2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(35)参考范文书面表达精选

1、- 1 - 2013 高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（ 35）及参考范文：书面表 达精选 1，第四部分：写作（共两节，满分 40 分） 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） Mrs. Williams, my next-door neighbor, have a big house with a beautiful garden in front of them. She is very proud of her house because of it is always clean and tidy. While cleaned the carpets one da

2、y she suddenly saw a little mice run across her dining room. She felt terrible ashamed, for she used to telling others that mice were found only in dirty houses. She quickly asked her daughter Jenny help catch the mouse. It takes them almost half an hour to catch the mouse. Afraid of being laughed a

3、t by other people around her, Mrs. Williams wanted her daughter to keep it the secret. 第二节 书面表达（满分 25 分） 最近， 校车的安全引起了社会的关注。 政府在征集校车安全的条例，请你用英语写 篇短文，提出合理建议并向英语周报投稿。要点如下： 1 严期格限制乘坐人数； 2 定期进行安全教育； 3 设置专门停靠站点； 4 严格挑选合格司机。 5 注意，词数： 100 左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 改错： 1.have has 2.them it 3.of 去掉 4.cleaned cleanin

4、g 5. mice mouse 6.terrible terribly 7.telling tell 8. 加 to 9.takes took 10.the a 书面表达：-2 - In order to make sure of the safety of school bus, I have the fallowing suggestions.P Above llj StriiCtly limit the number of the students who take the school hus. We should never Forget mor 已 i 门吕 truction三 a

5、bout traffic safety should be given to studerrts me 呂 ulml 驻 Only by knowing what to do during an emergency car they protect themselves. Besides, spacial steps should be set for school buses, */hich no other vehicles are allowed to use Lastly; a skillful and qualified driver can better guarantee the

6、 safety of students. I do hope that Students can be free of danger and enjoy school lifev * （2011 松江区 5 月） 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你叙述倾 听的重要性，并说明你的理由。 参考范文 Being a Good Liste ner As we all know, being a good listener plays an important role in making effective com mun icati on and establis

7、hi ng good relati on ship among people. The reas on is that while listening attentively to others, your respect can be felt by the speaker. Besides, you un dersta nd what is being said better and the con versati on will go more smoothly. If parents are willing to listen carefully to what their child

8、ren are saying, gen erati on gap is sure to be n arrowed. If teachers like to liste n to their stude nts, they will find it easier to tailor their teach ing to the stude nts n eeds. If the stude nts are patie nt eno ugh to liste n to each other, not only will the frien dship be promoted, but they ca

9、n also lear n from each other, thus making up for their own disadva ntages. Being a good listener is more than listening with head nodding. From my perspective, you should pay attention to the speakers body Ianguage, for it presents the speakers feeli ng and emoti ons. In additi on, eye con tact is

10、n ecessary, but you remember n either to make too much nor too little, or it may cause misunderstanding. In short, being a good liste ner is very importa nt, which can n ever be stressed结束 -3 - too much. Therefore, be a good listener from nowon! Thats all for my personal opinion. * （2011 福建四地六校联考） 如

11、今许多学生喜欢在学习和生活中和别人进行攀比，请以 Should We Compare Ourselves with Others ?为题写一篇文章。 1 文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 2. 只能选择一个赞同或反对的观点； 3. 文中不可出现考生信息，词数 120。 Nowadays many stude nts would like to compare themselves with others n ot only in study but also in life. 参考范文(1) Nowadays many students would like to compare themse

12、lves with others not onl _ in study but also in life. _ In my opinion, comparing with other people is a good thing to us. Firstly, our society n eeds comparis on to develop. Only whe n compari ng ourselves with others can we know the aspects which we are weak in, then well make efforts to improve ou

13、rselves to a higher level. As an old say ing says “ Among any three people walk ing , I will find something to learn for sure. Their good qualities are to be followed, and their shortcomings are to be avoided ” . Secondly , things are different from each other . Only through comparison, can we know

14、the differences between us, and find the world is colorful. So it is advisable to compare ourselves with others .In this way, the society can be in directly developed. 结束 -4 - 参考范文(2) _Nowadays_man y_stude nts_would_like_to_compare_themselves_with_others_ not_onl _ y_in_study_but_also_in_life._ To b

15、e fran k, I dont think it is wise to compare ourselves with others. I dont deny the fact that we can ben efit from it, but pers on ally I thi nk it does more harm than good. As our classmates have men ti on ed, by compari ng ourselves with others, we may lose heart, get lost, and it may lead to brea

16、k ing off the relati on ship with our friends. Whats worse, it may cause the childrens negative emotion, such un happ in ess, in security and envy. If pare nts pay more atte ntio n to other childre n in stead of their childre n, they may n eglect their childre ns feeli ngs, which will lead to the ch

17、ildrens misunderstanding and vicious circle. So in order to have a harm ony society its un wise to compare ourselves with others. * 士7 2,第二节 短文改错（共 10 小题，每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分） Dear Tom, I m very glad to learn from your e -mail that you and your sister will come to Xi st an an d call on me on July. 1 .

18、And I m terribly sorry that I can t meet you at the airport because I have to atte nd meeti ng in Beiji ng. Now let me to tell you the way to your home. When you got out of the airport, you can take Bus No.29 to YouYi Bus Station. Walk across the Friendship Street to the west, you can see a bookstor

19、e at the corner. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can see a bank your left. The apartme nt buildi ng I live in is n ext to the bank. Find Room 502, which my mother will be waiting for you . Best regard to you all. Yours, Liu Mei 第三节书面表达（满分 30 分）as -5 - 假定你是中学生李华，在搜狐微博上看到一位名叫 Wor

20、ryguy 的中学生发布的博文。请你根据 博文内容、写作要点和要求发布自己的观点。 首 微博 博客 相 播我来说两句 页 mt 册 客 Worryguy:A parents meeting is always meaning a complaints meeti ng to a slow stude nt. My pare nts will scold me whe never they come back from it. Now the mid-term exam is over and another terrible parents meeting is around corner.

21、What shall I do? Help! 表情点名 写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法； 2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）； 3. 提出至少两条建议。 要求: Dear Worryguy, This is really a tough problem to deal with. I n my opinion, _ 视频 发布 1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于 100 （不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。 -6 - Yours, LiHua 短文改错： And But meeting 前力口 a 去掉 to your-my got-get Walk-Walki ng straightly straight bank 后力口 on which-where(in which) regard-regards 作文： Dear Worryguy, This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a pare nts meeti ng. In stead, you d bet