2024年中考英语真题分类汇编（全国）（第一期）专题32 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（第01期）（解析版）

专题32书面表达考点4叙事描写类（第01期）（2024·山西·中考真题）随着全球互联互通，青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youthisatimeforfighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行，你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括：·yourideaaboutwhatyoungpeopleshouldbelike·oneofyourstoriesaboutfighting·themeaningoffighting要求：1．词数不少于80词；2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asyoungpeople,weshouldbebrave,confidentandcreative,butthemostimportantthingistobewillingtofight.Lastyear,IoftenmademistakeswhenIdidEnglishreadingexercises.Rememberingtheteacherhadevertoldusthemoreweread,thehigherourreadingabilitywouldbe,Idecidedtotry.IspentallmyfreetimeonEnglishreading.WheneverIread,Imadeeveryefforttounderstandthearticlesthoroughlyandwrotedownmyownunderstandingofthem.Gradually,Imadegreatprogressinreadingcomprehension.It’sfightingthatmakesusbetterandbetter.Fightingisthebrightestcolorofyouth.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，多种时态综合运用；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当补充细节。[写作步骤]第一步，阐述个人观点，认为青少年应该是什么样子的，具备什么样的品质；第二步，具体介绍个人的经历，阐述自己是如何奋斗的；第三步，表达个人感悟，阐述奋斗的意义。[亮点词汇]①bewillingtodosth愿意做某事②makemistakes犯错误③decidetodosth.决定做某事④spendsometimeonsth.花费时间做某事⑤makegreatprogressinsth.在某方面取得巨大进步[高分句型]①Lastyear,IoftenmademistakeswhenIdidEnglishreadingexercises.（when引导时间状语从句）②Rememberingtheteacherhadevertoldusthemoreweread,thehigherourreadingabilitywouldbe,Idecidedtotry.（the+比较级，the+比较级）③WheneverIread,Imadeeveryefforttounderstandthearticlesthoroughlyandwrotedownmyownunderstandingofthem.（whenever引导让步状语从句）（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校EnglishReadingClub正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’sStory（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。选择一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus为题，内容包括：1．你对这句话的理解；2．结合实际生活举例说明；3．你得到的启发。选择二：以Troubleisafriend为题，内容包括：1．你对这句话的理解；2．结合实际生活举例说明；3．你得到的启发。注意：1．词数：100左右；2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Title:Troubleisafriend AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.AndIthinktroubleisafriend.Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.InmyEnglishstudylastyear,mygrammarwasverybad.Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.Butthankstothehelpofmydeskmate,shehelpedmemakeagrammarstudyscheduleandhelpedmewithgrammareveryweek.AndIspentanhourstudyinggrammareveryday.Intheend,mygrammarimprovedgreatly.Inmyopinion,troubleisbad,butitsometimesmakesusbetter.Itremindsusnottogiveupwhenfacingdifficultiesandtofacethembravely.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。[亮点词汇]①thanksto多亏②helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事③inmyopinion在我看来[高分句型]①Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）②Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.（原因状语从句）（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。（4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。（5）你认为……参考词汇：盲人

blindman

徘徊

wander要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,WangHongsawanelderlyblindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronherwayhome.WangHongofferedtohelphimcrosstheroadaftercommunicatingwiththeoldman.Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WangHongtooktheoldmanacrosstheroadandsaidgoodbyetohim.IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①onherwayhome在她回家的路上②offertodosth主动提出做某事③communicatewith沟通④learnfrom向某人学习[高分句型]①Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.（when引导的时间状语从句）②IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.（省略that的宾语从句）4．（2024·四川自贡·中考真题）学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“APersonWhoChangesMeaLot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1.人物简介(外貌，性格等)；2.他/她改变你的事件。注意：1.词数80左右；2.短文标题已写好。APersonWhoChangesMeaLot____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文APersonWhoChangesMeaLotInthepastthreeyears,myEnglishteacherMrsXuhaveplayedanimportantroleinmylife.Shechangesmealot.Sheisofmediumheight.Shealwayshasasmileonherface.Sheiskindtous.WhenIwasaseventh-gradestudent,IwasweakinEnglish.IwasafraidofspeakingEnglishinfrontoftheclassmates.OurschoolheldanEnglishspeechcompetition.SheencouragedmetotakepartinitandgavemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Shegavemethestrengthtoovercomethedifficulty.Withherhelp,Ifinishedthespeechsuccessfullyandwonthethirdplace.Fromthenon,IbecameinterestedinEnglishandmadegreatprogress.Thanktoher,IrealizethatIshouldfacethedifficultiesbravely.AslongasIworkhard,Iwillsucceed.【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍改变自己的人是谁；

第二步，介绍她对自己的影响。

[亮点词汇]

①playarolein在……中扮演角色

②beofmediumheight中等身材③beweakin不擅长④beafraidofdoingsth害怕做某事⑤takepartin参加[高分句型]①SheencouragedmetotakepartinitandgavemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.（疑问词+动词不定式结构）②AslongasIworkhard,Iwillsucceed.（条件状语从句）5．（2024·四川达州·中考真题）赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“AnUnforgettableDay”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。内容提示：1.时间

2.地点

3.人物

4.事件

5.感受写作要求：1.内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥一至两点。2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。3.不少于90词（题目不计入总词数）。AnUnforgettableDay_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableDayAsthesayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”Inourdailylife,wewillmeetwithalotoftrouble.Soitisnecessaryforustohelpthosewhoareintrouble.Here’smyunforgettabledayofhelpingothers.MyclassmateJasonwasilllastweek.Hehadtobeinhospital,soItriedmybesttohelphim.YesterdaywasSaturday,andmyclassmatesandIwenttoseehimtogether.Wegavehimsomeflowers,becausefreshandbeautifulflowerscouldmakehimfeelgoodandhappy.What’smore,JasonaskedmesomequestionsaboutstudyandIbroughthimmynotebooks.Iwaspatienttoanswerhisquestionsallthetime.Ihopehecanbebettersoon.Ilikehelpingothers.Firstly,helpingothersmakesmehappy.Secondly,helpingothersisalsohelpingmyself.Allinall,ahelpfulpersoniswelcomedeverywhere.Iwilltrymybesttohelpothersinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“AnUnforgettableDay”为题，根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍那天的经历；第三步，表达感受。[亮点词汇]①introuble处困难中②What’smore此外③allthetime一直[高分句型]①Soitisnecessaryforustohelpthosewhoareintrouble.（who引导的定语从句）②Wegavehimsomeflowers,becausefreshandbeautifulflowerscouldmakehimfeelgoodandhappy.（because引导的原因状语从句）（2024·山东滨州·中考真题）生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.你珍惜什么；2.描述你的一次经历；3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworthvaluinginourdailylives._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworthvaluinginourdailylives.Letmetellastoryaboutme.Lastsummer,Iwantedanewbike.Butmyfamilywastoopoortoaffordit.Iwasverysadandupset.Afterthreeweeks,Isawanoldbikestandinginfrontofmyhouse.“Idon’tlikethebike.Itistooold.”Mymotherdidn’tsayanythingafterhearingmywords.Atthatnight,myfathertoldmemymothercookedsomedishesintherestauranttobuythisbike.AlthoughitwasnottheonethatIwanted,itwasmymother’slove.IregrettedwhatIdidandapologizedtomymother.Fromthisexperience,weshouldvaluewhatwehaveandthepersonswholoveus.【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开头已给出，引出故事；

第二步，分享自己的经历和收获；第三步，表达感悟。

[亮点词汇]

①too…to太……而不能

②infrontof在……前面

③apologizeto向……道歉[高分句型]

①Letmetellastoryaboutme.（祈使句）

②AlthoughitwasnottheonethatIwanted,itwasmymother’slove.（让步状语从句）（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“MyShiningPoint”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：（1）讲述一个自己的故事；（2）你的感悟；（3）适当增加细节，行文连贯；（4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

MyShiningPointImeetmanyexcellentpeopleeverydayandatthesametimeIalsofindmyselfreallygood.Icanseetheworldwithkindeyes.IthinkIdon’tliketocomplain.Ifinditimportanttohaveapositiveattitude.Lastmonth,IwaschosentoplayaroleinanEnglishshow.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizethelinesinashorttime.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.SoImadeanefforttopractice.Finally,Imadeitandreceivedhighpraise.Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：以“MyShiningPoint”为题并结合提示进行写作，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，简要说明自己有哪些闪光点；第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；第三步，介绍自己的感悟。[亮点词汇]①atthesametime同时②playarolein在……中扮演角色③regard…as把……当作[高分句型]①However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.(which引导的定语从句)②Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.(强调句)（2024·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zongzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。HowIlearned…HowImadeIngredients&Tools●rice,beans,dates(枣)…●leaf(leaves),string(细绳),potStepswash...keep…inthewaterforhoursmakeaconeshape(圆锥体)with…put…intotheconetie…boil…overlowheat…HowIfelt…要求：1.必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；2.词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareaninterestingexperiencewithyou.DuringtheDragonBoatFestivalthisyear,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareaninterestingexperiencewithyou.DuringtheDragonBoatFestivalthisyear,Ilearnedhowtomakezongzi.Tomakezongzi,weneededtohaverice,beans,dates,someleaves,somestringsandapot.Howdidwemakezongzi?First,wewashedtherice.Then,wekeptitinthewaterforhours.Next,wemadeaconeshapewiththeleaves.Afterthat,weputtherice,beansanddatesintothecone.Andthen,wetiedzongziwithstrings.Finally,weboiledzongzioverlowheatinapot.Verysoon,weenjoyedthedeliciouszongzi.Itwasreallyeasyandinterestingtomakezongzi,soyoucantrytomakezongzibyyourself.Anddon’tforgettoshareyourexperiencewithme.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题；第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①putsthinto把某物放进②tiesthwithsth用某物绑某物[高分句型]①Itwasreallyeasyandinterestingtomakezongzi,soyoucantrytomakezongzibyyourself.（so连接两个并列分句）（2024·山东临沂·中考真题）假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。HiLiPing,Youmentionedyourdreamjobinyourlastletter.I’mreallyinterestedinit.Whydidyouchooseit?What/Whoinfluencedyoutomakethedecision?Tellmeyourexperience,please.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Eric要求：1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing【答案】例文DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mverygladtotellyousomethingaboutmydreamjob.IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.Besides,Iwanttobeateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,myEnglishteacher.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish,andinfluencesmealot.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.IhavemadeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwillredoublemyeffortstorealizemydream.Bestwishes!LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。[亮点词汇]①begladto乐于……②thepowerofanexample榜样的力量③failin在……方面失败④cheersb.up使某人振作起来⑤makeupone’smindtodosth.下定决心做某事[高分句型]①IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）②IhavemadeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.（when引导的时间状语从句）③AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwillredoublemyeffortstorealizemydream.（although引导的让步状语从句）（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）假设你是李雷，请写一篇邀请函。邀请你的好朋友John本周日晚六点来参加你的生日派对，你家住在新华路25号，在派对上你们将会唱歌、做游戏、吃美食。注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。DearJohn,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearJohn,Iwillhaveabirthdaypartyat6:00p.m.thisSunday.Wouldyouliketocome?MyhomeisatNo.25onXinhuaRoad.Wecansingsongs,playgamesandenjoysomedeliciousfoodattheparty.Ibelievewe’llhaveagoodtime.LiLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函；②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍这封邀请函的主题，即邀请对方参加生日派对；第二步，介绍生日派对的时间、地点及活动内容；第三步，表达个人期望或感想等；最后，结尾落款，点明写邀请函的人。注意写作格式。[亮点词汇]①birthdayparty生日派对②enjoysomedeliciousfood享用美食③haveagoodtime玩得开心[高分句型]①Wouldyouliketocome?（wouldliketodosth.）②Ibelievewe’llhaveagoodtime.（省略that的宾语从句）（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词：accident,hurtone’sleg,take…tothehospital,visit要求：1.话题作文和图示作文任选其一。2.词数:80—100之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ilikeplayingbasketballwithmyclassmates.ButlastSaturday,Ifelldownandhurtoneofmylegsbadlywhenweplayedtogether.Myclassmatestookmetothehospitalquickly.Thedoctorputsomemedicineonthecut,andthenputabandagearoundthehurtpartoftheleg.Duringmystayinthehospital,someofmyclassmatesvisitedmeandhelpedmewithmyschoolwork.That’sverykindofthem.Iwilltrymybesttohelpothersinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：图片中写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己喜欢和同学打篮球；第二步，具体阐述上周六发生的事故；第三步，最后表达对同学的感谢以及今后自己也会怎么做。[亮点词汇]①falldown跌倒②helpsbwithsth帮助某人某事③tryone’sbesttodo尽某人最大的努力做[高分句型]Ifelldownandhurtoneofmylegsbadlywhenweplayedtogether.（when引导的时间状语从句）（2024·贵州·中考真题）成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“TheChangeMadeMe...”（改变让我……）的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。要求：1.补全标题；2.内容积极向上，不少于80词；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChangeMadeMeBetterTherearemanythingsinourlifethatcanhelpustobebetter.Inmyopinion,Ithinkmychangeshavemademebetter.Iusedtobeweakbecauseofmybadhabits.Aftercommunicatingwithmyteacher,Iateregularlyeverydayandtookexerciseoften,soIamstrongnow.What’smore,IwassocarelessthatImademanymistakesinmyexams.Myteacheradvisedmetocheckmyanswerscarefullyanddevelopgoodlearninghabits.Thesegoodchangesmademefeelbetterandbraveenoughtofacenewchallenges.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；第三步，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①Inmyopinion在我看来②becauseof因为③What’smore此外[高分句型]①What’smore,IwassocarelessthatImademanymistakesinmyexams.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）②Thesegoodchangesmademefeelbetterandbraveenoughtofacenewchallenges.（并列结构）（2024·四川泸州·中考真题）时光如梭，三年转瞬即逝。假如你是李华，请你代表全班同学给你的英语老师Mr.Wu写一封英语邀请函，请他参加毕业晚会。要点提示：1．发出邀请；2．时间和地点；3．晚会安排：分享回忆；谈论理想；感谢恩师和同窗；……（除前三项外，至少补充一项活动）。要求：1．要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；2．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名；3．语句通顺，语意连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁；4．词数100左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。参考词语：memory,activity,friendshipDearMr.Wu,Wearegoingtohaveagraduationparty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Wu,Wearegoingtohaveagraduationparty.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Thepartywillbeheldat7:00p.m.onMay18thinourschoolhall.Wehavemadeafullpreparationforitandthedetailedactivitiesareasfollows.Firstofall,sincewehavestudiedtogetherfor3years,wearegoingtoshareoursweetmemorieswitheachother.WehaveevenmadeavideoandIbelieveitwillshowyousomethingunforgettable.Atthesametime,wewilltalkaboutourdreams,whichcangreatlyencourageusandhelpushaveaclearerplanaboutourfuture.Inaddition,someofuswillevengiveshortspeechestoexpressoursincerethankstoteachersandclassmateswhohavehelpedusalot.Atlast,we’llsingasongandtakephotostogether.Wearereallylookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封邀请函；②时态：以一般将来时为主，多种时态综合运用；③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时应注意不要遗漏信息。除题干中提示的晚会安排，还应至少补充一项活动。[写作步骤]第一步，点明写这封邀请函的意图，邀请英语老师来参加毕业晚会；第二步，介绍毕业晚会的时间、地点；第三步，根据提示介绍晚会的安排；最后，结束语，表达期望老师来参加晚会。[亮点词汇]①sharesth.withsb.与某人分享某事②atthesametime同时③inaddition此外④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Firstofall,sincewehavestudiedtogetherfor3years,wearegoingtoshareoursweetmemorieswitheachother.（since引导原因状语从句）②Atthesametime,wewilltalkaboutourdreams,whichcangreatlyencourageusandhelpushaveaclearerplanaboutourfuture.（which引导定语从句）③Inaddition,someofuswillevengiveshortspeechestoexpressoursincerethankstoteachersandclassmateswhohavehelpedusalot.（who引导定语从句）（2024·重庆·中考真题）雨天总让人烦恼，下雨了，愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校，哪知随后却有惊喜发生……发生了什么呢？请根据上述文字，并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。要求：1.80—120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：sad,upset,umbrella,rushto,hurry...closetonature:raindrop,ant,plant,soil,freshair...outdooractivities:raincoat,puddle(水洼),jumplikefrogs...indooractivities:classtalentshow,readingandstorytelling...art:painting,drawingpictures,movieday...others:hug,praise,present,party...naturalthing,enjoy,cheer,joy,bettermanage,brightside,don’ttroubleyourself...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Onerainyday,Marywasinarushtoschool,feelingsadandupset.Butontheway,shenoticedraindropshittingtheground,antsscurryingaround,andplantslookingfresh.Severalstudents,wearingraincoatsandcarryingumbrellas,wereplayinginpuddlesintherain.Theyjumpedlikefrogsandhadalotoffun.Maryjoinedthemandfeltlittlebetter.WhenMaryreachedschool,therewasaclasstalentshow.Sheperformedwellandgothugs,praises,andevenapresent,whichmadehersurprisedandhappy.Sherealizedthatinstead