读后续写爱心故事类：圣诞节奇迹 高三英语复习写作专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习爱心故事——圣诞节的奇迹1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文RightbeforeThanksgiving,Iprayed,“LordpleasemakemeablessingtoothersasSanta”.AweeklaterasmyhusbandandIwerepreparingforthisyear’sSantavisitswithmyMrs.Clausbasket,wediscoveredalettertoSantafromayoungmothernamedMary,whowasillandwasaskingiftherewasaSantaandifmiraclesdidhappenthatheryoungchildrenwouldhaveagoodChristmasbecauseshewastoldbydoctorsthatitcouldbeherlast.Initwashername,phonenumberandaddress.ItriedtomakecontactwithMary,buthowevermanytimesItried,Ihadnoluckingettingsomeonetoanswerthephone.OneweekbeforeChristmas,Idecidedtomakeacallonemoretime.Thistimeawomanansweredthephone.IdiscoveredthatitwasMary’smother.ShefirstsaidthatnoonelivedtherebythenameofMary.Ihadtwochoices:tothankherandhanguporkeeptrying.IdecidedtocontinueandexplainedthatIwasMrs.ClausandthatwehadfoundaletterwrittentoSantabyMaryatthistelephonenumber,expressingthedesiretohelpherkids.ShewasinshockandtoldmethatMaryhadhadanoperationtwoweeksbefore.4续写原文Themotherstartedcryingaswecontinuedtalking.Intheend,shesaidshewouldaskMarytocallmebackandwewouldtalkmore.Thenextday,aspromised,IreceivedaphonecallfromMary.Wetalkedaboutherchildren.Shegavemetheirnames,ages,andalittleaboutthem.ItoldherthatwewantedtofulfillherwishesandmakeherdreamcometruethisChristmastohelpherfamily.ShecriedandIdidtooaswespoke.Beforehangingup,shesaidthatshewashappythatherchildrenwouldhaveagoodChristmas.Inthefollowingdays,wewerebusymakingpreparations.Muchtoourdelight,everythingwasreadyjustbeforetheChristmasEve.Wewaitedeagerlyforthedaybreak.5段首句Paragraph1:OnChristmasmorning,wearrivedatMary’shome.Paragraph2:Thetimewentbyquicklyanditwastimetosaygoodbye.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在感恩节前夕，作者和丈夫拿着圣诞夫人篮子为今年的圣诞老人来访做准备时，他们发现了一封写给圣诞老人的信，是一位名叫玛丽的生病的年轻母亲写的，问是否有圣诞老人，是否真的有奇迹发生，为了帮助她的孩子们将度过一个愉快的圣诞节，我们一切都准备好了，急切地等待着黎明到来的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：OnChristmasmorning,wearrivedatMary’shome.由第一段首句内容“在圣诞节早上，我们到了玛丽家。”可知，第一段可描写作者见到玛丽，给她和孩子带来惊喜的经过。10续写思路分析Para2:Thetimewentbyquicklyanditwastimetosaygoodbye.由第二段首句内容“时间过得真快，到了说再见的时候了。”可知，第二段可描写作者帮助一位母亲实现了她的愿望后要离开，并意识到成为别人的圣诞老人就是圣诞节的意义所在。11续写思路分析续写线索相见——帮助——感谢——分别——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①让位于：givewayto/change/yield②.实现：fulfill/achieve/realize③.帮助：aid/dosomebodyafavor情绪类①.感谢：showherappreciation/showhergratitude/begrateful/thank②.热切地：eagerly/earnestly13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Havingreceivedpresentsfromus,theyeagerlyunwrappedthem,initialshynessgivingwaytoutterdelight.(运用现在分词作状语)[高分句型2].IwashappythatIhelpedamotherfulfillherwishesandrealizedthatbeingSantaforothersiswhatChristmasisallabout.(运用了that引导宾语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现OnChristmasmorning,wearrivedatMary’shome.Itwasadimlylithome,smallandshabby,withlittlefurnitureinit.“MerryChristmas!”wesaidinunisonaswewalkedintothehome.Ayoungfrail-lookingmothercameup,alookofconfusiononherface.Immediately,weintroducedourselves.Sheheldbackherurgetocryandmanagedasmile.Herchildren,shyaroundstrangers,justhidbehindtheirmotherandpeekedfromtimetotime.Havingreceivedpresentsfromus,theyeagerlyunwrappedthem,initialshynessgivingwaytoutterdelight.Thewholefamilythankedussincerely.Afterwards,wehadfuntogethercelebratingChristmas.16范文呈现Thetimewentbyquicklyanditwastimetosaygoodbye.Thechildrenwerenowsoattachedtousthattheyfollowedusoutofthehome.Wecroucheddown,heldtheirhands,andpulledthemintoourarms.Outofexpectations,theyplantedaffectionatekissesonourforeheads.Theirmotherstoodatthedoor,waving,tearsofhappinesswellingupinhereyes.Onthewaybackhome,Itouchedwherethekisslayandfeltasenseofwarmthsurgingthroughme.IwashappythatIhelpedamotherfulfillherwishesandrealizedthatbeingSantaforothersiswhatChristmasisallabout.17范文译文圣诞节的早晨，我们到达了玛丽的家。这是一个灯光昏暗的家，又小又破旧，里面几乎没有家具。“圣诞快乐！”我们走进家时齐声说道。一位年轻体弱的母亲走了过来，脸上露出困惑的表情。我们立即做了自我介绍。她抑制住了哭的冲动，勉强笑了笑。她的孩子们在陌生人面前很害羞，只是躲在母亲身后，不时地偷看。收到我们的礼物后，他们急切地打开它们，最初的害羞让位于由衷的喜悦。全家人都衷心感谢我们。之后，我们一起庆祝圣诞节玩得很开心。18范文译文时间过得很快，该说再见了。孩子们现在非常依恋我们，他们跟着我们走出了家。我们蹲下来，握