2024届高三英语读后续写-寻找失踪的小猫 讲义

一、原文阅读下面材料,

根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,

使之构成一篇完整的短文。①Wemovedtoournewplace,andeverythingwasnewandunfamiliar.Ididn'thavenewfriends,somostofthetimewhenIwasfreeathome,IstayedwithSocky,mycatandfriend.Onemorninginwinter,itwasverycoldoutsideandpeoplemainlystayedindoorstokeepwarm.BeforegoingofftomyhighschoolinOuyen,Victoria,Icalledourpregnant

（怀孕的）

cattobefed,butshedidn'tcome.Ithoughtshe'dprobablyfoundsomewheretohaveherkittensandwouldturnuplater.Butshedidn't.②WhenSockystilldidn'tcomeatdinnertime,Ianxiouslyaskedmymum,"WhereisSocky?"Butshedidn'tknoweither.Thenextday,Sockystilldidn'tappearandIreallystartedtoworry.Sockyhadkeptmecompanyforyears,andshewasjustlikemyfamilymember.③Sockyhadgivenbirthtosomelovelykittensbefore.Shehadahabitofhavingherkittensinstrangeplaces,sofirstIcheckedallherhidey-holes

wheresheusedtostaybutshewasn'tinanyofthem.Ibecameextremelyanxious.Whatcouldhavehappened?"Whereareyou,dearSocky?"Havingwaitedforhoursagain,Icouldn'tsitstill.ThenextdaywasSaturdayandIhadthewholedaytosearchforher.Thinkingoverallthepossibleplaceswhereshecouldshelterherself,Irecheckedunderthehouse,theninthegarageunderandbehindoldbooks,everyplaceIcouldthinkof,butstillnoSocky.④AfterlunchItooksomefoodscraps

（剩饭）

withmeincaseIfoundher,thenbegansearchingthebackshed,whichwashugeandfilledwithcardboardboxesfullofjunkandemptytea-chests

（茶叶箱）.Afteraboutanhourofmovingcardboardboxesfromoneplaceto

anotherandbackagain,Iwastiredout.Isatdownonanupturnedtea-chesttohavearestwhenIheardfaintmewing

（喵）.

Iputmyheadupagainsteachofthetea-chests,pressingmyearagainsttheplywood

（夹板）

soIcouldcatchthefaintsounds.IhadtomoveeachonecarefullybeforeIcouldlookinside.Para1:

Finally,IfoundSockyandherthreetinykittens.Para2:

Sockywasverypleasedtoseemeandpurred

（发出呼噜声）

asloudlyasshecould.

二、原文难点梳理3.Garage名词，车库4.Shed名词，小屋，库房1.Sitstill坐着不动，这里stil作形容词，静止的2.Shelterherself动词，为..提供庇护处三、拉波夫叙事结构分析原文新家、新生活与寻找失踪的猫Socky叙述了搬家到Ouyen,Victoria的新环境，以及主角与Socky的深厚情感。时间背景设定在一个寒冷的冬季早晨，为Socky的失踪和随后的寻找行动提供了铺垫。明线:Socky的失踪和主角的寻找行动。暗线:主角对Socky的担忧和对她的情感深度。细节:Socky怀孕了，她以前也曾在奇怪的地方生下小猫，主角对Socky的寻找过程详细描述。进展---Socky的失踪与主角的寻找高潮--主角最终在后棚的茶叶箱里找到了Socky和她的三只小猫，Socky对主角的出现感到非常高兴，发出呼噜声。主题：故事通过主角与宠物Socky的情感纽带，反映了人与宠物之间深厚的情感联四、情绪发展：从担忧到欣---兴奋，激动心理发展：1.感受到生命的坚韧和母爱的伟大。2.体验到人与动物伙伴之间不可动摇的爱、信任、连接四、原创下水文Para1:

Finally,IfoundSockyandherthreetinykittens.1)Socky

和她的小猫依偎在棚子最远的角落里，躲在一堆布满灰尘的旧茶柜后面。Nestling

in

thefarthestcorner

oftheshed,Sockyandherkittens

hiddenbehind

astackof

old,

dusty

tea-chests.2)尽管外面的冬天很冷，但小毛球挤在索基身边的景象牵动着我的心弦。Thesightof

the

littlefurballs

huddlingtogether

besideSocky,

despitethebitingcold

ofthewinteroutside,

tuggedatmyheartstrings.3)这些新生儿出生仅几天，就证明了生命的韧性以及母亲与孩子之间持久的纽带。Thenewborns,

barelyafewdaysold,were

atestamentto

life'sresilience

and

theenduringbondbetweenamotherandherchildren.4)过去几天里缠绕在我胃里的担忧立刻消失了，取而代之的是对这个勇敢的小家庭的强烈感情。Theworrythathad

knottedmystomach

forthepastdays

dissolvedinstantly,

replacedby

anoverwhelmingsurgeof

affection

forthissmall,bravefamily.Para2:

Sockywasverypleasedtoseemeandpurred

（发出呼噜声）

asloudlyasshecould.5)Socky眼中的感激之情，让每一刻的担心和寻找都值得。ThegratitudeinSocky'seyes

made

everymomentofworryandsearch

worthit.6)当我轻轻地伸出手去抚摸她的头时，她用鼻子蹭了蹭我的手，她的爱和信任的姿态清晰可见。AsI

gentlyextendedmyhand

to

strokeherhead,she

nuzzledmyhand,her

gestureofaffectionandtrustclear.7)然后我拿出随身携带的食物残渣，温柔地喂它们。IthentookoutthefoodscrapsIhadbroughtalong,feedingthem

withatenderness.8)在确定它们都吃完之后，我把它们抱起来带回了家，我的心里充满了一阵兴奋Afterensuringtheyhadalleaten,I

scoopedthemup

andcarriedthembacktoourhome,myheart

brimmingwith

asurgeofexhilaration.9)这一刻，质朴的情感和团聚的喜悦交织在一起，有力地提醒着人们，人类和动物伴侣之间存在着坚定不移的爱。Thismoment,

ablendof

rawemotion

and

thejoyofreunion,was

apowerfulreminderof

the

unwaveringlovethatexistedbetween

humansandtheir

animalcompanions.五．语言积累：thefarthestcorner最远的角落hiddenbehindastackof隐藏在一堆..后面布满灰尘的dustyThesightof...tuggedatmyheartstrings...的景象触动了我的心弦thelittlefurballs小毛球挤在一起huddlingtogetherdespitethebitingcold尽管寒风刺骨Thenewborns新生的仅仅几天大barelyafewdaysold是...的证明atestamenttolife'sresilience生命的韧性theenduringbondbetweenamotherandherchildren母亲与孩子们之间持久的纽带knottedmystomach使我的胃感到紧绷立刻消失dissolvedinstantly被....替代replacedbyaffection深情Made..worthit使...变得值得gentlyextendedmyhand轻轻伸出我的手strokeherhead抚摸她的头用鼻子蹭我的手nuzzledmyhandgestureofaffectionandtrustclear表现出