高考书面表达（7）求助信学案- 高三英语二轮复习

高考书面表达（七）求助信一．写作结构第一段：1.自我介绍2.写信原因3.写信目的第二段：具体问题第三段：1.表达感谢2.期盼回复二．经典套话1.自我介绍I‘mLiHua,astudentfromXingHuahighschool.I’mLiHua,whoisastudentfrom….I’mLiHua,a17-year-oldboy,studyinginXinHuahighschool.2.写信的原因Iheardthatyouareverygoodat…Myteachertoldmethatyouare…..Asweallknow,youare…3.写信的目的Now,Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp.4.做某事有困难Ihave(much)trouble/difficultyindoingsth.Ifinditextremelyhardformetodosth.5.希望，请求，表达感谢，盼望回复Isincerelyhopethatyoucan….Iwouldtruly/deeply/reallyappreciateitifyoucould…Yourgeneroushelpandimmediateresponsewillbetrulyappreciated.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Iwonderifyoucanrecommendsomeeffectivemethodsofdoingsth..6.具体需要帮助的事项Hopefullyyouwouldbesokindtogivemesomesuggestions/helponthefollowingproblems.Firstofall,(困难一)，whichhasannoyedmeforquitealongtime.Besides,（困难二），…..Finally,(困难三)8.常见的困难1）生活方面与人相处：getalongwellwithmyclassmates/thenewteacher/myparents把握时间：arrangeandmakefulluseofmyeverydaytimeforvaluablethings明确目标knowthepurposeofmylifeanddirectionofmyfuture.2)学习方面：不懂语法havetroubleinmasteringtheadvancedgrammarrulesandputthemintospeakingandwriting背单词容易忘记havetroubleinrecitewords,eventhoughIrecitewell,Ican’tremembersoon.三．范文学习范文一：2016年高考英语全国卷Ⅰ书面表达题：假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。内容分析:写作题思路非常清晰：写信目的---阐述写作背景---描述求助内容---期待得到回复---表达感谢。DearJenkins,I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.I’mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatI’veused.Iknowyouhaveabusyschedule,butI’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.Pleasefindmyapplicationletterandresumeintheattachment（附件）.Thankyouforyourkindness!YoursLiHua范文二DearRobotI’mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent.AsIknowyouareanexpertinEnglishlearning.I‘mwritingtoaskyouaboutsomeproblemsIcomeacross.Hopefullyyouwouldbesokindtogivemesomesuggestionsonfollowingproblems.Firstofall,EnglishissuchaheadacheformethatIamnotinterestedinit.Besides,Ihavemuchtroubleinrememberingwords,whichannoyedmeforquitealongtime.What’sworse,IamafraidtotakepartingroupdiscussionbecauseofmypoorEnglish.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucangivemesomesuggestions.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua实战演练：假如你是李华，最近你在学习英语上遇到一些困难，语法难以理解，不会用，害怕写作，希望你的美国笔友John能给你一些建议。可能用到的句子：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearJohn________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________