雅思大作文2 观点与提纲

1、,第二章 列观点 列提纲,2. 列观点,How to plant a tree?,审题：准确,- 挖坑,列观点：合理,- 浇水,论证观点：适度,- 施肥,语言：多变 衔接,- 修枝,1. 审题 2. 表述观点 同意什么 3. 论证观点 why / how,1. 列观点步骤,列观点大忌,分论点含义,宽泛,大忌,观点要切题 观点要具有普遍性 观点要切合实际 观点不宜涉及政治、宗教等敏感话题 观点要避免重复,s ts ts ts ts ts,妙计4法出观点,列表,分类,替代,推导法,T,1. 列表法,对比找差异 列表,1.1 方法,Do you agree or disagree with the

2、following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.,例题,人物模板,个人,他人,生活,外在感觉,工作,气质/ 外貌/ 穿着/ 吸引力,素质,诚实/正直/善良/修养/关心人,权利/ 责任/ 能力/ 贡献/ 抗压/ 挑战/ 影响/ 综合素质/ 角色重要性,人脉圈,朋友圈,认识,不认识,加深友情,扩展感情,disposition,cultivation

3、,1.2 列表法注意事项,clear reasonable,观点无重叠,Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed peoples lives. automobiles / bicycles / airplanes,Practice 小试牛刀,2. 分类法,宽泛、抽象 细化、分类,2.1 方法,增加,2.2 目的,入题点,讨论内容,Some high-School graduates go to travel or work for a period o

4、f time before they go to study in universities. Which one do you think is better , and why ?,例题1：,Some high-School graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities. Which one do you think is better , and why ?,例题1- 思路1,high- school graduates 文科生：liberal art

5、s students 理科生：science students 艺术类：art students,go to work 1. liberal arts students libraries / newspaper / reporter / clerk better grasp of high-level language 2. science students corporation / laboratory business transaction apply a theory to actual practice 3. art students art galleries / museum

6、s get a close contact with real artistic value,Some high-School graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities. Which one do you think is better , and why ?,例题1- 思路2,universities Comprehensive university Language School Engineering school College of arts,

7、Should a city try to preserve its old buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?,Practice: 小试牛刀,Should a city try to preserve its old buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?,Practice: 小试牛刀,Old buildings 不该拆 1. buildings of historic values 2. gorgeous

8、historic buildings 3. special ethnic architecture 要拆 1. unsafe 2. spoil the cityscape,1. buildings of historic values courtyard house / hutong / The Forbidden City part of Chinese traditional culture reveals the concept of the syncretism of nature and human” 2. gorgeous historic buildings Russian st

9、reet in Dalian enjoy the splendid houses / go shopping / travel 3. buildings with distinctive ethnic flavor Potala Palace a grand palace to accommodate Princess Wencheng represents national unity,People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why?,Practice1,gifts / presents 1. bi

10、rthday 2. high score 3. Valentines Day 4. bribe,3. 替代法,程度词 -est / only / ban / stop,3.1 方法,推翻绝对化逻辑,3.2 目的,1. 出绝对词 2. 翻绝对词 3. 出 词,3.3 步骤,找,推,找,替代,Some people think flight was the greatest invention in the 20th century and it has the biggest impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

11、?,例题1,Some people think flight was the greatest invention in the 20th century and it has the biggest impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,例题1,找替代 computers internet automobiles cell phones,Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way

12、to improve safety on the roads. Do you agree or disagree?,例题 2,Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. Do you agree or disagree?,例题 2,Other effective ways 1. pedestrians / cyclist 2. policeman 3. road,be professional and d

13、edicated,wide, clear and smooth,keep the traffic in order/do not jump the stop light,People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.,例题 3,People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.,例题 3,not f

14、or real 1. science fiction enrich knowledge about the universe and science intelligent, knowledgeable 2. romantic fiction/ sentimental novel feel like a warm flows inside a positive vision of the future 3. cartoons/ fairy tales stay young “if you carry your childhood with you, youll never become old

15、er. ” 4. horror stories sense stimulation exercise my guts,Playing a game is fun only when you win,Practice1 小试牛刀,Playing a game is fun only when you win,Practice1 小试牛刀,1. lose failure contributes to success 1st, learn what does not work 2nd, an opportunity to try a new approach. 2. be on a tie play

16、er: no one gets hurt and depressed spectator: chance to enjoy more 3. game itself is fun make friends and ease ourselves from stress,A persons childhood years (the time from birth to 12 years of age) are the most important years of a persons life.,Practice 2,A persons childhood years (the time from

17、birth to 12 years of age) are the most important years of a persons life.,Practice 2,no one grows older by living a number of years 1. youth awareness stage grow mature from naivety 2. maturity actualize the personal worth and ultimate life value 3. senectitude a carefree period full of memories,4.

18、推理法,1.TM STREEC $ 2. 推中间过程,Technology & Efficiency 科技（提高）效率 Mind & Soul 头脑对应精神 Society & Crime 社会犯罪严重 Time & Space 时间对应空间 Rights & Responsibilities 权利对应义务 Environment & Health 环境影响健康 Employment & Competition 就业竞争激烈 Culture & Population 文化人口创造 Money & Fun 金钱买到乐趣,Some people think students should focu

19、s on a few subjects while others think they should study a wide range of subjects.,例题1,Focusing on certain subjects allow them to better concentrate on the related knowledge, which enhances their efficiency in study. -efficiency Focusing on specific subjects enable them to grasp these subjects bette

20、r.mind Studying a wide range of subjects help students broaden their horizons.-mind Understanding a wide variety of subjects enable students to find a job more easily after they graduate.-employment Studying subjects such as music and painting give students a deeper understanding of arts and culture

21、 in general.-culture,练习：,The media should not report crimes in detail. To what extent do you agree?,Technology & Efficiency Mind & Soul Environment & Health Employment & Competition Culture Money & Fun,Detailed reports of crimes may make citizens apprehensive about their own safety. -soul Detailed c

22、overage of crimes may help potential criminals avoid mistakes in their criminal plan and increase the already high crime rate.-crime Reports of violent crimes are cruel to the victims of these crimes.-right,Citizens can better understand how cirminals carry out their cirminal plans through reading reports about these crimes, which helps law-abiding citizens learn knowledge about protecting themselves against crime.-mind Such