S2书面表达解题要领

1、高考英语书面表达的高考英语书面表达的解题要求解题要求1. 切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点 2. 语言准确、得当语言准确、得当3 条理清楚、行文连贯条理清楚、行文连贯4. 高分高分(21-25分分)要求要求: 较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇 具备较强的语言运用能力具备较强的语言运用能力英语书面表达的解题要领（一）英语书面表达的解题要领（一）n1. 认真审题认真审题 切中题意切中题意 书面表达题提供情景的方法不外乎四种书面表达题提供情景的方法不外乎四种: 图画、图表、提纲、短文图画、图表、提纲、短文。不论那种方法，。不论那种方法，我们

2、在审题时，一定要全面、准确地把握我们在审题时，一定要全面、准确地把握所提供的信息。首先要弄清所写的内容、所提供的信息。首先要弄清所写的内容、体裁、格式以及具体要求，只有理解题意，体裁、格式以及具体要求，只有理解题意，才能抓住写作要点。才能抓住写作要点。英语书面表达的解题要领（二）英语书面表达的解题要领（二）n把握时态把握时态 语言得当语言得当n正确使用动词的时态、语态是书面表达的重点。正确使用动词的时态、语态是书面表达的重点。 在高考阅卷中，对时态、语态的错误扣分是很重的！在高考阅卷中，对时态、语态的错误扣分是很重的！n尽量多用习语尽量多用习语 n忌用中式英语忌用中式英语 常见错误举例分析n一

3、、动词错误一、动词错误nThere were hundreds of students couldnt go to school because they were poor.nHe wouldnt able to work out the problem.nHe managed to swim across the river, but failed.nWei Fang fell from the tree and her leg hurt.nHe was put into prison for three years in his thirties though he hasnt done

4、 anything wrong. 常见错误举例分析(续)n二、中式英语二、中式英语nHe cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary.nRecently our village has great changes.nThe factory broke out a big fire last Sunday.nMr Li praised Li Pings rapid progress in English study.nI was very difficult to refuse and had to receive her invitation. 常见错误举例分

5、析（续）n三、结构错误三、结构错误nBeing a young man, he worked in a bank and a newspaper.nHe wrote about 300 stories, some of them had been translated into Chinese.nEach year many people die and are hurt on road accidents. nWe should teach children dont play and ride bikes on the road.nWhile riding a bike, keep to

6、the right of the road.英语书面表达的解题要领（三）英语书面表达的解题要领（三）紧扣要点紧扣要点 条理清楚条理清楚 可先在认真审题的基础上尽量用英语列可先在认真审题的基础上尽量用英语列出提纲。这样就不容易遗漏要点。出提纲。这样就不容易遗漏要点。 叙述时，我们一般地可按照提示语的先叙述时，我们一般地可按照提示语的先后，参照时间、事件、图画逐一叙述后，参照时间、事件、图画逐一叙述 (如句如句式需要，也可适当调整语序式需要，也可适当调整语序) ，就比较容易，就比较容易地达到地达到“条理清楚条理清楚”的要求。的要求。英语书面表达的解题要领（四）英语书面表达的解题要领（四） 连贯流畅

7、连贯流畅 书写规范书写规范 恰当地使用关联词语，使句子间的逻恰当地使用关联词语，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅，例如：连贯流畅，例如：句子连贯的相互关系举例nHe was interested in English and in maths as well.(递进)nHurry up, or else youll miss the last bus for the school. (转折) nWed like a single small house, while they would rather live in a flat.(

8、对比)nEither you must improve your work, or Ill fire you.(选择)nIt must have been raining all night, for all the roads are wet. (解释)nThere seemed to be no chances of success, therefore, all of them went away. (结果)nTo sum up, all your efforts will be highly paid. (总结)nFirst of all, you should dig a hole;

9、 secondly, put a young tree in it; then, cover the tree with some earth and press it; and lastly, pour some water in it.(顺序)。下面四幅图描述了你班同学上周的一次研究性活动。请你根据图画内下面四幅图描述了你班同学上周的一次研究性活动。请你根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文容用英语写一篇短文,在某英语刊物上介绍这次活动情况在某英语刊物上介绍这次活动情况.One possible version Last week, we did research into how laid-off

10、 workers get their new jobs. We had a discussion in three groups and then began our research separately.n Group One surfed on the Internet and learned that most of the laid-off workers had already got their new jobs. In the vocational training centre, the students in Group Two were told that there w

11、ere five training courses for laid-off workers. After training, they began working as repairers, cooks, typists, household workers and salespersons. The other students interviewed some laid-off workers who had got new jobs. A woman said, “With the help of the city government, Ive found my job.”n Wha

12、t a great deal weve learned through the research! 优作欣赏优作欣赏 2001年高考书面表达题 One possible versionDear Dick, How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I dont know abou

13、t others, but I used to have to work even at weekends, doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Whats

14、 more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things. Best wishes Li Hua优作欣赏优作欣赏 2002年高考书面表达题 One possible versionDear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had aboutwhether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions a

15、re divided on the question. 60% of the students areagainst the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park shouldbe free of charge. People need a place where they can rest andenjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep somepeople away. Whats more, it will become necessary to bu

16、ild gatesand walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40 % think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to pay plantsand young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua优作欣赏优作欣赏 200

17、3 年看图书面表达题 Another possible versionnDear Bob,n Im glad to learn from your letter that youll come to China in September to study Chinese in Jianxin Chinese School. Ive looked everywhere and, fortunately, found you a flat, which lies on Fangcao Street, only one stop away from the school.You can take a Bus No 11 straight there. The flat has an area of 25 square metres, including a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is not very high, only 500 yuan a month. I hope that itll be c