四级作文讲解(漫画)课件

writingwriting1.审题（1-2mins)2.构思提纲(3-5mins，确定主题)3.写文章(20mins)4.修改检查(5mins)写作概述

1.审题（1-2mins)写作概述StepsPre-writing:仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题Para.1:describethepicture简要描述漫画（who,what,when,where…）开门见山 TIPS:1.写作的directions部分虽然给出了大致的 主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫

画内容直接议论！！！ TIPS:2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生

有！！！StepsPre-writing:仔细阅读题干，确定写作主Para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message

揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。 TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。Para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionPara3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建议，重申观点主题句(b)对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向Para3.：giveyourconclusion.实例一实例一看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：

漫画信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”确定写作主题：年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：确定写作2.作文提纲（结构）第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…）:爷爷教导孙子：如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。2.作文提纲（结构）第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate.Thepicturedepictsayoungma第二段：解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第二段：解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。

Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearly

soastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,

canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.

第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。ToDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.实例二Directions:Forthispart,you四级作文讲解(漫画)ppt课件看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：

漫画“expressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions”确定写作主题：Totakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.(未雨绸缪)看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：确定写作2.作文提纲（结构）2.作文提纲（结构）

Thepicturefocusesonapersonwhoisstandinginfrontofthesea,watchingthetiderising.Abovethepicture,thereisathought-provokingsentencewhichtellsusthatweshouldtakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示图画深刻含义（揭示主题）。Thepicturefocusesonap第二段：针对图画所表达的观点（主题）进行举例论证

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithvisionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateifhehadbeenlaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第二段：针对图画所表达的观点（主题）进行举例论证WritingTechniques:

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Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateifhehadbeenlaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.WritingTechniques:第三段：总结全文。

Allinall,itisadvisableforanyonetomakeprecautionarypreparationsfortheunexpecteddifficultiesordisastersinlifeinadvance.第三段：总结全文。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshould

Youarerequiredtowriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

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