辽宁省2024七年级英语下册Unit11Howwasyourschooltrip写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT11Howwasyourschooltrip？UNIT11写作能力提升练写一篇关于学校旅行的短文。内容包括：时间、地点、天气、交通、活动和感受等。AHappyTrip

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［谋篇布局］理清文章思路，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.上个星期六，我和朋友们一起去了云台山。LastSaturday，I

wentto

⁠YuntaiMountain

withmyfriends

⁠.2.我们很开心可以乘坐大巴车去那个美丽的地方。Wewerehappyto

takethebusto

⁠thebeautifulplace.wenttowithmyfriendstakethebusto3.沿途我们看到一些农场和村庄。Wesawsomefarmsandvillages

alongtheway

⁠.4.我们发现那边有很多游客。Wefound

therewere

⁠lotsoftouriststhere.5.

我们在旅途中拍了很多照片。We

tookmanyphotos

⁠duringthetrip.6.我们都很累，但是玩得很开心。Wewerealltired，but

wehadagoodtime

⁠.alongthewaythereweretookmanyphotoswehadagoodtime叙述发生在过去的事情用一般过去时，运用总分总的方式构建文章结构，层次清晰，使文章形成一个整体。［巧妙衔接］AHappyTripIhadagreatschooltriplastSunday.IwenttoYuntaiMountainwithmyfriends.Theweatherwassunny.Wewerehappytotakethebustothebeautifulplace.Wesawsomefarmsandvillagesalongtheway.Andittookusabouttwohourstogetthere.Wefoundtherewerelotsoftouriststhere.Someofthemwereforeigners.Atnoon，wesatunderatreeforourlunch.Allthefoodwasdelicious.Wetookmanyphotosduringthetrip.Wegothomeat6：30p.m.Wewerealltired，butwehadagoodtime.［连句成篇］

请根据下列提示内容，以第一人称写一篇60词左右的日记。1.时间：6月8日星期六；2.天气：晴；3.早上6点起床，然后骑自行车去公园，在公园玩得很开心；4.中午和父母在一个快餐店吃午饭，下午和同学在学校打篮球，从下午4点一直到下午6点；5.晚饭后和父亲一起去散步，父亲给我买了一张CD；6.这一天我过得很开心。Saturday，June8th

Itwassunnytoday.Igotupat6inthemorningandthenIwenttotheparkbybike.Ienjoyedmyselfthere.Atnoon，Ihadlunchwithmyparentsatafast-foodrestaurant.Intheafternoon，Iplayedbasketballwithmyclassmatesintheschool.Weplayeditfrom4pmto6pm.Aftersupper，Iwentforawalkwithmyfather.HeboughtaCDforme.

Whatahappydayitwas！⁠

Itwassunnytoday.Igotupat6inthemorningandthenIwenttotheparkbybike.Ienjoyedmyselfthere.Atnoon，Ihadlunchwithmyparentsatafast-foodrestaurant.Intheafternoon，Iplayedbasketballwithmyclassmatesintheschool.Weplayeditfr