读后续写练习写作指导讲义-高考英语复习备考

读后续写练习写作指导讲义

一、问题导读

1.我打碎朋友的传家宝时，正在做什么？

2.听说打碎的是传家宝后，我的心情是怎么样的？

3.我预想的朋友妈妈的反应是什么？

4.在续写情节中如何使用“酸奶〃这一事物？

5.真实情况下朋友的妈妈的反应是什么样的？

6.为什么Missi/smom会作出这样的反应呢？

7.通过这个故事我们可以学会什么样的道理？

二、续写题目

Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantlyrecognizable.TdbeentellingmybestfriendMissia

sillystoryandhadspunaroundinthelivingroomwhenIheardthatsoundandfroze.

WhenIlookeddownatthecarpet,itwascoveredwithpiecesofsparklingred,pinkand

clearglass.Missisaid."Oh,no,notthevase/

“Why?WhatdidIdo?"Myfacereddened.

“Abby,thatglassvasewasoneofthefewitemsmyrelativesbroughtwhentheycameto

America/Missirepliednervously.z/lfyou'dbrokenanythingelseintheapartment,Iwould've

gladlysaidIdidit.Butyou'regoingtohavetotellmymomthatitwasyourfault,andshe'sgoing

tobereallymad.”

Iwasterrified.Tddestroyedapricelessfamilyheirloom（传家宝）.WhydidIhavetospin

aroundlikethat?

Wegathereduptheshatteredpieces.Ikeptsayingthatmaybeitcouldbefixed,butMissi

saidgentlyitdidn'tlookpossible.Iinsistedwekeepthepieces.Theglasswassofragile,likea

colorful,swirlylightbulbhadexploded.Someofitbrokeevenmoreaswetriedtosweepitup

carefully.

Missisaidherrnoniwouldbehomebysix.Myslorriachwasinknots.Wouldhermornyell

atmeorpunishme?WouldshetellmeIcouldn'tstayintheirapartmentfortheweekend?I

couldn'tstopplayingthefifteensecondsoverinmymind,mespinningfastandthesoundof

glasscrashing.TheonlythingIcouldthinkoftosaywas"I'msorry/

Acoupleofminutesaftersixweheardakeyturninthedoor.Hermomwashome.Right

fromthestart,wecouldseeshewasinagoodmood."Hello!It'shottoday.Iwanttotreatyou

girlstothatfrozenyogurtIknowyoulike,let'sgo!"hermomsaid.Shepointedattheopendoor.

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注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:"Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething"Isaid.

Paragraph2:Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.

三、原文情节和续写故事走向

的悚慨大度.

四、问题解答

1.我打碎朋友的传家宝时，正在做什么？

我在朋友家的客厅玩耍，转圈。

2.听说打碎的是传家宝后，我的心情是怎么样的？

充满恐惧，懊悔。不肯相信事实。

3.我预想的朋友妈妈的反应是什么？

会惩罚我，向我吼，并且不会再让我在她家玩耍了。

4.在续写情节中如何使用“酸奶〃这一事物？

在解释完后，朋友的母亲并未生气，反而继续请我吃酸奶，让我安心。

5.真实情况下朋友的妈妈的反应是什么样的？

她很开心地笑了。

6.为什么Missi'smom会作出这样的反应呢？

她看出“我〃恐惧的心理，并且理解娥〃的心情。不愿意让一些已经无法弥补的事情来困

扰我。

7.通过这个故事我们可以学会什么样的道理？

在他人真诚道歉时，适时原谅，让他人安心。

五、情节构思和细节补充

Breakinganheirloom

我的心理

期次的反应

描述经过

表达歉意

我的举止

4■悦开心

安慰我

享用我奶

晚上发生的事

我放下心

慷慨的重要学到的道理

六、下水作文：

Paragraph1:

“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething“Isaid./zSurelyit'snotsomethingsoimportant

thatwecan'ttalkitoutovertheyogurt/hermomsmiled.Butwiththecrashsoundstillechoing

inmyhead,Iwasjustnotinthemoodforanydessert.zTmsorryIhaveruinedyourbeautiful

day/Iconfessedinavoicebarelyabovewhisper.Holdingtheshatteredpieces,Ibracedmyself

foranyhdn>hwordsfromIheconfusedlady,explainingwhalhadhappened.(73w)

Paragraph2:

Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.Sheruffledmyhair

andsaidsomethingcompletelyunexpected,“Finally,someonehelpedmegetridoftheugly

vase!Now,it'sthesnacktime!”Thefrozenyogurtwasareallifesaveronthathotday,justlike

thekindlady'scuringsmiletomyjitteringheart.Yearslater,mythoughtsstilldriftbacktothat

evening-Missis'smomcomfortedmewithherradiantbeamandabearhug.Nowwhenever

someonemakestheirheartfeltapologytome,Ialwaysrememberthegenerosityofferedtome

andmakesureIrespondrightly.(92w)

七、参考范文

Paragraph1:

Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething/Isaid."Wecantalkattheyogurtplace/her

momsmiled.MNo.Ineedto:ellyounow.Itzsimportant/Iinsisted.Icouldfeelmyvoiceshaking

andtriednottocry.Z/Whatisit,dear?"shegentlyasked,closingthedoorandwalkingcloserto

me.Ourhandsalmosttouched.Withhereyesstudyingme,myheartbeatfaster."I'msorry/I

blurtedout./zl...IwastalkingandlaughingwithMissiwhenIspunaroundandaccidentallybroke

thevase."Ifurtherexplainedthatwesavedthepiecesbuttriedinvaintofixit.Itstilllookedlike

smallpiecesofglass.(105w)

Paragraph2:

Hearingmyapology,Mssi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.Sheembracedme,

kissingmeonbothcheeks."Oh,thankyou!Ialwayshatedthatuglyvase.Nowit'sgone!You've

donemeahugefavor!”hermomexclaimedwithdelight.Althoughrelievedtohaveapologized,I

wasstillinshock,forthiswasnotatallthereactionIhadexpected.Itwasn/tuntilIreachedmy

adultyearsthatIrecognizedwhataprofoundgifthermother'sgenerosityinwelcomingmy

apologywas.Now,whenIreceiveagenuineapology,Ialwaysconsiderthepeople'sfeelingsand

makesuremyresponseshowsthemtheirapologywasfullyheardandtrulyappreciated.(103w)

八、词句积累

请找出以下中文对应的英文表达。

（一）

1.玻璃碎掉的声音立刻就能被听出。Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantly

recognizable.

2.在客厅里四处转圈：spinaroundinthelivingroom

3.我的脸红了：myfaceredden

4.收集起碎片：gatheruptheshatteredpieces

5.小心翼翼地扫起来：sweepitupcarefully

6.我的胃打结了：Mystomachisinknots.

7.玻璃摔碎的声音：thesoundo