读后续写（第03期）-江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编

专题06读后续写（第03期）2023届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编

【2023届江苏省南京市镇江市高三上学期第一次八校联考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语

续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Lastwinter,Lindawentthroughaverymessydivorceandwasverydepressed.SoshequitherjobandleftLos

Angeles,wheresheencounteredherexhusbandincollege.SheflewtoBostonontheeastcoastoftheUS.Later,

shesettledinanewneighborhoodinEastBoston.However,shortlyafterwards,thepanywheresheworkedwent

bankrupt（破产）.Sufferingaseriesofbitterblows,shefellill,aseverecaseofflu.Shehadtostayathomeforthe

wholeweek,feelingextremelybadandhopeless.

Earlyonemorning,Lindalayinbed,feelingpainfulallover.Thenallofasudden,therewasanupsetting

knockonherfrontdoor.Strugglingoutofthebed,shedraggedherselftothewindow.There,outside,shesawa

youngladycarefullyholdingsomeleaflets（传单）andaTVsetmodel.SheknewofalargeTVsetestablishment

nearbyandassumedamessagewasabouttobegentlydelivered.4tThisisthelastthingIneedtoday.9,Shemuttered

toherselfandhesitantlyopenedthedoor.

Coughingbitterly,Lindastuckherheadout."'Excuseme,madam...theyoungladysaidwithasmile."Fm

sorrybutIamnottheslightestbitinterestedinanyTVwhatever.Lindainterruptedherimpatiently."Asamatter

offact,Iamfeelingterriblyawful.9,“IsthereanythingIcandoforyou,madam?”theyoungladyaskedwith

concern.a4Nothanks,justleavemealone.^^Lindathenshutthedoorinherface.Theyoungladypolitelyturnedand

leftinsilence.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

Afewhourslater,anotherknock.

Paragraph2:

Lindawassurprisedbythislovingaction.

【答案1Onepossibleversion:

Afewhourslater,anotherknock.Lindaglancedoutofthewindow.Tohersurprise,atthedoorwasthesame

lady,backagain.Reallyannoyedthistime,Lindaopenedthedoor.BeforeLindacouldutteranyword,theyoung

ladyhandedherawarmpot,withaconcernedlookontheface.64Fmsosorrytohavedisturbedyouearlier.I

thoughtyoumayneedthishomemadechickensoup.Hopeitmightmakeyoufeelalittlebetter.”

Lindawassurprisedbythislovelyaction.Afterbeingrefusedsorudely,theladystillshowedmuchkindness

toher.Asenseofshamecreepinguponherheart,shecouldonlyforceasmilewithburningears.Butalso,awarm

currentsurgedthroughherbrainandbody.Lindatookthechickensoupgratefully,tearsblurringhereyesanda

lumpinherthroat.TheladywrappedLindainherarmsandpattedherontheback."It'sOK,dear.Everythingwill

befine."Hearingthesewords,Lindafeltarayofbrightsunshinelightingupherlife.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了琳达经历了离婚和破产。一天清晨，琳达躺在床上，感到浑身疼

痛，被敲门声叫醒。她看到敲门的是一名推销电视的年轻女士，琳达拒绝了推销，年轻的女士礼貌地转过

身，沉默地离开了。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，又传来敲门声。”可知，第一段可描写琳达的心情以及年轻女士给琳达带

来的惊喜（鸡汤）。

②由第二段首句内容“琳达对这个可爱的举动感到惊讶”可知，第二段可描写琳达的感受以及年轻女士对琳达

的安慰。

2.续写线索：生气一惊喜一琳达感受一安慰

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.拒绝：refuse/reject

②.展示：show/express

③.拥抱：hug/wrap

情绪类

①.令某人惊讶的是：toone'ssurprise/toone'sastonishment

②.感激地:gratefully/appreciatively

【,点日青】[高分句型1].BeforeLindacouldutteranyword,theyoungladyhandedherawarmpot,withaconcerned

lookontheface.（before引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2].Hearingthesewords,Lindafeltarayofbrightsunshinelightingupherlife.（现在分词作状语）

【江苏省苏州市20222023学年高三上学期八校联考指标调研】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使

之构成一个完整的故事。

Onceinakingdom,amannamedLiamprotestedagainst（反对）theKing.TheKingwassoangrybecausehe

didn'tlikeanyonegoingagainsthimsoheorderedhissoldierstoarrest（逮捕）andhangtheman.Liamdidn'tshow

anyfearandsaid,nMyLord.Iwillgladlyacceptyourpunishmentbutpleasegrant（允许）meonelastwish.Please

givemesometime.BeforedyingIjustwanttovisitmyhomeandseemychildrenonelasttime."

TheKingrefusedhisrequest,saying,"No.Ican*tallowit.Thereisnoguarantee（担保）thatonceyouleaveyou

willeback.*'

Justthenamanfromthecrowdcameforwardandsaid,nMyLord,pleasearrestmeinsteadofhimasa

guarantee.Ifhedoesn'tebackontime,youcanhangmeinsteadofhim.n

TheKingwassurprisedbecausehehadneverseenamanwhowouldofferhisownlifeforsomeoneelse.He

believedthattherewasnorealfriendshipintheworld.TheKingaskedhim.nWhyareyoureadytotakethis

person'splace?"

Themanreplied,nMyLord,LiamismybestfriendandIhavetrustinhim.Heisamanwhoalwayskeepshis

promise.Iamsurethathewillbebackoncehefinishesmeetinghisfamily."

TheKingagreedandallowedLiamtoleaveforhishome.Hewasgivensixhoursinall.Hewouldneedone

hourtogoandebackfromhishouse,sohehadatmostfivehourstomeethisfamily.Liamleftforhishouse.He

methisfamily.HestillhadenoughtimetoreachtheKing*spalacebeforethetimeofhishanging.

Liamwantedtoebacktothehangingplaceassoonaspossible,butonhiswayhefellfromhishorseandgot

hurt.Becauseofthis,hegotdelayed（耽搁）.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

Atthesametime,astimepassedhisfriendwasbeingheldandpreparedforhanging.

Paragraph2:

Listeningtothis,Liamwentuptohisfriendandsaid_

［答案］Atthesametime,astimepassedhisfriendwasbeingheldandpreparedforhanging.Hisfriendwas

standingonboardtobehanged,happytogivehisownlifeforhim.Justashisfriendwasabouttobehanged,Liam

arrived,outofbreath,andfelltotheground.Liamshouted,"Pleasestop!Iamback.Pleasesetmybestfriendfree.,,

Hisfriendreplied,ctLiam!Youarefinallyback.Iwouldbehappytotakeyourplaceanddiehere.^^

Listeningtothis,Liamwentuptohisfriendandsaid,<aMyfriend,thankyouforyourhelp.Nowpleasego.

ThisismypunishmentandIshouldfaceit."Seeingthis,theKingwasgreatlytouchedbytheirfriendshipandsaid,

“Iforgiveyou.Ihadneverthoughtthatyouwouldkeepyourpromise.Moreimportantly,yourtruefriendshiphas

madeadeepimpressiononme.Youaresoluckytohaveafriendwhohastrustinyouandalwaysstaysbyyour

sidenomatterwhathappens.Youbotharefreetogo.”

【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Liam因为反抗国王，国王命令士兵逮捕并绞

死这个人，接受惩罚前Liam有一个愿望，他想回家看下孩子们，但国王拒绝了他的请求。这时，人群中一

人出来给Liam担保，让国王同意Liam回家看孩子，最后国王同意了。看完孩子们，Liam想尽快回到绞刑

处，但在路上他从马上摔了下来，受了伤。因为这个，他的返程被耽搁了。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：与此同时，随着时间的推移，他的朋友被关押起来，准备被绞死，所

以第一段应该描述在Liam的朋友即将被绞死时，Liam回来了，但他的朋友愿意替他去死。第二段开头是:

听了这话，利亚姆走到他的朋友跟前说……，所以本段应该写Liam对朋友说的话，和国王被这俩人感动了，

释放了这两个人。

写作时，需注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，要检查写作任务。

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：Seeingthis,theKingwasgreatlytouchedbytheirfriendship这句话运

用了非谓语动词seeing作状语，文章也使用了一些固定词组,如beaboutto;takeyourplace;keepyourpromise

等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上

下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【江苏省泰州中学20222023学年高三上学期第一次月度检测】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头

语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

DadandMadisonwerewalkingthroughthepartystore,gatheringdecorationsforMadison'supingbirthday

party.

“ButIdon'twanttoinviteLucyGilbert!Idon'tlikeher!^^

“Madison,youarebeingunreasonable.Ifeverygirlinyourclassisinvitedtopartybutyou,you'llfeelleftout.

ItwouldbeabigmistakenottoinviteLucytotheparty.^^

“Shenevereventalkstome!”

Dadsighedandmoveddowntheaisle.64Lucyisanewgirlinclass.Shejustmovedherealittleoveramonth

ago.Thinkabouthowthatmustfeel.Shedoesn'tknowonesinglepersonintheschool.Sheleftallofhertogetto

knoweveryone.

"No,itwon't.Shewillprobablysitinthecomerandnottalktoanyone.Everydayatlunchshesitsallby

herself.Shewantstoeatalone!”Madisonshruggedandrolledhereyes.

“Madison,I'mdonediscussingthis.Youwillinviteeverygirlinyourclass,includingLucyGilbert!

OnSaturdaymorning,thefamilyblewupballoonsanddecoratedthehousecheerfully.Madisonwasdressed

beautifullyfortheday,wearinghernewbluedress.Itwasnottypicalofhertodressherselflikethis.Sheusually

woresportsclothesbecauseshelovedtobeoutsideridingherhorseStarwithaleadrope（缰绳）.

Madisongreetedherfriendsatthedoorstep,picturingvariouspresentsherfriendswouldbringher.Inthe

meanwhile,shewaswonderingwhetherLucywouldruinthepartyifshecame.Anyhow,allthegirlssheinvited

camefinally,includingLucy.

ThegirlshadafantastictimebysinginganddancingwhileLucysatinthecornersilentlyalone.Later,allthe

girlsgatheredaroundthetableasMadisonopenedherpresents.Openingthemonebyone,Madisonthankedher

friends,withabrightsmileonherface.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下各式作答。

Lucy'spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.

Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.

【答案1Lucy'spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.Worryingthatitwouldruintheparty,Madisongrabbedthe

presentreluctantlyandrippedopenthegiftwrappaper.Insidewasadelicatelyhandmadeleadrope!Shocked,she

widenedhereyes,coveringherhandsoverhermouth."It'saleadropeforyourhorseStar.Imadeitbymyself!

Madisonpulleditoutoftheboxandplaceditonherlap,amazedatitsbeauty.Lucyadded,“Iheardyoutalking

aboutyourhorseatschool.ThafswhenIgottheideatomakeyoualeadrope.9,

Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.Itwas,byfar,hervery

favoritebirthdaypresentoftheday.ShesuddenlyfeltsobadbecauseshehadbeensomeantoLucy.Withtears

swirlinginhereyes,sheblinkedhardtofightthemback,feelingamixtureofregretandgratitude.""Thanksso

muchforthisleadrope.Iloveit!Wouldyouliketojoinusandbeourfriends?”Lucynoddedcheerfully.Madison

putherarmaroundLucy'sshoulders,bothsmiling.Withapplauseandlaughterechoingthroughthehouse,Lucy

joinedtheothergirlstoenjoytheparty.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了麦迪逊在过生日时，邀请全体同学包括不喜欢的露西庆祝生日。

露西别出心裁的生日礼物深深的感动了麦迪逊，让作者看到了露西内心深处的善良并自此与露西成为好朋

友。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段段首内容“最后打开的是露西的礼物。”可知，第一段描述麦迪逊打开露西的礼物时的过程及心理

状态。

②由第二段段首内容“被她的话深深地打动了，麦迪逊紧紧抓住线绳。”可知麦迪逊听到露西的话之后，心理

状态发生了变化，重新认识露西并与她成为了好朋友。

2.续写线索：打开礼物一听到露西的话一感动---11、理变化一成为好友

3.词汇激活

行为类:

①紧抓住线绳：holdtheleadropetightly/grabtheleadropetightly

②抑制：fightback/holdback

③拥抱某人：putherarmaroundsb./hugsb./embracesb.

情绪类：

①惊讶：amazedat/surprisedat

②感动：moved/touched

③悔恨：regret/sorry/guilty

【点睛】【高分句型1】Insidewasadelicatelyhandmadeleadrope!（运用了完全倒装）

[高分句型2]ShesuddenlyfeltsobadbecauseshehadbeensomeantoLucy.（运用了because引导原因状语

从句）

【高分句型3]Withtearsswirlinginhereyes,sheblinkedhardtofightthemback,feelingamixtureofregretand

gratitude.（运用了with+宾语+宾语补足语复合结构，现在分词作状语）

【江苏高邮市20222023学年高三上学期十月联考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,

使之构成一个完整的短文。

Onceamangotlostinadesert.Thewaterinhiswaterbaghadrunouttwodaysago,andhewasonhislast

legs.Heknewthatifhedidn'tgetsomewatersoon,hewouldsurelydie.Themansawasmallhouseaheadofhim.

Hethoughtitmightbehisimagination,buthavingnootheroption,hemovedtowardit.Ashegotcloser,he

realizeditwasquitereal,Sohedraggedhistiredbodytothedoorwiththelastofhisstrength.5

Therewasnooneinthehouseanditseemedlikeithadbeenemptyforquitesometime.Themanenteredit,

hopingagainsthopethathemightfindwaterinside.

Hisheartmissedabeatwhenhesawwhatwasinthehouse-ahandpump.Ithadapipegoingdownthrough

thefloor,perhapstappingasourceofwaterdeepunderground.

Hebeganworkingthehandpump,butnowatercameout.Hekeptatitandstillnothinghappened.

Finally,hegaveup.Hethrewuphishandsindespair.Itlookedasifhewasgoingtodieafterall.

Thenthemannoticedabottleinonecornerofthehouse.Itwasfiledwithwater.Heuncorkedthebottleand

wasabouttodrinkthesweetlifegivingwater,whenhenoticedapieceofpaperattachedtoit.Thehandwritingon

thepaperread:"Usethiswatertostartthepump.Don'tforgettofillthebottlewhenyou'redone.^^

Hehadadilemma.Hecouldfollowtheinstructionsandpourthewaterintothepump,orhecouldignoreit

andjustdrinkthewater.

Whatshouldhedo?Howwouldhefeelashewatchedthewaterdisappearintothepump?Whatifthepump

didnotfunction?Whatifthepipehadaleak?Whatiftheundergroundwaterhadlongdriedup?

Butthenmaybetheinstructionswerecorrect.Shouldheriskit?Ifitturnedouttobefalse,hemightbe

throwingawaythelastwaterhewouldeversee.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Handsshaking.hepouredthewaterintothepump.

Heheardagurglingsound,andthenwatercameout.

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

Handsshaking,hepouredthewaterintothepump.Hebeganoperatingthepumppainstakingly,with

amixtureofnervousnessandexcitement.Butafterwhatseemedacentury,nothinghappened.Seizedwithpanic

andregret,hethoughttohimself,“SostupidamIthatIfollowtheinstructions.Iamboundtodieinthedesert.^^

Frustratedandexhausted,hefeltasifitweretheendoftheworld,hishearttornwithdespair.Attheverymoment,

amiracleoccurred.

Heheardagurglingsound,andthenwatercameout.Withwidejoywellingupinsidehim,hecouldn'twaitto

drinkhisfill.Thesweetlifegivingwaterrelievedhisuneasymindaswellastheparchedthroat.Thenhefilledhis

waterbagforthejourneyahead.Healsofilledthebottleandputthecorkback.Beforeleavingthehouse,headded

belowtheinstructions,"'Believeme,itworks!?,Exposedtotheburningsun,hetooklongstridesintheboundless

desert,refreshedanddetermined.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了有个人在沙漠里迷路了，水袋里的水两天前就用完了，他已经奄

奄一息了。这人发现了一个房子，并且找到了一个水泵，旁边还有一瓶水，瓶子上贴着一张纸。纸上写着“用

这些水启动水泵。喝完后别忘了把瓶子装满。”最终这人选择了相信纸条上写的，最终喝到了水。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“他双手颤抖着，把水倒进水泵”可知，第一段可描写倒入水之后的事情。

②由第二段首句内容“他听到汩汩的声音，然后水就出来了”可知，第二段可描写有水流出来后的事情。

2.续写线索：倒水——等待——后悔——发生奇迹——喝水——装水

3.词汇激活

行为类

颤抖：shake/tremble

开始：begin/start

缓解：relieve/ease

情绪类

激动：excitement/thrill

愚蠢：stupid/foolish

【点睛】[高分句型1]Butafterwhatseemedacentury,nothinghappened.（运用了what引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Withwidejoywellingupinsidehim,hecouldn'twaittodrinkhisfill.（运用了with的复合结构）

【2023•江苏省南京市六校10月学情调研】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

Aswepulledoutofthegarage,mymindwentblankwhenIsawthegunpointingagainstthecarwindow.This

can'tbehappeningtome.ThenIfeltthegun,cold,againstmyhead,andIheardmyfriendJeremysaying,t4What

doyouwant?Takemywallet.^^butatthetimeIthoughtofnothing.

Irememberbeingalittleannoyedwhenthegunmanpulledmefromthecarbythehair.Irememberthewalk

tothehouseJeremy,me,thetwomenwithtwoguns.Irememberthefearandangerinthegunmen'svoices

becauseJeremywasbeingslow,andIrememberwonderingwhyhewasbeingslow.IdidnotrealizethatJeremy

hadthrownthekeysintothebush.ButIrememberthatsoundofthegunhittingJeremy'sheadandthefeelingas

themanwhohadholdofmyhairreleasedme.AndIrememberthesplitsecondwhenIrealizedhewaslookingat

Jeremy,andIrememberwonderinghowfarIcouldrunbeforehepulledthetrigger.ButIwasalreadyrunning,and

uponreachingthecaracrossthestreet,Ididn'tcrouch（蹲伏）behinditbutscreamedinstead.

Irememberthinkingtherewassomethingridiculousandillogicalaboutscreaming"Help!Help!^^ateight

o5clockonaTuesdayeveninginDecemberandchangingmyplea（恳求）tothemorespecific"Help!Letmein.

Pleaseletmein!^^Butthehouseswerecold,closed,unfriendly,andIranonuntilIheardJeremy'sscreamsbehind

meannouncingthatourattackershadrunaway.

TheneighborswhohadnotopenedtheirdoorstouscameoutwithbaseballbatsandhelpedJeremyfindhis

glassesandkeys.Inagrouptheywereverybrave.Wewaitedforthepolicetoeuntilsomeonesaidtosomeoneelse

thatthenoodlesweregettingcold,andIsaidpolitely,t4Pleasegoandeat.We'reOK.”

Iwashappytoseethemgo.Theyhadbeentalkingofstrictersentencesforcriminals,ofbringingbackthe

deathpenalty（处罚）andhowthePresidentisgoingtocleanupthecountry.Iwasthinkingtheycouldbesayingall

ofthisovermydeadbody,andIstillfeelthatstiffersentenceswouldn'tchangeathing.InarushalltheangerI

shouldhavefeltformyattackerswasdirectedagainstthesecontentedpeoplestandinginfrontoftheirwarm,

fortablehomestalkingaboutallthegunstheyweregoingtobuy.WhatgoodwouldgunshavebeentoJeremyand

me?

Peopleallovertheneighborhoodhadcalledtoreportourscreams,andthepoliceturnedoutinforcetwenty

minuteslater.Theywereilltemperedaboutwhatwas,tothem,muchtroubleaboutnothing.Afterall,Jeremywas

hardlyhurt,andwewerehopelesswhenitcametodescribingthegunmen.^tTypical,^^saidonepolicemanwhenwe

couldn'tevenagreeonhowtallthemenwere.Bothofuswereabletodescribethegunsinhorrifyingdetail,butthe

twopolicemenwhostayedtomakethereportdidn'tthinkthatwouldbeofmuchhelp.

Thepolicemenwerematteroffactaboutthewholething.Thethinonesaid,“Thatwasastupidthingtodo,

throwingawaythekeys.Whenamanhasagunagainstyourhead,youdowhatyou'retold.^^Jeremylooked

properlyembarrassed.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thenthefatpolicemancameupandthethinonewenttolookaroundtheoutsideofthehouse.

AllthatsleeplessnightIreplayedthemomentthoseblackglovescameuptothecarwindow.

【答案】Thenthefatpolicemancameupandthethinonewenttolookaroundtheoutsideofthehouse.46Thatwas

thebestthingyoucouldhavedone,throwingawaythekeys,^^hesaid."Ifyouhadgoneintothehousewith

Hisvoicebecameweaker."'Theywouldhavehurther”-hetwistedhisheadtowardme一"andkilled

youboth.^^Jeremylookedhappier.^cLook,^^saidthefatpolicemankindly,“there'snorightorwronginthesituation.

There?sjustluck.”

AllthatsleeplessnightIreplayedthemomentthoseblackglovescameuptothecarwindow.Howlongdid

thewholethinglast?Threeminutes,five,eight?NomatterhowmanyhoursofmylifeImayspendrelivingit,I

knowthereisnowaytoprepareforthenexttime-nointelligentresponsetoagun.Thefatcopwasright.There?s

onlyluck.ThenexttimeImightendupdead.AndI'msuretherewillbeanexttime.Gunsmakesomepeoplefeel

safeandsomepeoplefeelstrong,butthey5refoolingthemselves.

【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章记录了作者和Jeremy被持枪罪犯袭击的过程，同时也记录了邻居们和警察

在这次袭击后的反应。作者因此感叹安全只是幻觉，不管是铁索还是枪支都不会带来安全。枪支使一些人

感觉安全，而且有些人感觉强大，但是他们只是欺骗自己。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“然后那个胖警察走了过来，那个瘦警察到房子外面四处看了看”可知，第一段可描写警

察和他们之间关于这次事件的对话的场景。

②由第二段首句内容“那个不眠之夜，我回想起那双黑手套临近车窗前的那一刻。”可知，第二段可描写作者

回忆的一些细节，掺杂着一些感悟。

2.续写线索：警察到现场查案一对话一回忆起被袭击的细节——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①扔掉：throwaway/tossout

②.进入：gointo/einto/enter

③.伤害：hurt/wound

情绪类

①.看起来更高兴：lookedhappier/lookedmorepleased

②.友善地：kindly/neighborly

【点睛】[高分句型1].NomatterhowmanyhoursofmylifeImayspendrelivingit,Iknowthereisnowayto

prepareforthenexttime-nointelligentresponsetoagun.（运用了Nomatterhow弓|导的让步状语从句）

[高分句型2].AndI'msuretherewillbeanexttime.（运用了宾语从句）

【江苏省三名校（姜堰中学、沐阳中学、如东中学）20222023学年高三上学期10月联考】阅读下面材料，

根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Duetoamedicalmisdiagnosis（误诊），Susan,34,hadbeenleftsightless,andwassuddenlythrownintoaword

ofdarkness,anger,frustrationandselfpity.Andallshehadtodependonwasherhusband,Mark.

MarkwasanofficerandhelovedSusanwithallhisheart.Whenshefirstlosthersight,hewatchedhersink

intodespairandwasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainthestrengthandconfidencetobeeindependentagain.

WithMark'sencouragement,Susanfeltreadytoreturntoherjob,buthowwouldshegetthere?Sheusedto

takethebus,butwasnowtoofrightenedtogetaroundthecitybyherself.Markvolunteeredtodrivehertowork.

Soon,however,Markrealizedthearrangementwasn'tworking.Susanisgoingtohavetostarttakingthebusagain.

Butshewasstillsofragile,soangry,howwouldshereact?

Justashepredicted,Susanwasscaredattheideaoftakingthebusagain.6Tmblind!^^sherespondedbitterly.

“HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou'reabandoningme.^^

Mark'sheartbroketohearthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanhewouldride

thebuswithheruntilshegotthehangofit.Andthatisexactlywhathappened.Fortwosolidweeks,Mark,military

uniformandall,acpaniedSusantoandfromwork.Hetaughtherhowtorelyonherothersenses,specificallyher

hearing,todeterminewhereshewasandhowtoadapttohernewenvironment.Hehelpedherbefriendthebus

driverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.

Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Markencouragedherbuthedecidedtocontinuewatching

outforherwhereshegotoffthebus,onlyinsecret.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Mondaymorningarrived.BeforeSusanleftshekissedMarkandthankedhim.

Paragraph2:

Curious,sheaskedthedriver,atWhydoyousaythatyouenvyme?”

【答案］Onepossibleversion：

Paragraph1:

Mondaymorningarrived.BeforeSusanleftshekissedMarkandthankedhim.Hereyesfilledwithtears

ofgratitudeforhisloyalty,hispatience,andhislove.Andforthefirsttime,theywentseparateways.Monday,

Tuesday,Wednesday,Thursday...Eachdayonherownwentperfectly,andSusanhadneverfeltbetter.Shewas

goingtoworkallbyherselfOnFridaymorning,asshewasgettingoffthebus,thedriversaid,“Idoenvyyou.^^

Susanwasn'tsureifthedriverwasspeakingtoher.Afterall,whowouldenvyablindwoman?

Paragraph2:

Curious,sheaskedthedriver,uWhydoyousaythatyouenvyme?”Thedriverresponded,6tYouknow,

everymorningforthepastweek,agentlemaninamilitaryuniformhasbeenwatchingyouasyougetoffthebus

untilyousafelyenteryourofficebuilding.Youareoneluckylady."TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan's

cheeks.Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shehadalwaysfeltMark'spresence.Shewassolucky,forher

husbandhadgivenheragiftshedidn'tneedtoseetobelieve——thegiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereis

darkness.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在Suan因误诊而失明后，她的丈夫Mark帮助她克服内心的恐惧，

使她能够独自一人乘坐公交车上下班的故事。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“了星期一早上。Suan离开前吻了吻Mark,并向他道谢。”可知，第一段可描写Suan

独自一人乘坐公交车上下班的经历。

②由第二段首句内容“她好奇地问司机：“你为什么说你羡慕我？””可知，第二段可描写司机解释了羡慕Suan

的原因。

2.续写线索：Suan独自坐公交车-司机羡慕Suan------Suan很困惑----司机羡慕Suan的原因----感悟

3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）

行为类

①对...说话：speakto/talkto

②回答：respond/reply

③享受：watch/stare

情绪类

①幸福：happiness/blessedness

②幸运的：lucky/fortunate

【点睛】[高分句型1]OnFridaymorning,asshewasgettingoffthebus,thedriversaid,“Idoenvyyou.”（运用了

as引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shehadalwaysfeltMark'spresence,（运用了although弓|

导的让步状语从句）

【江苏省南京师范大学附属中学20222023学年高三上学期第一次月考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给

段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.

OnasteamymorninginJuly,ClayandAcaimieChastainarrivedatthebaseofMountLiamuigaonthe

CaribbeanislandofSt.Kitts,readytospendadayoftheirhoneymoonclimbingMountLiamuiga.Thehighest

pointonSt.Kitts,Liamuigaisalsoadormant（休眠的）volcanothatstartsinthecloudsandplungesdowntomeet

thesea.

Theycouldn'tfindavisitorcentreorhireaguide,sotheysetoffontheirown.Theyreachedthepeakaround

noonandatetheirsandwicheslookingoutovertheoceanandsurroundingislands.

That'swhenClaysawit:asmalltrailthatledintothevolcano'scrater（坑），abowlofgreenwithcloudforest

givingwaytogreengrass.Aseriesofscreweyes（螺钉孑L）hadbeendrilledintotherocks,withropesthatled

down.Claywantedtogodownandtakesomepictures.Acaimiefollowedhimalittleway,butshewasvery

cautiousandquitescaredofheights；soClaywentonalone.

Afewminuteslater,sheheardacrash------anoisethatsoundedlikealargebranchsnapping,followedbythe

soundofsomethingbigrollingdownhill."Clay?"shecalled.Silence.

Uneasy,shewaitedaminuteandshoutedagain------stillnothing.Andthen,fromsomewheremuchfurther

down,sheheardaweakcryforhelp.Thistimeshewascertain:ItwasClaycallingforhelpfromdeepwithinthe

crater.

Asshelookedoverthelipofthevolcano,shetriedtostopsomeofherworstworries.Herphonewasn't

gettingasignal,andhercriesforhelpweremetwithonlysilence."Clay!”sheshoutedasloudasshecould."Clay,

areyouOK?"

Acaimiegraspedtheropeandbeganclimbingdownthetrail.Whenthepathbecametoosteep,sheslidonher

butt,herlegsandarmsgettingbruisedandscrapedintheprocess.Then,justoffthetrail,shesawaflashofred.It

wasClay'sscarf.Andnexttoitwashiscellphone.

Shegrabbedbothandcontinueddown,screamingforClayalltheway.

“Help,"hesaidinthatstrangevoice.

"I'ming!Staywhereyouare,"shesaid.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.

Finally,shespottedClay.

Acaimiehadtopushthosethoughtsawayandfocusonwhatshecoulddo.

［答案］Finally,shespottedClay.Hewassittingontheground,bloodrunningdownhisface.<6Clay,^^shecalledin

ananxiousvoice.4tWhafswrong?Haveyoubrokenanything?^^Withaconfusedlookonhisface,Clayjuststared

atherandcouldn'trememberanythingthathadhappened.Perhapstheropehe'dbeenholdinghadsnapped,or

maybehe?djustmissedastep,butitwasclearhe'dfallenalongway.AcaimiehadtostaycalmforClay,butinside

shewasingreatpanic,worriedthathehadinternalinjuriesthatcouldkillhim.

Acaimiehadtopushthosethoughtsawayandfocusonwhatshecoulddo.Shehelpedhimup,hadhimhold

theropetightandpushedhimfrombehind.Inchbyinch,theyclimbed.Afterwhatfeltlikef