in

the

future.

Let’swork

out

together!谚语倒装主语从句定语从句David

stood

in

front

of

the

door

and

opened

it

hurriedly.

He

turned

on

the

lights

without

hesitation.

Everything

was

in

order.

The

floor

was

clean.

The

sofa

was

neat.

It

seemed

nothing

special.

David

pushed

allthe

doors

and

was

eager

to

look

for

his

mother.

Still,

he

couldn’t

find

her

anywhere.

There

was

no

doubt

thathis

mother

was

not

at

home

right

now.

It

was

hard

for

him

to

control

his

nervous

emotion.

He

ran

to

the

telephone

and

began

to

make

a

phone

call

to

his

mother.

Suddenly,

there

was

a

knock

on

the

door

and

came

a

familiar

voice.

It

was

his

mother.

He

hurried

to

thedoor

and

opened

it

excitedly

with

a

tremendous

sense

of

relief.

His

mother

wore

a

big

smile,

saying,

I

justwant

you

to

be

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