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2025年高考试题分类汇编
专题12读后续写
Writing1
(2025年全国一卷)MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmall
gatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.
Therewasplentyofspacetorthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn'tcountedon:My
brotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermy
niece'ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,Iaskedhimtowatch
Tobyandkeephimoutside.
Myplanwasworkingouljustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyard
andgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryone
wentindoors.
Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn'twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn't
happywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaverather(hanforcetheissue.
Afewdayspassed,andIhadn'theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesfbrhimto
comeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:"Notachance."Clearly,hewasunhappyover
thewaywehadparted.AfterallJhadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he'llgetoverit,Ireasoned.
Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcall
first.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes.Hewasfacing
healthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstant
companion,theonewhokepthimgoing.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.
[答案】Onepossibleversion:
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.IhadbeensofocusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrolthatIfailedto
considerhowimportantTobywastomybrotherduring(hisdifficultlime.Mypridehadkepimefromreachingout.
andnowmonthshadpassedwithoutaproperconversation.Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoice
message,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingifwecouldmeet.Tomyrelief,hecalledbackthenextday,and
weagreedtogettogethersoon.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade.Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Heopeneditwithasurprisedsmile,and
foramoment,neitherofusspoke.Thenwehugged—somethingwehadn'tdonesincebeforehiswifepassed
away.WesatontheporchwithTobyrestingbesideus,andIhandedhimtheboxofbiscuits.uThankyou,“hesaid
quietly.Wetalkedforhours,laughing,rememberingoldtimes,andslowlyrebuildingwhathadbeenlost.AsI
watchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrother'sleg,Iknewwewerefinallyonthepathtohealing.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者因担心弟弟的狗Toby影响聚会,要求弟弟看好狗,后因天气
变化导致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂。两个月后作者意识到自己的过错,主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉,
最终兄弟俩和解的故事,展现了亲情中理解与包容的重要性。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我意识到是我错了。”可知,第一段可描写作者反思自己在聚会上只顾控制局面,忽
视了Toby对弟弟的重要性,因骄傲迟迟未联系弟弟,最终通过电话留言道歉并约定见面。
②由第二段首句内容“带着妻子做的饼干,我来到了弟弟家门口。”可知,第二段可描写弟弟开门时的惊讶
与沉默,兄弟俩拥抱和解,坐在门廊上谈心,看着Toby依偎在弟弟腿边,明白亲情修好的意义。
2.读写线索:反思过错——电话留言道歉一约定见面——带饼干登门——拥抱沉默一谈心和解——领
悟亲情
3.词汇激活
行为类
①道歉:apologize/saysorry/makeanapology
②拥抱;hug/cmbracc
③重建:rebuild/restore/reconstruct
情绪类:
①宽慰:relief7comfor(/satisfaction/ease
②惊讶:surprised/shocked/astonished
【点睛】[高分句型1]IhadbeensofocusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrolthatIfailedtoconsiderhow
importantTobywastomybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.(运用了“so...that…”引导结果状语从句以及how引
导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorand
askingifwecouldmeet.(运用了现在分词短语作状语以及if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrother'sleg,Iknewwcwerefinallyonthepathto
healing.(运用了as引导时间状语从句以及省略that的宾语从句)
Writing2
(2025年全国二卷)"Whatisyourname?”isaquestionmostfrequentlyaskedwhenpeoplemeetfbrthe
firsttime.Butfbrme,itwasthefirstchallengeIencounteredasaninternationalstudentinIreland.
ThepronunciationsystemoftheChineselanguageisquitedifferentfromthatofEnglish.Fornativespeakers
ofEnglish,someChinesewordsarcratherdifficulttopronounce.MygivennameQiuyu(秋雨),forinstance,
happened(obeagreatchallengeformanyofthem.EverytimeIgaveaself-introduction,Ihadtoexplainhowto
pronouncemynameatleastfivetimes,yettheystillcouldnotsayit(hewayIdid.
Onceinalecture,theprofessortriedrepeatingmynameaftermeoverandoverinfrontofthirtyclassmates.I
reallydidnotknowwhetherIshouldcontinuecorrectinghimorsimplydropthematter.Ifearedthatmyclassmates
mightgrowtiredofmyeffortsorevenlosepatiencewithme.Afterall,Ididcareabouthowothersv/ouldthinkof
me.1realizedthatifIdidn'tstop,theentirelecturewouldberuined."It'sokay,professor,nIshrugged(耸肩).The
awkwardmomentendedwiththeclasseruptingintolaughter.Iforcedasmile,unsurehowtorespondfurther.
Afterthatincident,Istoppedactingasa“Chineseteacher.''Insteadofcorrectingotherswhentheywere
strugglingtopronouncemyname,Ijustsmiledandnoddedapprovingly.Thisapproachsparedmethediscomfort
ofhavingtoover-explain.However,Isoonfoundthatbydoingso,Imightbelosingsomethingmoreimportant:the
opportunitytoshareasmallpariofmyculturalidentity.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Inaclassdiscussion,Iwasinvitedtoexplainthemeaningofmyname.
Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameuptomeafterclass.
[答案]Onepossibleversion:
Inaclassdiscussion,Iwasinvitedtoexplainthemeaningofmyname.Standingup.Ifeltamixof
nervousnessandexcitement.uMyname,Qiuyu,combinesthecharactersfbrautumnandraininChinese,Ibegan,
myvoicesteady."Autumnrepresentsharvestandmaturity,whilerainsymbolizesnourishmentandgrowth.
Together,theyembodyatimeofabundanceandrenewal."AsIspoke,1noticedtheraptattentionofmyclassmates,
theireyesreflectingcuriosityandrespect.Itwasamomentofconnection,abridgebuiltbetweenculturesthrough
thesimpleactofsharingmyname.
Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameuptomeafterclass.Theysurroundedme,theirquestions
pouringoutlikeastream.k4WhatothernameshavebeautifulmeaningsinChinese?”“Canyouteachushowto
writeournamesinChinesecharacters?”Ismiled,feelingawarmthspreadthroughme.Itookoutapieceofpaper
andbegantosketchoutcharacters,explainingeachstrokeanditssignificance.Throughthisinteraction,Irealized
thatbyembracingmyculturalidentity,Iwasnotonlypreservingmyheritagebutalsoenrichingthelivesofthose
aroundme.Itwasasmallyetmeaningfulsteptowardsfosteringculturalunderstandingandappreciation.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者作为国际学生在爱尔兰因中文名字发音难而遭遇挑战,
之后在一次课堂讨论中分享名字含义,意识到分享文化身份重要性,并借此与同学增进文化理解的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“在课堂讨论中,我被邀请解释我名字的含义。”可知,第一段可描写作者在课堂讨论
中解释自己名字的含义,并感受到同学们的专注和尊重,意识到这是一个文化交流的契机。
②由第二段首句内容“我的许多同学都很感兴趣,卜课后都来找我。''可知,第二段可描写课后同学们对作
者名字背后的文化产生浓厚兴趣,纷纷提问,作者通过教他们写中文名字,进一步加深了彼此的文化理解
和欣赏。
2.续写线索:课堂受邀请解释名字的含义——作者阐释名字的寓意——同学们专注倾听——同学们对名字背
后的文化感兴趣——作者教他们写中文名字——感悟文化桥接
3.词汇激活
行为类
①代表:represent/standfor
②解释:cxplain/illustratc
③保护:presen^e/protect
情绪类
①紧张:nen^ousness/tension
②兴奋:excilement/thrill
[点睛]【高分句型1]AsIspoke.Inoticedtheraptattentionofmyclassmates,theireyesreflectingcuriosityand
respect.(运用了as引导的状语从句以及独立主格结构)
[高分句型2]Throughthisinteraction,Irealizedthatbyembracingmyculturalidentity,Iwasnotonlypreserving
myheritagebutalsoenrichingthelivesofthosearoundme.(运用了thai引导的宾语从句和“notonly...butalso...”
连接两个并列结构)
2025年高考模拟试题分类汇编
Writing1
(2025河南三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sittingatthebaroverlookingmyaunt'skitchen,Inenouslyeyedtheslimy(黏滑的),grayoyster(牡蛎)
staringatmeintheface.Somesaltybiscuitsandaflavoringboxsatinnocentlynearby.
Ihadnevereatenanoyster.Ilovedseafood,though.TdneverhadanysealbodorfishthatIdicn'tlike,andI
lovetotrynewthings.Butthesightofthatslimy,shapelessthing...Ugh.Ijustcouldn'tdoit.
Mydearestaunlkindlyencouragedmetohaveatry.Cautiously,Istuckonewithalinyforkandliftedit
ontothesaltybiscuitinmylefthand.There!Thatwassomethingatleast.I'dputthethingontoabiscuit.Imoved
thebiscuittomyrighthandandbroughtitclosetomymouth.1(smelledsalty.
“DoIbiteintoitorjustputthewholethingintomymouth?Howdoyoudothis?”Iasked.Everyoneelse
wasjustbusyenjoyingeverymouthfulwhiletheyjokinglymadefunofmefornottrying(hem.I'mnotaperson
whogivesineasily.Whywasthissohard?
Thewheelsinmyheadbegantotum.TheaveragefemaleintheUnitedStateslivesapproximately
seventy-eightyearsorjustover683,000hours.And,oncethey'regone,they'regone.Sincelifeisaone-way
journey,weshouldtreasureeverychancetoengagewithnewexperiences.Iwastedoneofthoseflyinghourstrying
topreparemyselftotryordosomethingnew.Now,havinganoysterwasanewstart.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Istaredatthebiscuitwiththatoysterinmyhand.
TheoysterincidenthaschangedhowIviewsomanythings.
[答案】Onepossibleversion:
/staredatthebiscuitwiththatoysterinmyhand.Myheartraced,butItookadeepbreath,recallingthe
fleetingnatureoftime.IdidamenUl"1...2...2%...2%...3!”andpoppedihewholethingintomymouth.Alfirst,
itsslimytexturemademewrinklemynose,butasIchewed,arich,saltyflavorexplodedonmytastebuds.Amix
ofsurpriseanddelightwashedoverme."Oh,man!^^Iexclaimed,44ItisthemostdeliciousthingthatIhaveever
had."Myauntandtheotherschccrcd,andIrealizedIhadovercomemystrangefear.
TheoysterincidenthaschangedhowIviewsomanythings.Thistime,itwasanoyster,buttherehavebeen
toomanytimes1'vcletthathappeninmylife——waitingtoolongtotryordosomething.Andthen,oncedone,it
wasnotterriblebutsomethingIreallyenjoyedsomuch!WhatfiinIcouldhavehadifonlyI'dbeenbraveenough
totrythingssooner!WhensomethingcomesalongthatpushesmeoutsidemycomfortzoneandI'mfeeling
hesitant,Iwillrememberthatday.IthelpsgivemethepushIneedtogetoutofmyshell.Whenopportunityknocks,
nowIwillsay,44Eattheoyster!”
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我手里拿着那块嵌着牡蛎的饼干,怔怔地盯着它。”可知,第一段可描写作者盯着手
中的牡蛎饼干,内心挣扎后决定尝试的感受以及最终在姑姑和众人的欢呼中克服了恐惧。
②由第二段首句内容“那次牡蛎事件改变了我看待很多事物的方式。”可知,第二段可描写吃牡蛎的事件让
作者反思过去因犹豫错过的机会,意识到尝试新事物的乐趣等感悟。
2.续写线索:盯着牡蛎饼干——内心挣扎后尝试——口感与味觉体验——众人欢呼克服恐惧一事件带来
的观念改变——反思过去错过的机会——面对挑战时的激励一领悟要把握机遇
3.词汇激活
行为类:
①放入口中:popintoone'smouth/putintoone'smouth
②克服:overcome/conquer
③推断,促使:pushcs/drivc/forcc
情绪类:
①惊喜:surprise/amazement
②犹豫:hesitant/doubtful/uncertain
[点睛][高分句型1]Altlrsi,iisslimylexiuremademewrinklemynose,butasIchewed,arich,saltyflavor
explodedonmytastebuds.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]Andthen,oncedone,itwasnotterriblebutsomething[reallyenjoyedsomuch!(运用了省略关系代
词的定语从句修饰先行词somcihing)
Writing2
(2025河南模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
MiaThompson,a22-year-oldgirl,stoodatasignificantturningpointinherlife.Asthefinalbellofthe
schoolyearrang,shefellbothexcitedandworried.
“Hey,Mia!Readyforsummer?”herbestfriend,Chloe,approachedwithawidesmile."Un】,sorta,“Mia
replied,lookingdownatherfeet.t4Ijustdon'tknowwhatIshoulddoaftergraduation.Chloesaid,"You'reoneof
thesmartestpeopleIknow!What'sholdingyouback?”Miatookadeepbreath."It'sjust...everythingfeelsso
uncertain.Iwanttobeaprofessionalsinger,butIalsofeellikewritingismything.^^
Assummerunfolded,Minwasoftenfoundatthevillagelibrary.Oneevening,shewasdrawntoaself-help
bocktitledFearless:HowtoEmbrace(」用抱)Uncertainty.Thesentencesstiuckher."Sometimes,youhavetoface
uncertaintydirectlyinsteadofrunningawayfromit.Yourfutureisn'tasinglepath;it'sanever-changingjourncy.^^
Thenextday,ChloetoldMiaasummermusicfestivalwouldbeheldintown.44Youshouldenter!Youcan
sing!”shesuggestedenthusiastically.t4Noway!”Miaprotested,herchecksreddening.4tGivcitashot!Remember
howeveryonelovesyourvoice?,,Chloeurged.Thenthebook'swordscrossedhermind—it'snotjustaboutthe
thingitself;it'saboutshowingupandbeingseen.Hesitantly,sheagreed,thinkingmaybethiscouldbeachanceto
overcomeherfears.
Thedayofthefestivalarrived.AfterMia'sperformance,Mr.Henderson,alocalmusicproducer,approached
herandsaid,“Youhaveabeautifulvoice,Mia.Haveyoueverthoughtaboutpursuingmusicprofessionally?,,
Shocked,shesmiledslightlyandexplained,don'tknowwhetherthat'swhatIreallywant.Tinscared,honestly.^^
“Fearisapartoftheprocess,Mherepliedwannly,“Sometimesthepathchoosesyou.Whynotcometomystudio
nextweek,wheremanyartistsworktogether?Nopressure—justexplore.”
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Spendingallnightthinkingaboutit,Miadecidedtogo.
“Whatifyoupursuedboth?”Chloesuggested.
[答案】Onepossibleversion:
Spendingallnightthinkingaboutit,Miadecidedtogo.Themomentshesteppedintothestudio,surrounded
byinstnimcntsandcreativity,sparkarosewithinher.WithMr.Henderson'sencouragement,sheexperimentedwith
melodiesalongsideestablishedartists,losingherselfinthejoyofcreation.However,doubtssoonreturned.Whatif
musicdidn'tbringlastinghappiness?Shewantedtobeawritertoo.Hesitatingbetweenthestudio,whereshefelt
livelyyetinsecure,andheiwritingcesk,wheieshefeltsafeyetsomespiiitless.MiaturnedtoChloefoihelp.
“Whatifyoupursuedboth?^^Chloesuggested.Chloe'sadviceinspiredhertoconsiderthepossibilityof
combiningthetwoseeminglyunrelatedpassions.Thatnight,afteralongtalkwithChioe,Miapennedherthoughts,
integratingherloveforwritingandsingingintoasong.Asthelastversefinished,thetwofriendshigh-fivedeach
otherandMiaknewshedidn'thavetolimitherselftoasingledefinition.ThefollowingmonthssawMia'sgrowth
shewrotelinesforhersongs,expressingherselffearlessly.Thefuturewasunpredictable,butMiawas
determinedtoshapeoneforherself.
【导语】本文以22岁的米娅面临人生选择为线索,讲述她在毕业之际纠结于歌手与作家两种职业方向,在
好反克洛伊鼓励下参加音乐节并获音乐制作人赏识,面时邀约米娅陷入新的迷茫,最终在克洛伊启发下找
到将两种热爱融合的方向的故事。
【详解】L段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“米娅为此思索了一整夜,最终决定前往。”可知,第一段可描写米娅走进音乐工作
室后的体验,在创作中感受到快乐,但随之而来的是对未来不确定性的担忧,最终向克洛伊寻求帮助。
②由第二段首句内容…如果你两者都追求呢?‘克洛伊建议道。”可知,第二段可描写克洛伊的建议启发
米娅将写作与歌唱相结合,米娅通过创作歌词实现两种热爱的融合,并在这个过程中坚定了探索未来的决
心。
2.续写线索:决定前往工作室一工作室的创作体验与迷茫一向克洛伊求助——获“两者兼领”建议——
尝试融合创作——实现热爱融合并坚定未来方向
3.词汇激活
行为类:
①走进:steppedinto/walkinto
②求助:turntosbforhelp/seekhelpfromsb
③融合:integrating/combine
情绪类:
①喜悦:joy/delight
②勇敢的:fearlessly/courageously
【点睛】[高分句型11Themomentshesteppedintothestudio,surroundedbyinstrumentsandcreativity,spark
arosewithinher.(isJI]/ihemoment引导时间状语从句以及过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2]Hesitatingbetweenthestudio,whereshefeltlivelyyetinsecure,andherwritingdesk,whereshe
feltsafeyetsomespiritless,MiaturnedtoChloeforhelp.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语和where引导的定
语从句)
Writing3
(2025河北模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成•篇完整的短文。
EmilyandZoehadbeenbestfriendssincesecondgrade.Theywentto(hesameschool,playedonthesame
soccerteam,andevenworematchingbracelets(手链).Everyonearoundthemsaidtheywereliketwosidesofthe
samecoin.Theybelievednothingcouldcomebetweenthem.ButthingsstartedtochangewhenanewgirlDaisy
cametotheirclass.
Oneday,theirteacher,Mr.Lynn,announcedabiggroupproject."Pickapartner,hesaid.Emily
immediatelyturnedtoZoe,expectingherusualsmileandaquick"yes."Buttohersurprise.Zoewasalready
talkingtoDaisy."I'mgoingtoworkwithDaisythisZoesaidtoEmily,almosttoocasually.Emilyfeltlike
theairhadbeenknockedoutofher.Shenoddedandforcedasmile,butinside,shewasconfusedandhurt.That
night,shestaredatherphonescreen,hopingforamessagethatnevercame.
Overthenextfewdays,sheavoidedZoe.Theirtextsstopped,theynolongersattogetherduringlunch,and
thebracelets(heyonceworedailywerenowleftalhome.Evenduringclass,Emilyfoundithardtofccus,hermind
replayingthemomentwhenZoechosesomeoneelse.
Weekspassed.Theschoolorganizeda(hree-daycampingtripin(hemountains.Studentsweredividedinto
severalgroups.EmilyandZoeendedupinthesameone,alongwithDaisyandtwootherclassmates.Thoughthey
barelyspoke,theyworkedtogethertopuluptentsandgatherfirewood.Theirconversationswerelimitedtoshort,
politeexchanges—nothinglikebefore.
On(hesecondnight,darkcloudsrolledinandheavyrainsoonfollowed.Everyonerushedintotheirown
tents.Emilyquicklydiscoveredthatherswasleaking.Coldandupset,shewentoutside,seekingforhelp.Thewind
howledaroundher,andeachraindropfeltlikeatinyneedleagainsthsrskin.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Justthen,shesawaflashlightapproaching.
WithZoe'shelp,theysoonfixedthetent.
[答案]Justthen,shesawaflashlightapproaching.Inthedimlight,Emilyrecognizeditwasnobodyelsebut
Zoe.HerfacewasfilledwithconcernwhenshesawEmilystrugglinginthecold."Ithoughtyoumightneedhelp,“
Zoesaidsoftly.Emily'seyeswidenedwithamixofsurpriseandrelief.Withoutaword,Zoesteppedforwardand
examinedthetent.Sheexplainedthatshecouldfixitwiththespareraincoatshehadbrought.Astheyworked
together,theawkwardnessgraduallymeltedaway.EmilyrealizedthatZoestillcaredandtherainseemedtohave
washedawaythemisunderstandingsbetweenthem.
WithZoeshelp,theysoonfixedthetent.Backinsidethetent,Emilytookadeepbreathandsaid,”【wassohurt
whenyouchoseDaisyfbrtheproject?,ZoclookedatherapologeticallyandrepliedJTmsorry.Ijustthoughtit
wouldbebettertoincludethenewcomer,butInevermeanttohurtyou."Thatnight,theyhadanopen-hearted
conversation,clearingupalltheconfusion.Untilthendidtheyrealizethatfriendsneedopencommunicationand
theirbondbecameevenstronger.Fromthenon,(heyworetheirmatchingbraceletsagain,asymboloftheir
unbreakablefriendship.
【导语】本文以友谊为线索展开,讲述Emily和Zoe原本是好友,新同学Daisy到来后,Zoe与她交好,Emily
心灵受伤,学校露营时,她们分到同一个组,Emily帐篷漏水。
【详解】I.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“就在这时,她看到一个手电筒正在靠近。”可知,第一段可描写来的是Zoe,Zoe主动
帮忙修理帐篷,两人之间的尴尬逐渐消除。
②由第二段首句内容“在Zoc的帮助下,她们很快修好了帐篷。”可知,第二段可描写两人在帐篷里敞开心
扉交流,消除误会,友谊更加坚固。
2.续写线索:
Zoc前来帮忙———起修理帐篷——消除尴尬——敞开心扉交流——友谊更坚固
3.词汇激活:
行为类
①认出:recognize/idcntify
②解释:cxplain/cxpound
③选择:choose/selecl
情绪类
①惊讶:surprise/astonishment
②尴尬:avvkwardness/embarrassmsnt
【点睛】[高分句型1]HerfacewasfilledwithconcernwhenshesawEmilystrugglinginthecold.(运用了从属连
司when引导时间状语从句)
牌分句型2JAstheyworkedtogether,(heawkwardnessgraduallymeltedaway.(运用了从属连词asrj\导时间状
语从句)
[高分句型3]Untilthendidtheyrealizethatfriendsneedopencommunicationandtheirbondbecameeven
stronger.(运用了部分倒装和连词ihat引导宾语从句)
Writing4
(2025江西三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Whenmydaughterturnedseven,sheaskedaboutmyjob.*iteachadultstodrawatacollege,Iexplained.
Hereyeswidened.<lBut...whydotheyneedtoleam?Didtheyforgethow?”Thequestioncutthroughme.
Childrenusecrayonslikemagicsticks.Thatweek,shedrewa“MarsPalace^^whereastronaut-princesses
roderainbowrockets.Ioncedreamedtoobig.Attwelve,Itraineddailytobeatennischampion,racket(球拍)
makingshinylinesinsummersun.Atsixteen,Ifillednotebookswithdrawings—spaceshipsflying:hroughspace
holes,heroessavingcitieswithpaint.Butadulthoodthrewthosedreamsintoneat,dustyboxeslabeled''Childish
Things.”
“Bepractical,“Itoldmyselfwhenchoosingabusinessdegree.<4Artdoesn'tpaybills."Yetlateatnight,I
sawmyyoungerselfinthemirror—aghostholdingemptydrawing-books.
OneOctoberafternoon,everythingchanged.Mydaughterbeggedtoexplorethestoreroom.Beneathold
bags,wefoundabox,insidewhichlaymyteenagetreasures:atennisticketpiece,aribbonfromaschoolartfair,
andmostamazingly,adrawingbook.Itspageswerefullofcrazyideas—treeswithmagicfruits,trainsunder
oceanwaves.shegasped,touchingalionwithwingsIdrewwhenIwasherage,“Whystopbelieving
these?^^
Thatnight.Isatinfrontofablankcanvas(画布).Themoonlightshoneonmyhands.Thelion'seyesinmy
olddrawingseemedtoaskme,“Whendidyoustopdreaming?^^Suddenly,IrealizedIhadstoppedmyselfby
alwaysneedingaclearplanbeforeIletmyselfdream.
Thenextmorning,Iboughtnewpaints.Ididn'tpaintnormalthingsliketreesorhouses.Iusedbright
purplesandgolds.Mydaughterdancedaroundme,usingherfingerstomakeclouds.Wepainteddogsdoingmath
anddinosaursgrowingflowers.Forthefirsttimeintwentyyears,Ifeltfreeagain.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Threemonthslater,thecommunityannouncedapaintingcontest.
Attheawardceremony,asilver-hairedjudgeapproachedme.
【答案】(possibleversion)
Threemonthslater,thecommunityannouncedapaintingcontest.Mydaughterpulthepostertcmydrawing
boardandsaid,"Mom!Let'spaintourgardendinosaurs!MFormanydays,wcpaintedtogetheronabigwooden
board.SometeenagerslaughedatourbigT-Rexwithaflowercrown,butkindshopkeepersgaveusfruits.On(he
lastnight,wheniwasdrawingstarsonthedinosaur'sclaws,myoldbusinessteacherwalkedby.^interesting...but
is(hisuseful?**lieasked.BefbieIcculdsayanything,mydaugliteisaid,t4Dieainsdon'tneedlesuines!”
Attheawardceremony,asilver-hairedjudgeapproachedme."Yourpaintingdidn'tfitanyofouroldrules,“
shesaidwithasmile."Sowemadeanewprize:MostCourageousReimagining.,^Later,ascamerasflashedandwe
heldourGoldenCup,Isawateenagegirlinthecrowddrawingquickly.Inhernotebook,astronautswerepainting
wallsonMars.Ileaneddownandsaid,"Don'tletanyonetellyouthat'simpossible."Shesmiledanddrewrainbow
rocketsaroundthem.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在女儿七岁询问自己工作后,回忆起自己儿时充满梦想,如
想成为网球冠军、进行艺术创作,但成年后因追求“实际”而放弃梦想。在女儿发现作者年少时的绘画作
品后,作者重新拿起画笔,与女儿一起自由创作,重状自由的感觉。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“三个月后,社区宣布举办一场绘画比赛。”可知,第一段可描写作者和女儿参赛的过
程。包括女儿提议参赛、一起创作过程中遇到的情况,如青少年的嘲笑、店主的支持,以及老师的质疑等。
②由第二段首句内容“在颁奖典礼上,一位满头银发的评委走近我。''可知,第二段可描写评委对作者画作
的评价,作者获得新奖项,以及看到人群中一个女孩画画,作者对她的鼓励。
2.续写线索:社区宣布比赛一女儿提议参赛一一起创作遇嘲笑与支持及老师质疑一颁奖典礼评
委评价——获得新奖项——鼓励女孩追梦想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①放置:put/place
②适合:fit/suit
③举起:hold/lift
情绪类
①微笑:smile/beam
【点睛】[高分句型1]Onthelastnight,whenIwasdrawingstarsonthedinosaur'sclaws,myoldbusiness
teacherwalkedby.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]BeforeIcouldsayanything,mydaughtersaid,“Dreamsdon'tneedresumes!”(运月了before引
导的时间状语从句)
Writing5
(2025山西模拟)阅读卜.面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Wewereapoorfamily,livinginasmallapartmentintheheartofthecity.Mymomworkedtirelesslyasa
waitress,strugglingtomakeendsmeet.Despiteourfinancialstruggles,shealwaysfoundwaystobringjoyintoour
lives.
Oneautumnday,shetookmysisterandmetothezooandlaterthemuseumwiththemoneyshehadsaved
foralongtime.Thezoowasfilledwithlaughteraswcwatchedthemonkeysswingfrombranchtobranchandthe
giraffesstretchtheirlongneckstoreachtheleaves.Themuseumwasequallyfascinating.Ithadavastcollectionof
ancienthand-madeobjectsandinteractiveexhibits.Wcwereinaweoftheworldthatopenedupbeforeus.Even
thoughitwasasimpleouting,itfeltlikealuxuriousadventure.Weeventreatedourselvestoamealatanearby
dinerforlunch,enjoyingeverybiteasifitwereafeast.
Butaswewalkedtowardsthebusstoptoheadhome,mymom'sfacesuddenlyfell-Wehadoverspent,
andtherewasn'tenoughmoneyleftfbrallthreeofustoaffordthebusfare.Therealityofoursituationhituslikea
coldwave.Wewerefacinga6-milewalkbackhome,andtomakemattersworse,ithadjuststartedsnowing.The
skywaspaintedgray,andthesnowflakeswerefallinggentlybutsteadily,promisingtoturnintoaheavysnowfall
soon.
WeduckedintoasmallChineserestaurantnearby,hopingtofindawayoutofourproblem.Mymom,witha
mixofembarrassmentanddetermination,askedtheownerifwecouldusethephonetoasksomeonefbraride.The
owner,Mr.Chen,lookedatuswithkindnessinhiseyes.Heaskedwhathappenedandmymomexplainedour
sitiuition.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Withouthesitation,Mr.Chengaveusthemoneyweneededtotakethebus.
AsIenjoyedthefoodfromMr.Chen,thewords
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