大学英语四级辅导作文

1、大学英语四级辅导作文部分一.大学英语四级考试对写作的要求二.大学英语四级考试考核的写作评分标准三.2006-2010年四级写作试题趋势分析四.大学英语四级考试写作类型分类五.写作的一般步骤。六.写作中的一些模板句型及框架 一.大学英语四级考试对写作的要求。 大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教学要求中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能在半小时内就一般性话题或提纲写出不少于120词的短文，内容基本完整，中心思想明确，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。”二.大学英语四级考试考核的写作评分标准1、切题所谓切题是指在形式上诸如

2、段落、字数、 文体、格式等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。2、表达清楚、条理清晰本要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。3、文字通顺，连贯性较好本要求考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。4、基本无语言错误本要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握，包括语法与拼写两部分。 1.本题满分为15分。 2.阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷 1 2份。 3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为所阅文章与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为所阅文章稍优或

3、稍劣于该分 数则可加1分(即9分)或减1分(即7分)。但不得加或减0.5分。 4.评分标准： 2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中 有一些是严重错误。 11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 (注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。) 5.字数不足应酌情扣分。 CET-4 110-

4、119 ,100-109, 90-99, 80-89 ,70-79, 60-69, 50-59, 3）的情形，将头与尾描述出来即可，比较好的方法就是在句中描述最后一个与第一个相比变化了多少。碰到多变量、每个变量多数据的情形，大家应首先进行分类，分成上升、下降两类，或者上升、下降、不变三类，这样问题就迎刃而解了。（二） 第二段的写作此段的主题句(topic sentence)的问题。此句或主观或客观，并无拘束，只要上下文风格统一即可。主观： We believe/I believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon. In my

5、 mind, the reasons why the overseas students are on the rise are as follows.主观之变体（使用插入语，突显主语）： Three reasons, we believe/I believe/in my mind, can account for this phenomenon. Three reasons, I firmly believe, can account for this phenomenon.注意:插入语的使用属于看似平淡却极富功力的技巧，可以达到很好的效果。客观：Several reasons can ac

6、count for this phenomenon.在主题句之后，可以使用连接词分两个、三个或四个方面来写，其中分三个方面来写最为常见。这里就与普通的说明文与议论文一样了可以由最重要的到最不重要的，也可以由最不重要的到最重要的，也可能平行分布，依具体情况而定，不一而足。（三） 第三段的写作第三段直接写结论的情况已基本没有了。如果这篇文章讲的是一个令人担忧的问题，那么这一段写解决办法的可能性最大。如果这篇文章讲的是一个好的变化，那么这一段很可能是两种情况可能写负面的影响或存在的问题，或者写未来趋势或发展方向。上述均根据具体情况而定。（四）图表作文基本模式 (a) 段落一：According to

7、 the figures given in the diagram/picture/pie chart, we can see that _ is increasing in the past _, while _ is decreasing. (从整体上对事物发展的趋势作概括) 段落二：Possible reasons for this are as follows. (问题产生的原因) On the one hand, _. (原因一) On the other hand, _. (原因二) Furthermore, _. (原因三) 段落三： From what has been ana

8、lyzed, we can draw a conclusion that _. (得出结论) As a matter of fact, with the improvements in _, the trend will go on in the future. (提出改进的方法或措施) Therefore, _. (最后再强调观点) (b) 段落一：The chart gives us an overall picture of the _(图表主题). The first thing we notice is that_(图表最大特点). This means that as _, _(进

9、一步说明). 段落二：We can see from the statistics given that _(图表细节一). After ving_(细节一中的第一个变化), the _Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化). The figures also tells us that_(图表细节二). (数据位置，如In the second column), we can see that _accounts for _(进一步描述). 段落三：Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that_(结论). The reas

10、on for this, as far as I am concerned is that_(给出原因). / It is high time that (发出倡议) Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given

11、below Average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week2002年6月四级真题1. 上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。Model CompositionGreat changes have taken place in student use of computers in the university. The hours

12、 the student spent on computers per week skyrocketed from about 2 in 1990 to 20 in 2000, more than 9 times higher. This rapid increase proves that students were in closer contact with computers. To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons as listed below. In the first pl

13、ace, with the drop in prices of computers, more students could afford computers, therefore they could spend much more time with computers. In the second place, the computers were applied to wider and wider use and students had to take advantage of this modern invention. Last but not the least import

14、ant, the development of society pushed computers into more dormitories. Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers. To begin with, many students still have no computers of their own. Whats more, many students use computers only to play e-games and browse porn we

15、bsites, which causes harm to their mind.（172 words）3. 应用文题型 （Applied Writing） 应用文的范围很广，包括书信、便条、广告、简历以及通知等诸方面。英语考试中的应用文以书信为主，兼或有报告、演讲词、导游介绍之类的要求，这一点在大学英语四级考试中屡有所见。（1）. 书信 书信是一种应用非常广泛的应用文形式之一。英文书信的种类很多，但可以把它们归为两大类，一类是私人书信（personal letters），另一类是商务书信（business letters），例如：申请信、求职信、推荐信、证明信、感谢信等。英文书信的书写有一定的

16、格式。一封完整的书信应包括寄信人的地址和日期；收信人的姓名和地址；称呼、正文、结尾和签名Two letter formsWritingPractical WritingWritingPractical WritingDear Sir/Madam, Im writing in response to your advertisement for a PA / Secretary to the Managing Director. Although I did not have to travel in my previous job, I would be very willing to do

17、so.I will be available for interview at any time, and look forward tohearing from you. Yours faithfully, William Jeremy SmithPeace HotelLing Gong Road 1818Beijing, ChinaMail box No.23, GX universityNanning, Guangxi , China27 Jan, 2008缩进式发信人地址及发信日期收信人姓名和单位地址WritingPractical WritingDear Sir/Madam,Im w

18、riting in response to your advertisement for a PA / Secretary to the Managing Director. Although I did not have to travel in my previous job, I would be very willing to do so.I will be available for interview at any time, and look forward tohearing from you.Yours faithfully,William Jeremy SmithCompa

19、ct System96 Rosewall Drive, South town, SO3 4BTMail box No.23, GX universityNanning, Guangxi , China27 Dec, 2007齐头式书信题的写作方法：（一）信封格式： 名字、信箱、地域范围由小到大，写在右下角（与我们相反）。（二）信纸格式： 日期：月日年/日月年(美国习惯：May 15(th),2003;英国习惯:15(th) May,2003。) 称呼: 后面的标点是逗号或冒号(美国人在称呼后用冒号,英国人用逗号)。Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concer

20、n： 正文：空4个字节或者顶格写，段与段之间空行） 签名：sincerely yours书信写作的五点要求：1、开门见山说意图2、咨询/ 建议1、2、3、3、不同内容可分段4、感谢客气不可少5、期待回信成老套（三）开头段：1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你）Dear Sir/ Mr. Smith, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department./ I am a at your / I am a at your college, enrolled in the course./ My name is, I

21、 am2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）Dear Tom, Hello / Hi. How are you? / I hope everything is fine. / How are things going with you?/ How are you getting on in / getting along with.?3. 解释写信的原因（1）致谢： Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada./ I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for/ I would like t

22、o thank you most sincerely for（2）抱怨： I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room./ I wish to make a complaint about/ I am writing to draw your attention to.（3）致歉： I am writing to you because I am unable to./ I am terribly sorry that./ I would like to express my apologies for

23、not being able to.4）询问： I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire some information about/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor. / I would like some detailed information on/about.（四）结尾段： 1、发出请求（1）Please give this matter your immediate attention. （2）I would very much appreciate it ifas soon

24、 as possible.2、提供帮助（1）I hope thesewill be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information. （2）will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you3、再次表示歉意或感激（1）Thank you for your kind assistance.（2）Please accept my heartfelt

25、 thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.（3）I am sorry that I cannot, and trust that you will understand.（4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.（5）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4、期盼回信： （1）I look forward to your prompt response. （2）Looking

26、forward to a prompt reply,（3）I expect to hear from you very soon. （4）I hope to receive your reply shortly.书信实例分析讲解实例1-2002年1月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You

27、should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。 实例1-2002年1月真题 January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President,I am a student here. I write you this letter to say a few words about the dining

28、 halls in this university. First, the food in the dining halls is not delicious enough, either too salty or too watery, especially in Dining Hall 3. Second, the prices in dining hall are very high and usually we cannot afford it. Third, the dining halls are always very crowded and we can seldom find

29、 seats if arriving there not early enough and the tables are not cleaned in time. Anyway, what is good is that the working staff in the dining halls are quite kind, friendly and patient, and they usually try their best to meet the demand of the students and teachers.Thus I suggest enlarging the dini

30、ng halls and improving the quality of foods and reducing the prices to what is acceptable to all the students. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Ming实例2-2003年12月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friends inquiry about applying for admission to your

31、 college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 建议报考的专业及理由报考该专业的基本条件应当如何备考实例2-2003年12月真题A Letter of Reply to a Friend December 27, 2003Dear Xiao Ming, When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major o

32、f English. To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on. Whats more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market. In

33、order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements. In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. In the second place, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary, becaus

34、e they are the foundations for your future study. Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.” As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary. In addition, youd better

35、 spend some time on reading and writing. Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university. Wish you success! Yours, Li Ping（2）.公众演讲稿 实例-2005年1月真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman o

36、f the student union. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1 .你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力，性格，爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作， 2 .如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？ Model Composition Good morning, My fellow friends. I feel very glad and excited to have the honor of being a candidate for the president of

37、 the students union. I am a junior and come from the Foreign Language department. I think I can be qualified to work for the union as the president for the following reasons. I joined the department students union the moment I entered this university, and have been the president of that organization

38、 one year later. Consequently, I have accumulated rich experiences in organizing activities and communicating with students. Besides, I have a belief of serving for the benefits of students and that of the university as well. Both my fellow department-mates and teachers all give me high praises due

39、to the contributions I made during my term. More importantly, I believe I am a dynamic person full of passion for a variety of things. I am one member of the school basketball team. If I am lucky enough to be elected the president, I will contribute great efforts to serve the interests of our school

40、. Specifically speaking, I will organize various activities and do more exchanges with other schools to help our learning and make the life even more colorful. I sincerely hope you may give me a chance. Thank you.(3).导游解说词实例-2004年6月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a c

41、omposition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:Your role: a tour guideYour audience: a group of foreign tourists实例-2004年6月真题Your introduction should include: some welcoming words the schedule for the day a d

42、escription of the place the tourists will be visiting （e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.）You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody. Model Composition A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction Good morning, ladies and gentleman, we

43、lcome to Beijing. To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and its great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day. Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”, so I hope all of you will enjoy yo

44、urselves during this trip. The following is the schedule for the day. The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China. The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which are the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one

45、 thousand years ago. In the afternoon, we will go to the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors. Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall. Dating back to the seventh century B.C., the Great Wall was constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighbor

46、ing states. By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts. From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers. It is no doubt tha

47、t one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”.Above is the introduction to our arrangement. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time. (4). 海报（Posters）The Style of Posters 1. Subject Line 2. Text 3. Signature of Sponsor Poster Requirements1. Subject

48、line should be brief and clear, such as “Poster” or “Football Match”(content).2. Text should be vivid, concise and attractive.3. Signature of sponsor requires the name of sponsor and the date of poster. Sample 1 POSTER Do you want to know how to understand and appreciate films and TVs? Please come t

49、o attend the lecture on Aesthetics of Films and Televisions. Lecturer: Professor Shang Zuoshu, a famous aesthete in our province Time: April 2, 2010 Place: No. 101 lecture classroom, Library Building The Dept. of Chinese Language & Literature March 29, 2010 English Speech Contest Hosted by the Stude

50、nt Union of FLD (the Department of Foreign Languages), the 2nd English Speech Contest will be held in the classroom No. 210 of Shao Yifu Building at 7:00 p.m., Thursday, April 2, 2010. All are cordially welcome! The Student Union The Dept. of FLD Luoyang Normal University April 2, 2010Sample 2实例-200

51、6年6月真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a poster recruiting volunteers. You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below:1校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动，现招募志愿者2本次志愿者活动的目的、活动安排等3报名条件及联系方式Volunteers Needed Sample 3Volunteers Needed A voluntary activity in the summe

52、r vacation will be organized by the University Student Union. The Student Union will open free English classes for the youngsters in S.O.S Childrens Village. The classes will last for a week. Currently, we will recruit 5 volunteers to work as English teachers. The volunteers are requested to speak f

53、luent English. Those with English teaching experience are preferable. Besides the English skills, we expect the volunteers to be patient, open-minded with a loving heart. The Childrens Village will provide the volunteers with three meals a day and transportation from and to the university during the

54、 class days. Those who are interested in taking part in the activity, please send your resume to the email address before June 30th. The office of the Student Union will contact the chosen candidates for an interview before July 10th. The Student Union Luoyang Normal University M

55、ay 19, 2011Sample 3（5）通知announcement/notice Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement entitled Welcome to Our Club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline below:1. 本社团的主要活动内容2. 参加本社团的好处3. 如何参加本社团2007年6月四级真题 Welcome to our clubs! Welcome to join

56、 the English club! Do you have questions on how to overcome the difficulties in English learning? Do you want to know how to pass the College English Test? Do you want to improve your oral English? You will find out the answers from our activities. The activities in English club will help you to imp

57、rove your oral English which can give you an advantage in job interview. As the proverb goes, practice makes perfect. We provide you the opportunity to practice your oral English. Some people complain of the minimum chance to open their mouth to speak. The chance is right in front of you, so why hes

58、itate? If you want to join us, just call us at 02088888888 or send an email to , with personal information attached. And after two days, you will be a member of our club. So dont hesitate, join us! English club五. 写作的一般步骤。 1、审题 我们拿到作文后第一件事要做的就是审题。审题的作用在于使你的写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那么审题要审什么呢？

59、a 体裁 （议论文、说明文、描述文） 审题就是要审作文的体裁和题材。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括哪些呢？就四、六级考试而言，它包括议论文、说明文和描述文。从近些年来看，四、六级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如有一次四级写作题是这样出的： Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at least 100 w

60、ords and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: （1） 做合格大学生的必要性（2） 做合格大学生的必备条件（可以德智体等方面谈）（3） 我打算这样做 很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。我们认为说它是议论文是片面的。因为第一段要求写 “.必要性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；第二段要求写“.必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；而第三段要求写“.这样做”，说明本段要求写的是描述文。所以我们说在大多数情况下，四、六级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。 b根据不同体裁确定写作方法 我们审题的目的就在于