第5课时　体裁类比突破(5)-演讲稿Vs倡议书

第5课时体裁类比突破(5)——演讲稿

倡议书一、“演讲稿”写作增分指导[写作题目](2021·全国乙卷)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1．分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。BesmartonlinelearnersGoodmorning,everyone，It'sagreathonourformetostandhereandaddressmyspeechtitled“Besmartonlinelearners”．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]BesmartonlinelearnersGoodmorning,everyone，It'sagreathonourformetostandhereandaddressmyspeechtitled“Besmartonlinelearners”．Onlinelearningisincreasinglyimportantrecently.However,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Obviously,onlinelearningallowsustolearnatanytimewhereverweare.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnefficiently.Butstaringatthescreenlongisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon'thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.Thenhowtobesmartonlinelearners?First,takeashortbreakwiselywhennecessary.Second,makingascheduleisamust.Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.Thanksforyourlistening!学亮点写法1．学语言风格

演讲稿具有口语特点，要尽量使用简短的句子和口语化的语言，流畅表达思想。同时，还要注重语言的感染力，可使用祈使句、感叹句、倒装句、强调句等进行感情强化。本篇演讲稿以简短句子为主，逻辑条理清楚，语言表达流畅。同时，运用了祈使句First,takeashort...Second,makinga...与倒装句Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwe...来增加演讲的“鼓动”性。2．学高级表达(1)使用高级词汇和词块，如：increasingly,obviously,absorb,efficiently,beharmfulto,worsestill,interactwith,inconclusion等。(2)准确运用高级句式，如：让步状语从句whereverweare；祈使句和状语从句的省略takeashortbreakwiselywhennecessary...；部分倒装Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwe...等，这些也是文章的亮点之处。3．学精彩结尾

结尾使用Inconclusion，并结合以only加状语bybeing...开头的倒装结构，简洁有力地总结了自己的演讲，最后致谢听众。[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]Ⅰ.开头部分：明确演讲主题(开门见山，简洁明了)1．Ladiesandgentlemen,Iamgladtohaveachancetogettogetherwith...Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis...2．Boysandgirls，Ifeelgreatlyhonouredtohaveachancetobewith...Today,I'dliketosharemyideason...3．Goodmorningeverybody!It'smyhonourtospeakhere,andIamverygladtosharemytopicwithyou.ThentodayI'dliketotalksomethingabout...4．Honourablejudges,distinguishedguests,ladiesandgentlemen,goodevening!Ifeelreallyhonouredtostandhereandmakeaspeechtoday.I'mgoingtolooktogetherwithyouinto...5．Iamgladtogiveyouawarmwelcomeonbehalfofourschool.6．Thankyouforyouracceptingourinvitationtocometo...7．Ladiesandgentlemen/Boysandgirls,I'm...I'mgreatlyhonouredtospeakhereonbehalfofmyschool.I'mgoingtotalkabout...Ⅱ.主体部分：展开主题(分析问题，展开论述，提出解决方法)1．Firstly,...Secondly,...Inaddition,...Lastbutnotleast,...2．Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards...3．AsfarasI'mconcerned，ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,...Foranother,...What'smore...4．Ithinkitimportant/necessary/difficult/convenient/possible/likelyforsb.todosth.5．Itplaysanincreasinglyimportantrole/partinourlife.6．Itmakesitpossibleforusstudentstogetourselvesfullydeveloped.7．Withtherapidgrowthof...,...have/hasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.8．WhatIwanttostress/emphasizeis.../Aboveall/Mostimportantofall,/Whatreallymatters/countsis.../Chancesarethat...Ⅲ.结尾部分：总结演讲(简要总结，表达期望或感谢)1．Inconclusion,onlyby...canwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.2．Tosumup...have/hasaprofoundinfluenceoneveryone.Therefore,wemust...3．OK,thankyouforlistening.That'sall./That'sall.Thankyou!4．Comeonandjoinus!5．Thanksforyourattention.6．Wishyouanunforgettabletimehere!Thankyou.7．Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogress,showabetterperformanceinyourstudy,andobtainabrighterfuture.8．Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfullifehere.[建写作模型·展规范形体]Goodmorning,everyone!It'ssonicetoseeallofyouhere.I'mveryhonouredtodaytohavetheopportunitytosharemyopinionson

(演讲主题)．Asisknowntoall,

(现象)．However,thereare(问题).Inmyopinion,itisaproblemabout

(分析问题)．Howcanwesolveitthen?AsfarasI'mconcerned,thefollowingmethodiseffective.Thatis

(解决方法)．Foronething,

(理由一).Foranother,(理由二)．What'smore,

(理由三)．Therefore,let'staketheresponsibilityto

(号召行动)．Comeonandputitintoaction.Thanksforlistening.二、“倡议书”写作增分指导[写作题目](2022·全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1．海洋的重要性；2．保护海洋的倡议。注意：1．词数100左右；2．题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.Itisadaytoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectingtheoceanswhicharevitaltohumanbeings.Coveringabout71%oftheEarth'ssurface,theoceanscanregulatetheclimateandmakeitlivableforhumans.Inaddition,theoceansproduceoverhalfoftheworld'soxygenandarehometoalargevarietyofsealife.Theoceansaresoimportantthatweshouldprotectthemforourfuturegenerations.Asstudents,wecantakepartbydoingsmallthings,suchascollectinggarbageontheseashoreoravoidingpouringwastewaterintotheoceans.Ouroceansarebeingbadlypollutedandit'shightimewetookaction.Onlybyworkingtogethercanweprotectandrestoreourpreciousoceans.学亮点写法1．学高级表达(1)使用高级词汇和词块，如：raisepeople'sawarenessof，bevitalto,regulate,behometo,alargevarietyof,pouring...into...等。(2)准确运用高级句式，如：定语从句whicharevitaltohumanbeings；非谓语动词短语作状语Coveringabout71%...；结果状语从句...soimportantthat...；虚拟语气it'shightimewetookaction；倒装句Onlybyworkingtogethercanwe...等。2．学精彩结尾

本文结尾部分arebeingbadlypolluted形象描述了海洋正在被污染；it'shightimewetookaction简洁有力地呼吁大家行动起来；Onlybyworkingtogethercanwe...特别强调只有大家共同努力才能拯救海洋。3．学行文逻辑

首段中第二句的主语It代替首句中的WorldOceansDay，从而使两句自然衔接；whicharevitaltohumanbeings...引出第二段内容。第二段中Inaddition连接了海洋两方面的重要性。第三段的第一句话起到承上启下作用。尾段说明现状，发出呼吁，与标题和首段内容相呼应。总之，此倡议书上下文衔接紧密，全文逻辑连贯。

[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]Ⅰ.开头部分：发出倡议的背景、原因和目的1．Nowadays/Currently/Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblem...(现象),whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.2．Inorderto...,I'dliketocallyourattentiontotheimportanceof.../To...,Isincerelyappealto/callonsb.todo...3．Istronglyadvocatethatsb.(should)do...4．With/Forthepurposeof...，I'dliketocallyourattentiontotheimportanceof...5．Recently,thereexistsaproblem/phenomenonthat...，whichleadstomanybadeffects.Soit's(high)timethatwedid/shoulddo...6．Inorderto...，allofusaresupposedtodoasfollows.7．Iamwritingthislettertocalloneveryonetopayattentionto...Ⅱ.主体部分：倡议的具体内容和要求1．Wearesupposed/required/expectedtodo.../Wehadbetterdo/oughttodo...2．Itissuggested/advisedthat.../It'sagoodchoicetodo.../Itisadvisabletodo.../Itwouldbewiseif.../It'sofgreatimportance/significancetodo...3．Asstudents,wecantakepartbydoingsmallthings,suchas...4．Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentodo.../Itisurgentthatsomestrongmeasuresshouldbeadoptedtosolvetheproblem.5．Wecansaveourplanetthroughmanyways,suchas...6．Allthesehavesoundedanalarmtohumanbeings,soitishightimethatwejoined/shouldjoineffortsto...7．Inordertomakeagoodnetworkenvironment,Ihopeeveryonecan...8．Ithinkitnecessarytolaystresson...First,...Second,...Third,...9．Effectivemeasuresshouldbeadoptedbeforethingsgetworse.Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...10．Withtheaimof...,wearesupposedtocarryoutaseriesofmeasures.Foronething,...Foranother,...Ⅲ.结尾部分：倡议者的决心和希望1．Let'sjointogethertofight...2．Let'stakeresponsibilityforourselvesandothers.3．Evenasmallactionismeaningfulto.../Let'stakeactionnow!4．Let'smakeeveryeffort/sparenoefforttoovercomethedifficulties.5．Onlyifwetakeeffectivestepstodealwiththisproblemnowcanwe...6．Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeagreatsuccess.7．Let'sjoinhandsandtakeactionimmediately.8．Webelieveyourcontributionscanmakeadifference.9．Iamcertainthatremarkableresultswillbeachievedinthisrespect.10．Let'sjoinourhandsinfightingagainst...andmakeourplanetabetterplacetolivein.[建写作模型·展规范形体]Dear

，Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblem

(社会现象)．Asweal