2021秋季短文改错-学生版

17课标一

Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.

Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtI

hadlearnedtheinstructor'sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.

Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,

“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardly

tellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostop

thecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.

17课标二

Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,

andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,

theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopof

theirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhave

alsoboughtfbrsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeuseful

informationsfromtheinternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudents

pickthefreshvegetables!

17课标三

WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihad

grownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutone

monthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschooland

becomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethe

thingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusical

instruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpop

music,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktome

manyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.

16课标一

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,

buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersat

mealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekey

tohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhigh

qualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrich

intheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

16课标二

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtodo

duringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwe

stayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthat

case,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroaden

youviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggest

wecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnot

costmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.

16课标三

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywere

alsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverything

andcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidntseemtothink

such.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfelt

myparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.I

showedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometo

college.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturn

towheneverneedhelp.

16四川

ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival,it'spopularinChina

now.

Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisa

greatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.Wegetup

earlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.When

hecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthe

sittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom's

favoritiest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother'sDay!”Momwasgrateful

andmoving.

16浙江

WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeI

rememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we'd

greetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.

Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandthey

wouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysister

andmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeup

there!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.

15课标一

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.

NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairis

cleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentof

industrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeen

shownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairs

webreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.We

mustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we'Hliveto

regretit.

15课标二

Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasvery

crowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathe

quicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturned

aroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbegunto

cry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminutes

later,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwere

terribleworried.Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

15浙江

Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremade

fromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Onthe

left-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,it

wasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalso

splendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaround

them.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.

Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedrivers

inhurryinthemorning.Thepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefelt

likeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwill

neverforgetit.

15陕西

Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhim

athisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecide

toaskherfbrhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoing

mostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.Myonly

mistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.

Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywho

madethemandjoked,"Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreof

thesebiscuits.9,

Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswith

happylaughter!

15四川

Hi,Janice,

It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewith

yousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.

AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogether

duringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraoke

bars.IfsbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedto

seethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'm

afraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,

wouldyoutalktohim?

Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.

Grace

14课标一

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandI

plantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden.Sincethen—forall

theseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.As

result,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicy

andtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.

Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwe

haveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfully

tomatoesatnocost!

14课标二

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethree

lessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomany

homework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.For

example,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehour

everyday.

Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersand

treesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatby

thelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenot

onlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

14辽宁

DearJeremyandAlice,

Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we'rehopingto

settlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog-Cleo.

We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficultto

understandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarking

havebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleo

tendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingeven

before5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.

Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigurea

goodwayofsettlingthematter.

Sincerely,

JackandRose

14四川

Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddo

whenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwait

yourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don't

panicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthe

firefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ififsafalsealarmandthereisnofire,

yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneis

missingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.

14陕西

MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.He

wantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwith

bowsandarrowsfbrhunting.

Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthena

birdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowson

thebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdown

atusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!Werantoescapebutfortunatelyno

onewasinjured.

ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearnta

impressivelessonaboutgravity!

14浙江

IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthe

carriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.

Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassenger

realizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthe

carriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveral

rowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathis

success.

Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-owner

before.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshow

concerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.

13课标一

Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesand

singoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistant

memoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,with

broadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.He

hadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewas

strongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringthey

cameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanI

haveneverknown.

13新课标二

ThebookI'mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohave

startedintheearly1800's.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetween

lunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o'clockatnight.Thiscustom

soonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritish

porcelain（瓷器）industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithout

handles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcup

withhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.

13浙江

DearDiary,

HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Do

youwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMom

explained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone."HisnewjobmeantIhadtosay

goodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.To

makemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.

Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI'llneverfall

sleep.

Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommy

pastlifeandmyonlyfriend.

Yours,

Rosemary

13辽宁

Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtime

withhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorning

tillnightHardworkhavemadehimveryill."Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weare

worriedabouthim."Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,Ipaid

visittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.I

hadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,

lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedus

justasmanyaswemissedhim.

13四川

Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,butItriedhardlyto

doit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.

Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofus

werecalledtotheteacher'soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsame

answersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtosee

ourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn'tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend.Why

doesshepunishme?

13陕西

MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.

OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesand

headedfbrthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.

Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwanted

togiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewere

asuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,my

grandfatheralsocaughtafish.

Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwas

delicious.

12年课标卷

IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.From

thetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwas

happywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.

Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhich

washappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,

“That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou."Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,I

foundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechanged

fromthenon.

12年辽宁

DearDiana,

Thankyoufbrthelovelydaywehavewithyou.Itwassokindforyoutoletus

bringAnne'sfriend,Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.

Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,fbraresult,therewasa

longlineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestation

andwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygot

knockedover

ascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoff

atherparents9andmadeourownwaytohome.

Mylove,

Fiona

12陕西

MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelfbraweekwhenwevisitBeijing

lastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthe

hotelbypublictransport.

Welivedinacomfortablydoubleroomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwere

thefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessages

everyday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefood

waswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.

ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoing

toBeijing.

12浙江

Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,I

hadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwo

week.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.Iknewthat

theywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmy

motherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,Itoldtheminterestedstoriesand

howIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatit

wastherightthingtodo.

11课标一

Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuya

tickettoHangZhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgoto

Xiamenforlongholiday.Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybag

fromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.LuckilyIhadallmy

moneyonmypocket,buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.Itfeltvery

strangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelentto

melotsofclothes.IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.

17济南一模

StudyingintheUKhavebeenagoodexperienceforme.WhenIfirstarrived,

IfindlifeveryhardasIdidn'tknowanybodyhere,butIsoongottoknowother

Chinesestudentattheuniversity.LaterIbecameinterestingincommunicatingwith

peoplefromvariouscultures,andImadefewerfriends.

Duringmystudy,Ichosetoliveinwithmyclassmatesinthedormitory.I

thinkit'sbetterthanlivinginBritishfamilybecauseIcanmeetpeoplefromdifferent

countrieseasy.Thecourseshereareexcellent.Ienjoythewaytheteachersgive

lessons.Weareencouragedtothinkforyourselves,whichisquitedifferentfrom

thatIhaveexperiencedbefore.

17济南二模

DearRose,

Howareyougettingalongwith?IknowyouwantfindajobinBeijing.I

readanadinthenewspaper,whichsaysthatBeijingLadderInstitutehasanEnglish

courseofchildrenandgrown-up.Theyneedanative-speakerEnglishteacher,

whomusthaveanuniversitydegreeineducationoranotherrelatedfieldsanda

foreignexpertcertificate.Ithinkyouaretherightpersontheywanted.

Iftheyareinterestedinit,pleasedirectcallorwritetotheInstitute.The

telephonenumberis086theFaxnumberis086

buttheire-mailaddressisLHceby@.

Goodluck.

Yours,

Joanna

16年济南3月一模

DearSteven,

I'mgladthatyouarecomingtoBeijingthissummervacation.Youaskedmany

questioninyourletter,andnowletmeanswerthem.

Tostartwith,Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isveryattractivecitywitha

longhistory.YoucanfoundallkindsofdeliciousfoodinBeijing,ofthatthemost

famousistheroastBeijingduck.Ihopewewillenjoyit.Besides,thereisa

greatnumberoftouristattractionsworthvisiting,suchastheGreatWall,the

SummerPalaceortheForbiddenCity.Thesescenicspotshaveattractedmillionsof

touristsinthisyear.IpromiseyouwillhaveawonderfullytimehereinBeijing.

I'mlookingforwardtohearfromyouassoonaspossible.

Yours,

LiuChao

16年济南二模

Afewdaysagowhentakingthewalkwithmymotherinthepark,Icame

acrossaforeigner.Judgedbyhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemightinneedof

help.SoIwentupandaskedwhetherIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehe

hadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveralpasser-byforhelp,andtheycouldn'tspeak

English.Thenhetoldmehisdestination.Fortunately,Iwasquitefamiliartothe

place.Inordertomakemyselfunderstand,Itoldhimhowtogothereasclearas

possible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatIhavetalkedtoaforeignerfacetoface,

hetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthankedforme.

16济南高三针对性训练

Ipaidavisittoaseniormiddleschoolinlastweek.It'sabigschoolwitha

beautifulfountaininthecenteroftheschoolyard.

Westartourvisitfromthemainbuilding.Firstwewenttothelabbuildingthat

somestudentsweredoingexperiments.Thenwevisitedlecturehallbehindthelab

building.Theremanystudentswereattendingalecturegiventoaprofessor.

Oppositetothelecturehallweretheartcenter.Inthecenterwesawagroupof

studentplayingmusicalinstruments.Finallytheygottotheplaygroundatthefar

backoftheschool.Someboyswerehavingafootballgame.Itwassoexcitedthat

wecouldn'thelpcheerforthem.Itwasreallyanimpressivevisit.

15年济南一模

Beijinghaslotsoffamoustouristattractions.Everyyearmanytouristcome

heretoenjoyitsbeautifulsceneryandrichculture.Butseveralyearsago,visitors

behavebadly.Sometalkedloudlyinpublicandthrewlittereverywhere.Some

pickedflowers,cuttingdowntreesandhurtanimals.Andevenbetter,some

paintedonthewallsandsmokedinthewoods.

Luckily,thingshaschanged.Rubbishisalwaysputintodustbins.People

arefriendlyatanimals.Everybodysmokesinthewoods.Allthesechangesmake

ushappily.Asstudent,Ithinkweshouldknowit'sourdutytoprotectthe

environment.Let'stochangeourbehaviorswhenwetravel.

15年济南二模

MyclassmatesandItakepartinawildnesssurvivalprogramfromJuly10thto

July13ththissummer.Beforewestarted,wegivenacompass,amap,a

first-aidkit,tents,food,anyclothesandsoon.Onthewayweclimbedthree

morehillsandswamacrosstworivers.Welostourwayintheforest.Luckywe

foundtherightdirectionwithacompass.Assoonastheyarrivedatthecampsite,

weputupourtents,madeafireandthenstartedcooking.Wealsolearnedwhatto

givefirst-aid.

Throughtheprogram,welearnedtouseknowledgegaininginclasstosolve

problem.Itwasquiteanunforgettableexperiencefbrme.

17潍坊一模

Lastweekend,IwenttovisitmyEnglishteacher,whowasalreadyinhisfifty.

HegivesmealotofhelpwhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent.Delightingto

seeme,heaskedmyseniormiddleschoollife.Thenheadvisedmetomakefully

preparationsfbrthecomingentranceexamination.Itwassoapleasuretoseehim

againthatIdidn'tnoticeitwasprettylater.Ihadtosaygoodbyetoeachother.

Heisnotonlyagoodteacherbutmyclosefriend.WhereverIwillgo,Iwill

alwaystreasureatimethatIspentwithmyteacher.

17年潍坊二模

DearSir/Madam,

IhavereceivedthesneakersthatIbuyfromyouronlineshop.Withthe

excitement,Iunwrappedthepackagebutfoundsomethingwrongwiththem.So

I'mwritingtoinformyoutheproblems.

First,thecolorofthesneakersthatIwantareredinsteadofblack.Second,

size41istoolargeforthem.Thatannoysmemostisthatthereareseverallittle

stainononeofthesneakers.Theyreallylookawfully.Ifputtinginmysituation,

howwouldyoufeel?

rdliketochangethispairforanewoneandgivemethemoneyback.

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Sincerelyyours,

LinMing

17年潍坊三模

DearEditor,

NowmanystudentshaveiPodsandregardthemastheirmostfavorite.Usean

iPod,wecanlistentomusic,downloadalotoflearningmaterialsandreaditon

thescreen.Apparently,itisgreathelptoourstudy,especialtoourEnglish

listening.

Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPodstoclassroomandlistentomusic

withearphones,whichmakestheteacherandotherstudentsgreatlyannoying.

What'sbad,someofthemevenwasteprecioustimeinclassplayvideogames.

Inmyopinion,classroomisaplacethatstudentsshouldconcentrateinstudy.

Furthermore,somerulesshouldbemadetoguidethestudentstouseiPodproperly.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

16年潍坊一模

Lifeisanmysteryandwewillneverknowthatwhatiswaitingforus.Butone

thingisforsure:problemsareunavoidable.Forus,it'stheprocessofsolving

problemsthathelpusgrow.

Makeaspeechusedtobeabigproblemforme.Withastrongaccentand

terriblypronun