高考英语作文如何展开观点

1、Task Writing-How to develop a paragraph in an exposition or argumentation?,Learning aims,1) 2),学生的压力来源 Sample 1 Maybe someone will ask why the students should relax. As a student, we must do the homework everyday, and deal with schoolwork. For example, Whats more, we feel lots of pressure from studi

2、es.,是否该建此墙 Sample 2 Some students think the stress wall should be built, because they have stress. They may feel pressure from parents, teachers and even themselves.I agree to build the stress wall. Students can relax themselves and take away stress in this way. Sample 3 Obviously, the wall should b

3、e built. It can not onlybut also. However, problem cant be solved in such a simple way.,理想的大学生活。（2008广东高考） Sample 4 After finishing my high school life, I am preparing myself for college life. I am so excited and I also looking forward to the college life. So I imagine much about it. The college lif

4、e will be wonderful and free.,Skills： Put it at the very beginning. State directly and clearly what youre going to write.,a.学生的压力来源 (梁清华)Its obvious that most of students feel a lot of pressure from study or other reasons. /Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their s

5、chool work as well as peers relationship.,How to write a topic sentence?,b.是否该建此墙？ (欧阳泳仪) As I see it, the stress wall should be built for the following reasons. C.理想的大学生活（2008广东高考） I hope to have a happy and colorful life in the college.,1）直接回答要点,Practice 1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法 （2010广东高考） 2). 你赞同熬夜的做法吗？

6、请简述原因。,1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学校的看法 （2010广东高考） When it comes to the way to encourage children to study by giving money, I dont agree with it.,2) 你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。(为什么) I dont support staying up late for the following reasons. I am strongly against staying up late because it does great harm to our health. At pre

7、sent its a universal phenomenon that many students stay up late at night. My attitude toward this is negative and the reasons for this are not far to seek. ,2）重述要点 a.学生压力的来源 (刘婉钗)Nowadays, many students are living under stress. b.其它减压方法 (郑碧君) Besides, there are many other ways to release our stress.

8、 c.中学生活与大学生活的差别（2008广东高考） （何婷婷）In my opinion, college life will be quite different from that in high school.,How to write a topic sentence?,Practice 1). 请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊 2). 谈谈独立的重要性。 3). 我们该如何践行低碳生活？,1) 请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊。 E-books have both advantages and disadvantages. E-books have mor

9、e advantages than disadvantages. I think the advantages of E-books outweigh their disadvantages. Although E-books have many advantages, they are not without（不无） their disadvantages. ,2).谈谈独立的重要性。 (Inspired by the story,) I suddenly realized the importance of independence. /Nobody will deny that inde

10、pendence plays a very important part in our life. 3). 我们该如何践行低碳生活？ As a student, we can do many things in our campus to live a low-carbon life. /In order to live a low-carbon life, some measures should be taken. What should we do to live a low- carbon life as students? I think the answers are as fol

11、lows.,(说明必要、重要或意义),(怎么做),Write out the following sentences (as many as you can), Topic sentences to show necessity/importance/significance Topic sentences to show what to do Topic sentences to show reasons, Topic sentences to show necessity/importance/significance：,Sth. is necessary/important /signi

12、ficant to sb. It is. necessary/important / significant/ for sb. to do sth. Sth. plays a very important part/role in The significance of cannot be overvalued., Some topic sentences to show what to do,We should take effective measures to Some measures must be taken to prevent this from happening. Its

13、time for the government to do something to improve the condition. We can solve the problem by the following methods. ., Some topic sentences to show reasons,There are many reasons for this. We have good reasons to believe that The reasons why are not far to seek. . because the advantages are enormou

14、s for everyone concerned. Many reasons account for ,How to write supporting sentences,1)解释原因 是否该建此墙？ In my opinion, the practice of building a stress wall, which the students can hit, is not appropriate. This may lead students to solve a problem with violence or develop a bad temper.,2)逐条列举 你认为建设绿色校

15、园应该采取哪些措施? (主题)In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken. (列举)For one thing, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing harm to our green campus. For another, students should take some classes to enhance their awareness.,3) 举例说明 督促学生认真学习的其他办法(20

16、11佛山一模) There are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job. Besides, students can be divided into groups to compete with each other so that we will work harder.,Skills： 运用罗列要点或举例的方法从不同 方面展开; 要点一般为2-3个; 注意衔接，恰当使用连接词。,How to write

17、the supporting sentences?,In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing harm to our green campus. For another, students should take some classes to enhance their awareness.,A good paragraph

18、usually include: the topic sentence(主题句) supporting sentences(说明或支持主题句的拓展句) the coherence(连贯),Summary,Some connective words,1）first, second, third, last 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3）to start with to begin with, next, then, furthermore, finally 4） first of all, besides, in addition, whats

19、more, last but not least 5）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于相对立的两点的情况） 6） for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况） ,Practice makes perfect!,Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale wildlife park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaini

20、ng. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept walking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. Thats right-sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy. The reason Jackie and her

21、fellow koala are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged or photographed by tourists, who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off in dozen times and some round, furry creature smelling of gras