高考英语读后续写模板

高考英语读后续写实用模板

一、读后续写第一自然段

第1句：情感描写，使用情感万能句：

sb.feltagreatsenseof+'情绪名词+wellingupinsb'sheartand

surgingthroughsb.表示“某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾、奔涌。”

【分析】wellup表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”

以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。

surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句wellingupinsb'

sheartandsurgingthroughsb.,把情绪的描写形象化,具体化了。

表示情绪的名词：

①表示高兴

delight高兴,joy高兴、relief欣慰，

②表示激动

excitement兴奋surprise/amazement惊讶

③表示伤心失望

sorrow悲伤grief悲伤disappointment失望depression/

frustration沮丧sadness哀伤annoyance烦恼

④表示害怕

fear/scare/fright/horror/terror

⑤表示生气

anger/rage愤怒

⑥表示忧虑

anxiety、worry,concern着急tension紧张

⑦其他类

guilt内疚，shame,羞耻satisfaction满足、puzzlement迷惑，regret

后'悔,puzzlement/confusion困惑tiredness/exhaustion疲惫

embarrassment尴尬gratitude感激relief如释重负shame羞愧

练习1：Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。

Sunnyfeltagreatsenseofhorrorwellingupinherheartand

surgingthroughher.

练习2：Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中升腾，奔涌。

Jessicafeltagreatsenseofdelightwellingupinherheartand

surgingthroughher.

第2句：细节描写，使用非谓语结构,

⑴doingA,主语+谓语B(主语+谓语A,doingB)

Burningwithanger;heglaredatmewithhisfrighteningeyes,

yelling,uYou'resuchanidiot.",

(2)HavingdoneA...,主语+谓语B已经某人.....

Havingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthatthetickethadbeen

soldout.

(3)doneA,主语+谓语B,doingC

Encouragedbytheteacher,Lucyraisedherhand,whispering,a\

wanttohaveatry.”

第3句：细节描写，使用with复合结构

Jennywalkedslowlytothefront,withherlegstremblingandher

heartbeatingfast.

Heturnedaround,withtearsrolling/streamingdownhischeeks.

Thegirlstoodthere,shivering/tremblingwithcold,withdirtonher

faceandhair.

第4句：细节描写，使用倒装句

Nosoonerhadsbdonethansbdid

第1句：情感描写，使用独立主格（with）+n+doing,一句话

例如:l.Tearsstreamingdownmyfaceandblurringmyvision,Iwas

thrownintotheabyss（：集渊）ofgriefandsorrow.

2.Laughterbubbling（洋溢，涌起）upinsidehim,herantowardshis

mother;

第2句：结局，使用Notuntil结构

［原句］Thevillagersdidn'trealizehowseriousthepollutionwas

untilallthefishdiedintheriver.

［改写】

Notuntilallthefishdiedintheriverzdidthevillagersrealize

howseriousthepollutionwas.

第3句：所感

Exhausted/tired/coldasiwasjfeltmytimeandeffort

worthwhile,forIhavemademyowncontributiontoXXX.

第4句：所悟

Fromthisexperience/storyjhavelearnedthat/wecanlearnthat

①XXXmightgoaway,butYYYendures

©hardshipmightexist,butYYYendures

第5句：难忘

Thatday/experiencewassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmy

memoryforever.

补充：可以在句子前面，适当的加上过渡词，来表示时间、地点

和逻辑，使整篇的文章更加的立体丰富。

(1)immediately,

(2)Withouthesitation

(3)Afterashortwhile,afterthat,then

(4)Onarrival

(5)Twohourslater

(6)Atthesightofwhathadhappend

(7)Withalltheworkalone

(8)However;instead

高考模拟试题续写练习

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

Mrowwwwl!ThecatmeowedangrilyassheclawedatJennifer's

arm,drawingathinlineofblood.Justasquicklyasshestruckoutwith

herclaw,theagile（灵活的）orangeand-whitecatleapedbacktoher

hidingspaceunderJennifer'sbed.Fromthedarknessunderneaththebed,

twogreeneyesproducedbrightlight,staringbackoutatJennifer.

Jenniferwasstartingtofeeldiscouragedinamajorway.Shewas

neveroneforgivingup;butithadbeenseveraldayslikethissinceshe

adoptedthecat-Darla—fromtheanimalshelter,strugglingtowinover

theyoungcat'saffectionthroughtreatsandsoftandgentlewhispers.It

wasduringhersummerbreak,soshehadplentyoftimetokeeptryingto

winovertheanimal.Butitwasn'ttimethatwastheissue-itwas

Jennifer'semotionsthatwerequicklyfading.

IthadbeentwoyearssinceJennifer^belovedbrowntabby（斑

猫）-Marlin-passedaway.Shenevercouldquitegetovertheshockand

emptinesswhichremainedinherheartherechildlikejoyoncethrived.

MarlinhadbeenJennifer'sfaithfulfriendandlovingcompanionroughall

thepainsandtrialsofgrowingup.AfterMarlindied,thingswerenever

quitethesameagainforJennifer.Itwasthefirstrealdeathtopierce

Jennifer\heartandsignaledtheendofhercarefreechildhood.

ShedesperatelywantedDarlatoloveherthewayMarlinhadandfor

eetoloveDarlajustthesame;butwhatwasJennifersupposedtodonow?

Thecutonherarmwasallshehadtohowforhereffort.Jennifersaton

thefloor,buryingherfaceinherhands,andherbodytrembledasshe

softlybegantocry.

汪意：

1续写词数应为150左右

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

参考范文（模板书写）：

Afterafewminute,Jennifernoticedastrangefeeling-fur.

第1句情感描写：Jenniferfeltagreatsenseofdelightwellingupin

herheartandsurgingthroughher.

第2句细节描写：HavingstaredatDarlaforaminute,sheraisedher

headandkeptsilentforawhile.

第3句细节描写：Nosoonerhadshemadeattempttoapproachthe

littlecreaturethansherealizedthatshewasthepersonwhoneedcomfort.

第4句台山节描写：Sheturnedaround,withtearsstreamingdownher

cheeks.

第5句过渡句：WhenshewasawareofDarla'ssign