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必修第二册UNIT2WILDLIFEPROTECTION写作课件——教考衔接本单元主题语境是人与自然,围绕“野生动物保护”的主题展开。命制读后续写时,前文一般会描写小动物受了伤害或者遇到了麻烦,作为下文续写的伏笔。续写部分往往描写主人公是如何解救小动物的,他们从亲身经历中学到了什么教训或者受到了什么启发等。通过此类话题的写作,旨在培养学生珍惜和爱护动物,树立人与自然和谐共存的生态观和价值观,并积极参与到保护动植物的行动中来。[命题导向]后续写读
主题——野生动物保护文脉阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。[1]December2020inWisconsinwasbitterlycold.Acurious7-year-old,Iwasinhesitationwhenmyfatherarrivedhomefromworkwithsomethinghiddeninhisjacket.“GuesswhatIhave,”hesaid.Heslowlyunwrappedthejackettotakeoutafrozenowl.He'dfoundthefrozenbirdonhiscarwhenheleftworkandguessedthatithadflownintothewindshield.[2]Dadthoughtitmightbealiveandwantedtoletitwarmup.Mymotheragreedtoletthebirdstayovernight,soDadandItookittothebasementandcarefullylaiditnearourcoalstove.Iwasthefirstoneintothekitchenthenextmorningforabowlofcereal(麦片).Ifoundtheowlrestingonthesugarbowlasifwaitingforitsbreakfast.Ihurriedtotellmyparentsthattheowlwasaliveandsittingatthekitchentable.Momdidn'tlikethatitwasinthekitchenandwanteditoutofthehouse.[3]Dadinstructedmetoopenthebackdoorwhileheforcedtheowltowardme.Iheardtheflappingofwings,butbeforeIcoulddirectitsflightoutside,theowlturnedaroundawayfromthecoldaircominginthedoorandflewpastme,downthestairsintotheshelterofthewarmbasement.Restinginthespacenearthetopofthebasement,theowlwassafelybeyondourreach.Wetrieddrivingitoutwithabroom,butitcalmlyflewtothefarsideofthebasement.SoonDadandIwerelaughingtoohardtocontinue,andwerealizedtherewasnowaywecoulddrivetheowloutifitwantedtostay.MomagreedtohaveitinthehouseuntilDadcouldcatchitwhenitbecameweakfromhunger.Butthatneverhappened.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按照如下格式在相应位置作答。Thedoordidn’tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement................………………………………………………………………Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave……………………………………………………………………………1.把握文本结构2.抓住文本六要素(5W1H)whowhatwhenwherewhyhowDad,Mom,afrozenowlandI.DadandItriedtodriveitoutafterwehelpedafrozenowlsurvive.Decemberin2020.InWisconsin.Momwantedtheowloutofthehouse.Theowlflewtothefarsideofthebasementbeyondourreachandwewerelaughingtoohardtocontinue,lettingitstaybehind.3.理清故事双线[1]December2020inWisconsinwasbitterlycold.Acurious7-year-old,Iwasinhesitationwhenmyfatherarrivedhomefromworkwithsomethinghiddeninhisjacket.“GuesswhatIhave,”hesaid.Heslowlyunwrappedthejackettotakeoutafrozenowl.He'dfoundthefrozenbirdonhiscarwhenheleftworkandguessedthatithadflownintothewindshield.[2]Dadthoughtitmightbealiveandwantedtoletitwarmup.Mymotheragreedtoletthebirdstayovernight,soDadandItookittothebasementandcarefullylaiditnearourcoalstove.Iwasthefirstoneintothekitchenthenextmorningforabowlofcereal(麦片).Ifoundtheowlrestingonthesugarbowlasifwaitingforitsbreakfast.Ihurriedtotellmyparentsthattheowlwasaliveandsittingatthekitchentable.Momdidn'tlikethatitwasinthekitchenandwanteditoutofthehouse.
4.关照伏笔照应暗示妈妈会逐渐改变对猫头鹰的态度[3]Dadinstructedmetoopenthebackdoorwhileheforcedtheowltowardme.Iheardtheflappingofwings,butbeforeIcoulddirectitsflightoutside,theowlturnedaroundawayfromthecoldaircominginthedoorandflewpastme,downthestairsintotheshelterofthewarmbasement.Restinginthespacenearthetopofthebasement,theowlwassafelybeyondourreach.Wetrieddrivingitoutwithabroom,butitcalmlyflewtothefarsideofthebasement.SoonDadandIwerelaughingtoohardtocontinue,andwerealizedtherewasnowaywecoulddrivetheowloutifitwantedtostay.MomagreedtohaveitinthehouseuntilDadcouldcatchitwhenitbecameweakfromhunger.Butthatneverhappened.
暗示一家人不舍得让猫头鹰离开暗示猫头鹰会在地下室幸福安静地生活下来[1]December2020inWisconsinwasbitterlycold.Acurious7yearold,Iwasinhesitationwhenmyfatherarrivedhomefromworkwithsomethinghiddeninhisjacket.“GuesswhatIhave,”hesaid.Heslowlyunwrappedthejackettotakeoutafrozenowl.He'dfoundthefrozenbirdonhiscarwhenheleftworkandguessedthatithadflownintothewindshield.[2]
Dadthoughtitmightbealiveandwantedtoletitwarmup.Mymotheragreedtoletthebirdstayovernight,soDadandItookittothebasementandcarefullylaiditnearourcoalstove.Iwasthefirstoneintothekitchenthenextmorningforabowlofcereal(麦片).Ifoundtheowlrestingonthesugarbowlasifwaitingforitsbreakfast.Ihurriedtotellmyparentsthattheowlwasaliveandsittingatthekitchentable.Momdidn'tlikethatitwasinthekitchenandwanteditoutofthehouse.5.吻合语言风格心理描写:运用“thought,wanted”直接表述了爸爸和妈妈对待猫头鹰的态度,为下文作者和爸爸追赶猫头鹰的场景作了铺垫动作和场景描写:生动地描述了作者和爸爸追赶猫头鹰,但看到猫头鹰不愿离去,作者和爸爸开怀大笑的画面,巧妙营造了人与动物和谐相处的场景[3]Dadinstructedmetoopenthebackdoorwhileheforcedtheowltowardme.Iheardtheflappingofwings,butbeforeIcoulddirectitsflightoutside,theowlturnedaroundawayfromthecoldaircominginthedoorandflewpastme,downthestairsintotheshelterofthewarmbasement.Restinginthespacenearthetopofthebasement,theowlwassafelybeyondourreach.Wetrieddrivingitoutwithabroom,butitcalmlyflewtothefarsideofthebasement.SoonDadandIwerelaughingtoohardtocontinue,andwerealizedtherewasnowaywecoulddrivetheowloutifitwantedtostay.MomagreedtohaveitinthehouseuntilDadcouldcatchitwhenitbecameweakfromhunger.Butthatneverhappened.6.重难情节创写1.请设计作者一家与猫头鹰和谐相处的情节。2.请设计作者一家与猫头鹰分别的场景。Beforelong,itbecamesofatthatDadmighthaveeasilycaughtit.Buthedidn't.EvenMomneveraskedhimtodriveitoutofthehouse.Iusuallyshowedmyfriendstheowlthatlivedinmybasementandexplaineditseatinghabits.
Onawarmafternoon,wedecidedtosetthebirdfree.Iopenedthedoor,thoughIhatedtodoit.Theowlseemedtoreadourmindsandflewoutintothetallpeartreeinourbackyard.Weobserveditaroundtheneighborhoodforafewmoredaysandthenitwasgone.参考范文
Thedoordidn’tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Inthedaysthatfollowed,theowlcaughtthemiceinthebasementandenjoyedeverymealofthem().Beforelong,itbecamesofatthatDadmighthaveeasilycaughtit.Buthedidn't.EvenMomneveraskedhimtodriveitoutofthehouse().Iusuallyshowedmyfriendstheowlthatlive
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