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2021届高英读后写习浙南名校联盟一次联考第二节读后续写(满分分)阅读下面短文:根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。DanniswasthecounterwhenhefirstwomanwithpulledtightlyworeblackbootsofsoftDannissecshewashiminitwasnotuntilsheturnedtothathebeauty,whichSheseemedawarethatherandloweredHisflightleavinganhour.killtime,steppedintoairportWhilesippingheflowofthroughterminal(航站楼)hecaughtoftheblack-haairedintheleathercoatagain,deepwithablondegirl
(金发女孩)."Invitefordrink?"DannisIn,theneitherofwhosewastowardWhennexthesawher,wasaandbecameawaresomeonepushinghim.Atfirst,hestartled受惊吓的anyonewouldbesotohim,buthesawithe“Busyplace,"Dannissaid.lookeduphimblushed.Wordlessly,shemovedjoinedtheintheDanniswasatwithhiswhenheintopocketforhiswallet,theempty.WhereIhaveleftit?Hiswasracing,第页共页
thecreditcards,theHisstirredwithverylikefear.girlwhoneartome!"tohimself.Allatonceunderstoodhadpickedhispocket.First,findpoliceman,tellwhathasHewouldneverhiswalletDannisgrittedhisWhenglancingforthesuddenly,hespottedthegirl,againstafrontofterminal・Sheabsorbed・注意:1.2.3.4.
所续写短文的词数应为左右;应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,段的开头语已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para:Aherwasempty,andDannis----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Para2:girlher.-----------------------------------------------------------------------第二节:读续写Possible1:Para:seatbesideherwasandDannisfeltwaveangeroverhim.“Whereismywallet?”hegirlfrom第页共页
reading,withonherface.Dannisstoodup,glaredshouted,“Youstolemytogirldeadlylookingrestlessthatfailedher.AsilencehunginAbruptly,fromtheseat.Para2:ThegirlranandDannisranwhile,finallyhertheAtexactlythatthemandaboutwhattoexplainitthegirlwithofhead.Afterfurtherthepolicemantookoutwalletittoaddingthatsomeoneitintoilet.Whatamistakemade!Overwhelmedbyguilt,antogirl.(153words)六、读后续具体评价说明评分原则:1.本题总分为分,按5档次给分。2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数少于130,从总分中减去分。4.评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影第页共页
响程度予以考虑。6.如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。各档次的给范围和要求档
次
描
述第五档(2125第四档(1620第三档(1115)
—与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。—内容丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。—所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不会影响意义表达。—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑。—与所给短文融洽度较高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。—内容比较丰富,应用了个以上短文中标出的关键词语。—所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但不会影响意义表达。一比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑。—与所给短文关系较为密切,与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。第页共页
第二档(610第一档(1)0
—写出了若干有关内容,应用了个以上短文中标出的关键词语。—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求,虽有一些错误,但不影响意义表达。一应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。—与所给短文有一定的关系,与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。—写出了一些有关内容,应用了个以上短文中标出的关键词语。—语法结构单调,词汇项目有限,有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,影响了意义的表达。—较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少内容连贯。—与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。—产出内容太少,很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。—语法结构单调,词汇项目很有限,有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达。—缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。金丽衢十二校联考第二节读后续写(满分分)第页共页
阅读下面短文,据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。DawncameAshaftofsunlightreachedintothe4-meter-deep(弹坑),makingthemetalofbombshine.Thewerenumbandtight,Theynottolookathugeofthatappearedthem.Harrysuddenlyseized"Listen!"hewhispered.eyewidenedstrainedtheirears.hearatalkingsoftly.ThewaywenttobutHarryhisovershout/'hehissed(发出嘘声)"We'llblownintoThesoftnearer.ancaptainattopofcrater.talkinga(话筒hisHestoppedtalkingwhenhesawboys."Whatthe..."hesaid,“Whoareyou?
"
Hairyhis"JackandHarryBrown.""Isthatdead?"askedthecaptain.“No:sleeping,"saidHarry.Thecaptainspokeintothemouthpiece(中士,"stoppedandtookabreathbeforehewenton.“Therearetwokidsadogdownhere."thecaptaincroucheddownandstaredcloselyatthebomb.“Don'tmoveanddon'tspeak,"hesaid,"orwe'llallup."Hebeganquietlytohissergeant.weretoostifftoTheydog,tightlyofthe"Iso,"he"It'sthemall"It
!OldTinHat!"TinHatcarryingaladder.Hetheloweredladderintolooseboys."Keepstill,"第页共页
warnedthetop.TinHattotheveryslowly,bystep.Atlast,reachedbottom,withliftedJackonhisback.HarryJackwascarriedup.Ittoanage.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为左右;
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段开头语己为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:WithasuddenfallofTinhalfwayup.Paragraph2:TinHatpulledontohisback,Rafunderhisarm.杭州市学军中学月模拟第二节读后续写(满分25)ItwasaSaturdaycolortheskychanging,firstlightgray,darkandwindheavily,thewereswayingstrongwind.ItbeganSoon,theroadwaswithfromthe第页共页
Insuchastormymothermyfive-year-oldChristopher,toatoyshehadreadaboutinmany,“theadvertisementhadshoutedinfullandflashycolor,“thatwehadtogetahugewarehousetofitthemall!”ChristopherIhavemoreWerantheparkinglot,throughthecoldandbitingrain,asfastaslegscarryWeouroutsidetowiththefrustratingwhichneverwhenwanteditto."Christine!careofyouryoungbrother!“shoutedthetopofhervoice.“Christine!goingtofindtheLegosection(乐高积木区ashipIwant,andIhavedollars!Maybecanbuyit!“Christopherexclaimedandranoffexcitedly.Ionlyhalfheardhim.Itookatowide-eyeddelight,myselfinofthe芭比)World.Iwassomemathheadwhenanclapoffromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatdroppingthedolltofloor.Thelightsflickered(烁)coveringinaofThundertotheilluminatedtheforseconds,frighteningshadowsonmy注意:1所续写的短文的词数应为左右;2.至使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:“Ohno,”Ithought,“WhereChristopher?第页共页
_________________________________________________Para2:“Christine,I’mhere.”___________________________________________________________________答案略浙江省十校联盟10联考第二节:读后续写(满分分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。wasathicksidesamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Aleavestwowanderedhappilyherethere.followed(幼鹿)intoaThedeeritwasatiger'scave.TherebonesofdeadallthenotinsidetheatThedeertryingtoleadheryoungofcavewhensheheardaloudroar.sawtigeratdistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itdangerousgooutofcaveofplan.Thedeerraisedhervoice"MychildrennotIshallcapture(捕捉aforyoutoYouhaveagooddinner."Theheardthesewordsbecamefrightened.He"WhoseisthatvoicefromtheAdangerousanimalisstayingtome.Itodeath."tigerrunfromasfastasA(胡狼)therunningtiger.“Whyareyourunningingreatfear?"theasked.Thetiger"MyafierceanimalisinmyThefortomotheristocapturetiger第页共页
them.So,Iamrunningaway."Thecunningjackalwasnowtheacoward(懦夫).It"Don'tbeNoisoratigerLetusgotogetherfindout.”the"Iwanttoachance.YourunIwillbeleftalonetoSo,IwillnotwithThe"Trustme.usknot(打结ourtogether.Iwillbetoleaveyou."tigertoproposal.Sotiedinaknot.towardsPara.1jackalthetiger___________________________Para.2tigerwashearandhesurethejackalhim._______1.
注意:2.3.4.5.
所续写短文的词数应为左右;应使用至少5以上短文中标有下划线的关键词;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。第页共18页
之江教育联盟第一次联考第二节读后续写(满分分)阅读下面短文,据所给情节进行续写使之构成一个完整的故事。troublefailtoinsocialsituations.I'manurseusechildreninmycommunity,tothemthewayonlyadogcan.IthoughtbacktodayI'dfirstbroughtBellatoThatmorninginJanuary,teacherustoaroom.“Sallyhasn'tspokenherhomeintwoyears,"shetoldme.parentshavetakenhertodoctors,nothinghasAgirljusteyesbrightenedwhenshenoticedmy“ThisisBellaIsaid.“Shedoestricks.Wouldyouiketosee?"nodded.IwithBellalaydownthenrolledeyeslitup.ISallyhandsignalsforvariouswasawithbecausesherelywordherself.Bellasensedthatresponded.toputthroughallonherown.Icouldhersureoftimemet.morninginMarchshewaswithItiny第页
a,“Gooddog."Sallydidn'ttakehereyesoffBella,butIwantedjumpforjoy.Sallyaeachweek,first,butthentome.Later,shestartedgivingvoicecommandsherhandsignalsherNow,five-year-oldSallyinfrontofkindergartenclass,withmytrainedcalmlybyAlltheofclassmateswereonTheywereforherspeak.ItwasJune-onlyofschoolleftbutheardvoice.Not注意:1.2.3.4.
所续写短文的词数应为左右;至少使用5短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Butnotzuordcameout._______________________________________________Paragraph2:,shemeshewantedtry,upatme第页共18页
嘉兴市2019年9月高三教学测第二节:概要写作(满分分)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇词左右的内容概要。Didyouknowthatofdogs?That'sover75gettingafaithfulcompanion,theseprovidemanythatcantrulylifeforyouranddogsneedtodobusinessoutsidesoupandoftenTheaveragedog300minutesperwalking,non-petowner's168FrequentyourbloodreducesyouroffromYourhealththeonlythatgetsbetterwithaYoucanalsoimproveyourmentalwell-being.sufferingfromanxietyithelpfultohaveadoghandhappyprovideassistance.Youfindmanydogsoperatingashelppeopleinstressfulbetter.IfdogisaactiveyoucouldfindtheIfyouyourtoforest,yourtendencysuffernegative(消第页共18页
极的)feelings.AstudydiscoveredthattheofthethatmostactiveyoudealwithcalmsdownwhenyoutimetheThedogownershipyoutobuildhealthyitalsogivesyouthetomakesocial・arewithpeopleyouainterestthereareofwhotodogsafriendlypat轻拍)Alloftheseopportunitieshavenewgreat・Yourdoctormightnotwritedownadogprescription(处方youbecomedogowner;youplentyofhealth・杭州高级中学等五校联考第二节读后续写(满分分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。AyearsItakenapart-timejobinastorethelocalshoppingmall.Frominsidethestore,I’dbegtoseethepeoplebyoutside.anwomaneye.slowunsureshemoved(从容),wasnoinhergestures.elderlywomancomeintothewithayoungerwomanIherdaughter.daughterwasclearlyrollingeyes,huffing(长吁短叹)第页共18页
herwatcheveryfewThefromtheyoungertoticktheDVDsonnearestshelf,obviouslyexpectingtohelp.Aftertheslightesthesitation,IwalkedoverandifIcouldhelpfindsomething.womansmiledatitle(
乱涂乱画的)onofItabittomakeout.Clearlyapersonforitknewalittlemovies,thanofftotheDVDforthewoman,ItowalkmeIwherecouldfindit.LookingIIwantedtoenjoycompanyformovementsremindedmemy,who’dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.AswewalkedalongtheofIintroducedhertodifferentoldtelevisionshows,movies,cartoons,sciencefiction.Thewomanseemedofunrushedcompanyandconversation.WetheIherherchoice.Shesmiledandtoldmeitwasshe’denjoyedwhenshewasherdaughter’sageandthatshehopedshewouldenjoyitmuchaswithofwistfulness一丝渴望,daughtercouldenjoyitwithherownyoungchildren.Then,whentheolderwomanincame,sheinthewithsurenessshedisplayedearlier.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为字左右;2.应使用个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:第页共18页
thecashiertheDVDintoaIwalkedtheyoungerwoman._________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:elderlywomanmoveddeliberateslownesstodaughter第一节:读后续写(分)thecashiertheDVDintoaIwalkedtheyoungerwoman.“Isthatyourmom?Iasked,totellmeitwasofmybusiness.Butsherolledhereyesandsaid,“Yeah.”ItoshowherIwasn’tcriticizing.“Cherishher,”Isaid.Andthenansweredhercuriousexpressionbysaying,“Whenshe’sgone,it’sthelittlemomentslikethisthatcomebackyou.”ItwasImystillandrememberedmomentswhenIsoimpatienttolifemiserable.elderlydeliberateslownessbacktodaughterTogethertheytheirwaytheofvideostoodforsidewaitingthefortheirinthedaughteroverregardedAndslowly,almostsheplacedarmwithapparentlyaroundhermothershouldersandgentlyguidedintodeluge.东阳中学期初检测第二节:概要写作(满分分)第页共18页
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇词左右的内容概要。Highteststhattograduatefromschool.Inyears,however,aofinhavedroppedAlthoughuseforisdownfromahighof27duringtestingcrazepromotedbyNoChildLeftBehind(NCLB).TheappearanceissmallResearchesshowthatexithaveonstudents.A2014reportfoundtestingwasassociatedwithlowergraduationrates,affectedmarketoutcomes,alarmingly,12.5inincarceration(禁)rates.Exitexams,concluded,valuemoststudents.ExittestingreliesfollowingOnethatstandardizedcanserveasakindof“qualitycontrol”forhighschoolgraduates,guaranteeingthatgraduatesareready.Theotherthathaveforin
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