开放性作文10篇-高二英语上学期期末考点复习（北师大版）解析版

北师大版（2019）高二英语上学期期末考点大串讲

专题09开放性作文10篇（历年名校真题）

参考答案：

1.DearEditor,

RecentlyIhavefoundthatsomeclassmatesstayuplateandskipbreakfast,whicharcnothealthy

lifestyles.Actually,tohelpallthestudentsleadahealthylife,Iwanttooffersomesuggestionsasfollows.

First,wearcsupposedtohaveabalanceddietandenjoybreakfasteveryday,becauseweconsume

muchenergywhilestudying.Additionally,i（isofequalimportancetotakeexerciseonaregularbasis,

whichcancontributetostrengtheningourbodiesandkeepingfit.Moreimportantly,it'sapositiveattitude

towardlifethatmakesadifferencetohelpingusreleasestressanddealwiththingsoptimisticallywhatever

happens.

IsincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeadoptedbyusstudentsandthatweallcanliveahealthyEfe.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，参加以健康生活方式为主题的英语

征文活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

最近：recently—*lately

建议：suggestion—>advice

另夕卜：additionally—moreover

健康的：fit—>healthy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Actually,tohelpall（hestudentsleadahealthylife,Iwanttooffersomesuggestionsasfollows.

拓展句：Actually,Iwanttooffersomesuggestions,whichcanhelpallthestudentsleadahealthylife.

【点睛J[高分句型1]RecentlyIhavefoundthatsomeclassmatesstayuplateandskipbreakfast,which

arenothealthylifeslyles.（运用了ihai引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Additionally,itisofequalimportancetotakeexerciseonaregularbasis,whichcan

contributetostrengtheningourbodiesandkeepingfit.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

2.Onepossibleversion:

DearSir/Madam,

HearingthattheannualSchoolArtFestivalisapproaching,Pmwritingtoapplytobeahostofthe

festival.

IdobelievethatI'mqualifiedtobeahost.Firstofall,Ihavetakensomehostingcoursesinmyspare

time,fromwhichIlearnedsometechniquestorhosting.Besides,makingspeechesismystrength.1know

whattosayoncertainoccasions.Furthermore,withagoodcommandoforalEnglish,Ihavenotroublein

communicatingwithothers.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校艺术节负责人写信，申请成为主持人。

【详解】1.词汇积累

年度的，每年的：annual—>yearly

技巧：technique—>skill

考虑...：oconsideration—>oaccount

此外：besides—>what'smore

2.句型拓展

同义句

原句:IdobelievethatTmqualifiedtobeahost.

拓展句：ThereisnodoubtthatI'mqualifiedtobeahost.

【点睛】[高分句型1]HearingthattheannualSchoolArtFestivalisapproaching,Tmwritingtoapplyto

beahostof（hefestival.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Firstofall,Ihavetakensomehostingcoursesinmysparetime,fromwhichIlearnedsome

techniquesforhosting.（运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）

3.DearSirorMadam,

IlearnfromthewebsitethattheOrganizingCommitteeofthe2022OlympicWinterGameswill

recruitvolunteersinourcity.IhopeIcanhaveachancetodosomethingforit.

Iaman18-year-oldboystudentinseniorhighschool.Inmyfreetime,IlikewatchingEnglish

movies,soIcanspeakEnglishfluently.Besides,Ilikesportsandalsoliketoreadbooksaboutsports.In

addition,IamoutgoingandIamalwaysreadytohelpothers.

Hopefully,Icanbechosentobeoneofthem.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析1本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为2022年冬奥会的志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：opportunity—>chance

在某人的空闲时间：inone'ssparetime—>inone'sfreetime

喜欢做某事：befondofdoingsth.—>likedoingsth.

乐于助人：bewillingtohelpothers—*bereadytohelpothers

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hopefully,Icanbechosentobeoneofthem.

拓展句：IhopeIcanbechosentobeoneofthem.

【点睛】[高分句型1]IlearnfromthewebsitethattheOrganizingCommitteeofthe2022OlympicWinter

Gameswillrecruitvolunteersinourcity.（运用Tthat引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型211hopeIcanhaveachancetodosomethingforit.（运用/that引导的宾语从句»省略了

that）

4.DearMr.Brown,

Iamwritingtoexpressmydeepestgratitudeforthemoneyandbooksyousentme.Icouldnothave

returnedtoschoolwithoutyourhelp.Thankyousomuch.

IhavebeenworkinghardsinceIwentbacktoschool.Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudieswith

thehelpofmyteachers.Theyoftenpraisemeandencourageme.Butforyourhelp,Imighthave'eft

schoolandcouldn'thavegotsuchagoodeducation.Ihavemadeupmymindtostudyharderandmake

greaterprogress.

Howareyougettingonwithyourlifeandwork?Iwouldliketomeetyouinperson,butIhaveno

opportunitytodoso.Wouldyoupleasesendmeaphotoofyourself?

Thankyouagainforyourgeneroushelpandbestwishes!

YoursSincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以一名失学儿童的身份给在中国工作的Mr.Brown

写一封感谢信，感谢他对自己的资助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

进展；进行：getonwith—*getalongwith

机会：opportunity—>chance

决心、；决定：makeupone'smind—>dctcnninc

表达：express-*voice

2.句式拓展

简单句变更合句

原句：Iwouldliketomeetyouinperson,butIhavenoopportunitytodoso.

拓展句：ThoughIwouldliketomeetyouinperson,Ihavenoopportunitytodoso.

【点睛】【高分句型11Butfbryourhelp,Imighthaveleftschoolandcouldn,thavegotsuchagood

education.（运用了含蓄的虚拟语气）

【高分句型2]IhavebeenworkinghardsinceIwentback（oschool.（运用了since引导的时间状语从句）

5.参考范文：

DearTerry,

Havingreceivedyourletter,I'mhappytowritetoinformyouabouttheerhucourse.Itwillstartthis

SaturdayandwilllastuntiltheendofJuneat（heschoolmusichall.Itwillbeheldonceaweek,andeach

lessonwilllastfortwohours.

TheerhuteacherwillbeMr.Li,whohasperformedbothinourcityandabroad.Hecanreallymake

theerhusing.Inclass,you'llbeshownthecorrectwaytoplayandtaughthowtomovethebowsmoothly.

TeacherLiwillalsointroducethehistoryoftheerhuandsharesomefamouserhumusic.

I'msureyouwillfindthiscourseveryrewarding.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry在你校国际部学习，他

对中国的二胡非常感兴趣，想了解学校二胡兴趣班的相关情况。请你给他写一封邮件介绍一下相关

情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

收到信：receivealetterfromsb—►hearfromsb.

流畅地:smoothly—*glidingly

著名的：famous—>wcll-known

值得的：rewarding—>worthwhile

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原右J：HavingreceivedyourIcucr,I'mhappyiowrite（oinformyouaboutihcerhucourse.Itwillsianthis

SaturdayandwilllastuntiltheendofJuneattheschoolmusichall.

拓展句：Havingreceivedyourletter,I'mhappytowritetoinformyouabouttheerhucourse,whichwill

startthisSaturdayandwilllastuntiltheendofJuneattheschoolmusichall.

【点睛】[高分句型1]TheeihuteacherwillbeMr.Li,whohasperformedbothinourcityandabroad.

（运用了who引导定语从句）

[高分句型2]lnclass,you'llbeshownthecorrectwaytoplayandtaughthowtomove（hebowsmoothly.

（运用了不定式作定语，“疑问词+不定式♦•作宾语）

6.DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouarecuriousaboutmycareerplanning,I'mwritingtotellyousomedetailsaboutit.

Mydreamjobistobeadoctor.Herearethereasons.Initially,mygrandfatherisanoutstandingdoctor.

Inspiredbyhim,Iamdeterminedtobecomeadoctor.Additionally,thecorona-virushasmadeitsway

aroundtheworld.Thereisnodenyingthatdoctorsandnurseshavemadegreatcontributions.Toachieve

mydieain,IplantoapplytoPekingUniversitytoenrichmyknowledgeandimprovemyabilitythere.

Thatismycareerplanning.IwonderifIcouldknowyours,iwouldbegratefulifIcouldreceiveyour

earlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Peter写封邮件，介绍你的职业规划。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：initially-firstly

杰出的：outstanding—♦extraordinary

实现：achieve—>realize

感激的：grateful—>thankful

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Initially,mygrandfatherisanoutstandingdoctor.Inspiredbyhim,Iamdeterminedtobecomea

doctor.

拓展句：Inspiredbymygrandfather,whoisanoutstandingdoctor,Iamdeterminedtobecomeadoctor.

［点睛］［高分句型I］Knowingthatyouarecuriousaboutmycareerplanning,Tmwritingtotellyou

somedetailsaboutit.（运用了现在分词作状语）

［高分句型2］IwonderifIcouldknowyours.（运用/if引导的宾语从句）

7.Goodafternoon,everyone!

It'sagreathonortobehereandsharesomethingwithyou.Rubbishisbeingproducedeverysingle

day,whichhasbecomeabigheadacheineverycity.Tosolvethisproblem,thegarbageclassification

activityhasbeenlaunchedinourcitysincelastmonth.Theadvantagesofgarbageclassificationarcas

follows.

lbbeginwith,garbageclassificationcanreducetheamountofwaste.Accordingly,thecostofdealing

withwastewillbebroughtdowngreatly.What'smore,someofthewasteisofvalue.Toreuseandrecycle

thiskindofwasteistosaveresourcestoalargeextent,whichalsocontributestoenvironmentalprotection.

Garbageclassificationisameaningfulandrewardingthing.Ifeveryonecandoit.smallthingscan

makeabigdifference.Let'sworktogetherfbrabetterandcleanercity!

Thanksforyourattention?

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为有关“Garbagesorting”的英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

减少：reduce—>decrease

数量：amount—*quantity

此夕卜：what'smore—^besides

处理：deal\vith=handle

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Tosolvethisproblem,thegarbageclassificationactivityhasbeenlaunchedinourcitysincelast

month.Theadvantagesofgarbageclassificationareasfollows.

拓展句：Tosolvethisproblem,thegarbageclassificationactivityhasbeenlaunchedinourcitysincelast

month,theadvantagesofwhichareasfollows.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Rubbishisbeingproducedeverysingleday,whichhasbecomeabigheadachein

eveiycity.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

［高分句型2］Ifeveryonecandoit,itissmallthingsthatcanmakeabigdifference.（运用了it强调句句

式）

8.Onepossibleversion:

Inordertoinspireourpatriotism,ourschoolheldanonlineEnglishSpeechContestwiththethemeof

"ILoveMyMotherland”.

HardlyhadIknownthetopicwhenIinvolvedmyselfinmakingpreparationsforthecontest.I

recalledthecountlessmomentsIhadexperiencedandthestoriesIhadreadinbooksandnewspapers.

Havingwell-prepared.Igotdowntomydraft.Woniedaboutmypronunciation,Iaskedmyforeignteacher

forhelp,whogavemeusefulguidance.Facingtheonlinejudges,Ideliveredthespeechwithconfidence

andgot/wonthefirstprize.

Theprizeremindedmeofmyefforts.Mostimportantly,patriotismwillberootedin（hedepthofmy

heart.Iwillstudyharderforourmotherland.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上个月，你参加了你们学校举办的主题为“我爱我的祖国”的线

上英语演讲比赛。请你为班级的英语板报写一篇短文，介绍你参加这次比赛的经历。

【详解】1.词汇积累

鼓舞：inspire—>encourage

比赛：contest—»compctition

无数的：countless—*sumless

有用的：useful—>helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变更合句

原句：Havingwell-prepared.Igotdowntomydraft.

拓展句：SinceIhavewell-prepared,Igotdowntomydraft.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Inordertoinspireourpatriotism,oursclioolheldanonlineEnglishSpeechContest

withthethemeof“ILoveMyMotherland”.（运用了不定式作目的状语）

［高分句型21HardlyhadIknownthetopicwhenIinvolvedmyselfinmakingpreparationsforthecontest.

（运用了部分倒装）

9.RobotsintheFuture

Ithinkmoreandmoreintelligentrobotswillbeusedinthefuture.

Robotswillplayanimportantroleinfactories.Theycandosomeheavyanddangerousjobsthere.In

ourdailylife,robotscanhelpusdomostofthehousework.Theycanhelpusdosomecleaning,cooking

andwashing.Theycanalsolookaftertheelderly,babiesandpatients.They,lleventakeexercisewithus.

Inmyopinion,robotswillchangeourfuturelifeinmanyways,makingitmorecolorful.However,

it'sunwisefbrustodependheavilyonthem.Ashumans,helpers,robotsshouldbeusedproperly.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文，要求考生适当发挥想象力，以“RobotsintheFuture”为题写篇

短文参加学校英语作文竞赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

运用：use—>putintouse

重要的：important—>csscntial

每天的：daily—♦everyday

在我看来：Inmyopinion—*AsfarasI'mconcerned

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Robotswillplayanimportantroleinfactories.Theycandosomeheavyanddangerousjobsthere.

拓展句：Robotswillplayanimportantroleinfactoriesbecausetheycandosomeheavyanddangerous

jobsthere.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Inmyopinion,robotswillchangeourfu:urelifeinmanyways,ma